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Published: 2019-07-03 19:42:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 13630; Favourites: 231; Downloads: 302
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Throwaway playing with DFORCE but I liked it.Enjoy!
1000 Iterations IRAY.
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Every time you get better and Lorelei comes alive a bit more.
Critique...
When I first looked at it, I wondered if the lighting was different because it seemed washed out a little. Maybe something like bokeh settings or the focal point, I dunno. If it were a photograph, I might wonder if it was a touch over-exposed.
The outfit is good, it lays as it should anywhere that you can look closely at it and the texture is very good. The wrinkling around her arm is so good that it could be mistaken for real
The pose and expression are great, you're really getting better at showing more emotion in the face and eyes. Speaking of... The eyes bother me a little. It has to do with the line of the eyelashes and the shadowing around the eyelids nearest the nose. It just doesn't seem quite right.
The most off-putting aspect of the whole piece for me was the hair. It looks like someone rubbed a balloon on her head. The flyaway hairs that are meant to add some randomness and realism to the scene are just too much. They seem to stick out in all directions, and not in a natural way. But, it's not quite enough to detract from the entirety of the composition.
In this, Lorelei is so beautifully imagined, that unless you're looking for errors to critique, you might miss the problems with the hair and other things, but I think fixing some of the things I mentioned might make it even better.
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Thank you! Glad you like it
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Really cute character Chris. Such innocence in her face. Playing with dforce on the shirt? Don't recognize it, but I like it. lo
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Cheers! Yeah the skirt is DForce, but it was getting late and the scene wasn't working for me so most of it has been cut out, but I found this camera angle and just thought I'd snap it.
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aaaah, gotcha! Will you be redoing it so the skirt is showing? Stands on it's own as it is though.
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Probably not. I've already moved on :-p
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What the heck? What critique you want? She is beautiful! And I can add: lovely awesome!)
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Thank you! Really appreciate it
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Have you been hiding her somewhere in your house? She looks absolutely stunning.
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Es una maravilla esa modelo ;D y la textura del la blusa, te quedó fenomeal!!!
Felicitaciones!!!
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Muchas gracias! Realmente aprecio los comentarios. Espero que estés bien mi amigo.
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Gracias! ;D
Sobreviviendo pero bien, por eso no tengo tiempo para comentar más pero como mi vicio es ver muchas imágenes, arte y diseño en general, siempre me vengo a dar una vuelta por acá
Además tu trabajo en 3D y Photoshop es cada vez más detallista y eso me encanta!
Cada vez se nota más que afinas la vista en los detalles de escena, luz, texturas, etc. Me encanta eso!
Mi placer no cumplido es el modelado en 3D pero hay más de una forma de abordarlo... así que ahora descubri un curso gratuito en mi país para aprender el tallado en madera, así que estoy comenzando a aprender y descubrir este mundo ;D
Un abrazo amigo y que la creatividad no se te agote nunca ;D
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I can't find anything to pick on. The anatomy looks correct. Some people fail to get bent limbs to look proper but you have figured even that out. Skin looks good. You got more freckles on the cheeks and face, quite a bit even on shoulders, and less on the rest of the body, like you have. Some people put them only on cheeks (which would be incorrect). The fabrics look like they would have been woven by actual weavers. The hair looks great and she looks really cute. I dunno, ten out of ten. How about that?
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Thank you!! Really appreciate the kind words
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