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Published: 2016-08-15 21:29:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 5331; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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Description ***UPDATED*** much happier with Max's face now. Still after feedback if anyone has any; going to put them in a proper scene later.

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This is a WIP so will be updated. Hit that WATCH button :-D

I've never fallen so hard for a game or it's characters since I played Final Fantasy 9 nearly 15 years ago!Ā 
I'm looking for some feedback/critiques on how I can improve the characters. I'm fairly happy with Chloe, but I think Max might need tweaking, and I'd love some "fresh eyes" on the problem.
Custom morphs and shading in Daz 4.8. This is pure IRay, no postwork.
Clothing patterns were baked onto the clothing using PS pre-render.

If you like, please comment and share with your own watchers. I'd really appreciate it.
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Comments: 15

Chanteur-de-Vent [2016-08-23 17:28:40 +0000 UTC]

The left one looks good, the right one looks very weird with those lines around her mouth. Can't exactly point what, but seeing the source material pics I think you can't really speak of a "realistic" morph imitation.Ā 

Don't even start on me missing something by not playing those games. I'm not going to.Ā 

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chrisryder123 In reply to Chanteur-de-Vent [2016-08-24 20:54:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :-D
I won't press is but you really should; very cerebral. You'd like it, similar to chess in that you have to essentially predict the future. Each choice that you make ripples throughout the rest of the game.

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Chanteur-de-Vent In reply to chrisryder123 [2016-08-25 07:38:07 +0000 UTC]

I used to have a long discussion with a friend of mine about whether a strategical computer game and chess are principally different. I should dig up the arguments somewhere if you want to argue.

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chrisryder123 In reply to Chanteur-de-Vent [2016-08-25 08:56:55 +0000 UTC]

On the first playthrough there'd be no difference at all, but once you've beat the game I suppose you sort of know the parameters of the AI, the direction of the story etc- it will diminish.

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Chanteur-de-Vent In reply to chrisryder123 [2016-08-30 17:59:21 +0000 UTC]

You mean like playing chess can be done over and over, while playing the game over and over becomes more boring my the time?

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chrisryder123 In reply to Chanteur-de-Vent [2016-08-31 18:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Exactly. Chess is different every time.

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Chanteur-de-Vent In reply to chrisryder123 [2016-09-01 08:38:41 +0000 UTC]

So chess is better! Eq. I shouldn't play games, when I have chess at my disposal.

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jmb200960 [2016-08-16 22:34:09 +0000 UTC]

This is better. I think the "lines" (Don't know the word in english) from the nose to the mouth corners should not have a double curve like an S, but a simple one like a parenthesis. But I can be wrong there.

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ResidualAnt [2016-08-15 22:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I have absolutely no experience with this type of media, but I agree that Max does need some tweaking. She has a little bit too much cheekbone and her face is a slightly too angular. Overall, she looks great, but her face gives off more of an Aisan-esque build compared to whatever ethnicity she is in the game. Her mouth seems too deep set and closer to her nose than it should be. It's great work though, I really like it!

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chrisryder123 In reply to ResidualAnt [2016-08-16 05:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm gonna try and fix it. Hopefully I'll upload the result today!

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ResidualAnt In reply to chrisryder123 [2016-08-16 07:13:03 +0000 UTC]

No problem, glad I could help some!

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jmb200960 [2016-08-15 21:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic render. I do not know Final Fantasy, so I do not know who is Chloe or Max, but I think the one on the right has a strange face, she seems to wear a kind of mask, or to have some plastic surgery. But maybe it is normal ?

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chrisryder123 In reply to jmb200960 [2016-08-15 22:01:54 +0000 UTC]

These are from "Life is Strange"Ā gametransfers.com/wp-content/u…
You should stop whatever you are doing right now and download/play both "Final Fantasy 9" and also "Life is Strange"
In the game Max has a strange/plain face - I need some help fixing the 'unnaturalness" which bits to change?

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jmb200960 In reply to chrisryder123 [2016-08-15 22:35:27 +0000 UTC]

For myself, I think the mouth is the main problem. She seems to have the mouth too deep in the face, instead of produting a bit. I am not sure I use the right term here, due to my english. Hope you get what I mean.

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chrisryder123 In reply to jmb200960 [2016-08-16 05:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm on it!

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