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chrisntheboat In reply to ??? [2009-05-08 15:09:55 +0000 UTC]

i have had that happen also most of the time though ..you(meaning me) really need to say the story outloud, so as to see if it has any impact to those who are listening to it..so i market my story to my friends here at the marina and if the concenses is good i finish that part of the storyi dont know if it makes any sense what i am trying to say

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erziban In reply to chrisntheboat [2009-05-08 19:52:39 +0000 UTC]

Yep, I get it... when I write my poetry, I have to read them aloud, just so I can make sure they flow properly, and aren't awkward in their phrasing.

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chrisntheboat In reply to erziban [2009-05-08 19:58:24 +0000 UTC]

yep

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erziban In reply to chrisntheboat [2009-05-08 23:12:23 +0000 UTC]

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davincipoppalag In reply to ??? [2009-05-03 22:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely a fave

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chrisntheboat In reply to davincipoppalag [2009-05-03 23:14:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much David

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davincipoppalag In reply to chrisntheboat [2009-05-03 23:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Welcome Chris

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chrisntheboat In reply to davincipoppalag [2009-05-04 03:38:28 +0000 UTC]

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DefendTheCheese In reply to ??? [2009-05-03 22:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! Favorite!

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chrisntheboat In reply to DefendTheCheese [2009-05-03 23:03:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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