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Chris000 — Deception: Confrontation

Published: 2010-09-30 01:07:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 712; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 13
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Description Set during the second chapter of my fanfic Deception, The Office of Naval Intelligence comes to collect Captain Vennettilli under suspicion of being an information leak regarding Chaos Emeralds.

Rouge the Bat, who has something close to an acquaintanceship with the Captain, feels as if she's being roped into this somehow and is not thrilled about doing this.

Is it just me, or does she seem a little guilty?

Link to the first chapter: [link]
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Mr-Masculine [2010-09-30 21:38:52 +0000 UTC]

She's going for those emeralds huh........

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Chris000 In reply to Mr-Masculine [2010-09-30 23:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Actually, she's under government contract. She cannot withhold Chaos Emeralds either. Strangely enough, any other monetary sum is fair game.

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Mr-Masculine In reply to Chris000 [2010-10-01 21:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well okay then.

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ARI4PHANTINEXX [2010-09-30 02:29:43 +0000 UTC]

she looks annoyed.

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Chris000 In reply to ARI4PHANTINEXX [2010-09-30 02:31:46 +0000 UTC]

Any way you slice it, she's not happy to be there.

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ARI4PHANTINEXX In reply to Chris000 [2010-09-30 02:32:25 +0000 UTC]

that's obvious she isn't happy.

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Chris000 In reply to ARI4PHANTINEXX [2010-09-30 02:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Verily.

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Colonel-Eviscerator [2010-09-30 01:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Just you, she looks bored to me.

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Chris000 In reply to Colonel-Eviscerator [2010-09-30 02:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Just the angle of her head. I made this in British Lit class. Not a lot of time to make details. Didn't want to get it ripped up or something.

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