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CitrusRain — LoT SE pt5: Catch and Release
Published: 2008-10-14 23:27:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 22347; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 89
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"Law of Talos" concept copyrightThis page exposes a real weakness of mine. >.> I can't draw birds. Nor can I spell, so! has volunteered to check my script before I submit it to DA.
Welcome Kiro, to the magic of comic making!
I did promise you guys a page today so, here it is.
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character copyright Karl
character copyright Jumper
page6: [link]
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Who says that you can't draw birds good. I think you draw them very well. Also this had me laughing all the way through. 
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yeah. I made her. she's grown a lot as a character since I first made her for this. I might just do something with her one day.
why do you ask? :3
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Because,She's kinda my favorite character
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Your welcome 
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there's more, ya'know. She has a little adventure with chimbly to.
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oh. I'll see it when I'm done my alfredo and chores.
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You really grab Karl's personality. Jumper is cool too. The dialogue between "mother and child" let some room for speculations.
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..(ffff can't believe i forgot to fave theseee..SHAME ON ME! ) awesome! ^^
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This is my fave page! Great comic...Karl's perfectly...characterized(?)...you got his personality down to a point!
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the end of Karl being in it that is. there's more of Jumpers tale if you click the link next to the words "page6"
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Karl is so cruel! But at the end it made me really think. Nicely done! 
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oh, you're to kind
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I wish I could draw that good.
Or even bother to try.
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well, if you bothered to try, you might draw on your vary own level of good ^w^
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Wow =0 you're doing such a great job with these
very nice =]
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aww shucks. your make'n me blush
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hehe I'm serious 
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I do see some mistakes in the last panel of "sadso" and that bubble #5 should be "sadness"
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Gah! not again! >3<
that reminds me! I still need to switch out page 3 for the corrected one. thanks again for that.
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I hope we could see Karl again. I wonder who's the other contestant you will meet.
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Wow, I was not expecting that. I kinda liked that ending. Fit right in with the both the personality of Karl and with what we have seen of Jumper. Can't wait for the next SE. Wonder who it will be...
Oh yeah, btw, I just thought of something. How does Jumper's shoes and clothes shrink/grow as she does? You would think they would stay the same size.
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I've thought of this to and came up with an answer.
The key to Jumpers size changing is in her cells. Once Jumper has come in contact with something long enough, be it a person or an object, their should be enough dead skin cells on said thing for her to manipulate their size along with her own.
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Woohoo! Oh, one thing I forgot to mention in the note, the title should be 'Catch and Release'.
Again, can't wait for more.
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'Breather'
What a great insult.. only Karl.
Wah! I can't wait to read the rest of her story! please tel me it's not over! >3<;
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Nope! It's not over yet! I'm gunna have her meet another LoT competitor. Your just gunna have to wait and see ^o^
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Oh good. |D
Hm, when this is over, Will we still see more of her story? i'm really starting to like this character. :C
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well, she was just for this tourney thing but, She's kinda growing on my to. we'll see.
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