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Published: 2006-09-03 14:27:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2514; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 12
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I tried and failed to submit this earllier today because of DA's said comments issue, but here it is now!
Like I mentioned before the picture wasnt really finished and in no way was i happy with the scan so here it is back and better than before (in a few days ill most likely scrap the older version).
This the other picture I have used all your great critique to work out how it could realy be improved, and finished it off! Ive developed a new refinment technique too which I think has made the image look FAR better on a whole, ill leave it as a deviation just so you can see the change
As mentioned before I used graphite pencils, eraser where neccasary and tissue to smudge.
Comments and
's always appreciated I hope you like her! 
(Oh and I still havent credited the origional artists photo as I dont remember exactly who it wasw, give me a yell and i will immediatly link them with full credit, thankyou)
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That's what I had in mind - I'm glad others can see it in the drawing too thankyou
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Awesome! I love the realism and the angle/position of the model...it is unique and not seen too often...great work!
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Thanks I'm glad you like it!
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love the shading on her bottom half. and the difficult head pose is more than believeable. youre just a bit awesome at this... [link]
Joy
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Thanks heaps ... I appreciate both your kind words and the
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This is really nice, great shading, smooth changes in tone and a lovely artistic pose. I love her!
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Thanks a lot, I'm proud of this picture considering it was my first real attempt at doing most of a figure, I think it turned out ok
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I really admire your pencil work, wish I could do half as good. Keep up the great work!
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Just stunning!!! As someone who is also trying to improve their pencil technique I'm really impressed!
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Thanks I'm flattered you feel that way!
... btw ...
I saw that you play FFXI lol ... what server are you on?
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I hardly get to play anymore 
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Remora I believe ... oh and I don't play a lot anymore either ... just graduated from highschool though so I guess I'll have a lot more time on my hands
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It's so realistic
You are a natural talent!
Faved it
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Hey thanks heaps I'm glad you like it!
Natural talent? I'd like to think so lol 
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Wow, she has an amazingly beautiful body and you've captured the lighting so realistically. Your smudge technique is incredible.
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Hey thanks a lot I'm glad you like her so much, I really appreciate it
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very good shading.. although their seem to be something off with her face.. but overall its a very nice drawing.
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Why thank you, I'm glad you like it!
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Thanks, glad you think so
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Your shading is excellent. Also, good job at giving life to the image and making it look like it has motion.
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Thanks, I'm glad you noticed my efforts to do so!
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put this into a program like photoshop or something, and change the image mode to "grayscale" that'll get rid of the pinkish/purpleish tinge that it has.
really good job on the body! not sure sure about the face, but overall, it looks pretty darn good!
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Thanks heaps, I actually chose to give her th slight tinge of colour, rather than just a monocramatic cover, my other drawings have shown little life simply in grayscale so I thought I'd give it a go at retaining some of the colour. I actually updated another version of this first - this is the update, its a horrible shade of pink but I kept it in my gallery anyways, check that one out and it will be what you just said only ten times worse! 
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lol, its ok. the pink just looks a little un-natural, when you see it up close.
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Yes that's exactly what I mean. No matter what I do to the picture however it will never look as good as on paper!
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agreed. i think every artist feels that way.
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yeh it looks better with the pink taken out!
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hehe glad you think so
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owh you knรณw I luv her 
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Woo so glad you like her, I atleast thought she deserved a makeover and redid it! Looks better than before in my opinion 
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yea 
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Very nice! Most unusual head view. Good anatomy work. The left ribs seem to vanish
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Thanks glad you like it! It makes me glad to hear someone likes my anatomy work because to tell the truth (evident by the rest of my gallery) ive never worked with it before!
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