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I'm a sucker for Hurt/Comfort ficsNot the angst usually, more just of how the worry comes through and worry leads to moments the characters share where they can seem even more amazing and relatable
sadly, I'm not comfortable enough with my writing to actually write or post, so I have to rely on the talent of fanfic writers
This was just a scene I had in my head from a story I'll never have the courage to write, a play with lighting and a different style :/
I wish there was a fic/blerb to go with it
Thank you for listening to me babble
Enjoy~!
Sherlock Holmes (c) Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
This be BBC shit
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Comments: 158
KaitousBlackWings In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-05-19 02:24:50 +0000 UTC]
It's done!
I loved working on it. Hopefully it'll be up real soon!
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espada06 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:34:11 +0000 UTC]
that's more than brilliant! love your style and the way you did his expression
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Cobyfrog In reply to espada06 [2011-05-18 22:16:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~!
You are too kind, I'm glad you like it! 8D
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GrannysKnitting In reply to ??? [2011-04-16 02:10:05 +0000 UTC]
this is wonderful - you have a great amount of talent...
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Cobyfrog In reply to GrannysKnitting [2011-04-17 18:31:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! ;-; you're too kind!
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DayOfTheBethan In reply to ??? [2011-04-13 20:27:53 +0000 UTC]
I have just finished the fic. Would you like me to send it you in a note, or submit it to the group, or what?
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Cobyfrog In reply to DayOfTheBethan [2011-04-13 21:22:55 +0000 UTC]
Whatever you would like! as long as I get to read it >:3
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dreamweaver11 In reply to ??? [2011-04-11 23:57:25 +0000 UTC]
this is really good! now i wanna read the fic it goes to...
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Cobyfrog In reply to dreamweaver11 [2011-04-12 08:08:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! 8D
>///< Maybe some day!
Others are in the works of writing something for it though! 8D
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dreamweaver11 In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-13 04:28:05 +0000 UTC]
awesome! hopefully they'll post in the clubs & i'll get to read some of them!
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Cobyfrog In reply to dreamweaver11 [2011-04-15 18:21:42 +0000 UTC]
There's already one in there! 8D
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dreamweaver11 In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-16 02:18:58 +0000 UTC]
i know, i found it! it was really good too
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dragontamer363 In reply to ??? [2011-04-11 19:12:30 +0000 UTC]
Pretty And nice lighting too - it makes a subtle contrast.
And here's a little something for you. apologies if it's crap, i made it up on the fly XD
Find me.
Sherlock willed John with those words, the sentiment startling even himself. It was weighed with a sort of desperation and dedication that he didn't think he was capble of: the emotion of a hand grasping for another, to actually want and need another human being. Now, with John so impossibly far and yet in a place so familiar that his mind knew it perfectly and could dissect every detail and reconstruct it again, it felt like he was close enough to touch and yet separated by a chasm miles across.
He knew what he would be doing. John was a creature of routine. He could visualise the way he would move to get a drink of tea, the way he raised up ever so slightly on his tiptoes to reach the handle of the overhead cupboard to draw out the teabags. There woudl be 16 left in there by now. One slightly torn at one corner, just waiting to catch John out and spill it's contents to float uselessly on top of the hot water. John always noticed it but never bothered to discard it and always forgot about it until his next visit. Sherlock observed the little habit with a bemusement. He didn't understand how anyone could just forget something like that. He hoped that John wouldn't forget him.
This really wasn't what he had planned.
Usually his plans went well.
He flexed his fingers and glanced down at the blood pouring freely form his side. he observed with his usual detachment how warm the blood felt but how cold the wound was, how the pain had faded somewhat but for the throbbing awful sense of wrongness his body transmitted to his increasingly foggy brain. He felt quite calm. That was good, he thought. He wanted to pay attention. This was a good experiment in itself, if he survived it. he swallowed, throat dry and shifted his legs, the tiny effort exhausting and flaring up a new pain. If.
He belitted himself for his foolishness, slumping back against the wall, feeling the flow of blood spread and continue. He tried to structure it within his own knowledge of anatomy and deduce what the knife had hit on it's way in to cause such bleeding. he found that his mind was sluggish, unable to conjure up the memory. Once upon a time the drugs he had taken so regularly did the same. he had welcomed that. Now, his inability to think actually frightened him.
He was cold. And he was tired. And the case was not done yet.
Somewhere, out there, he imagined John stirring a broken tea bag around and around, spilling tea leaves like Sherlock was spilling blood.
The image kept with him as the fog took over his mind, his head lulling to the side as unconsciousness descended.
Suddenly he felt a warm rough palm at his face, tugging him around to face the stranger. He opened his heavily lidded eyes with effort. he tried to make sense of the jumble of features.
"Sherlock! Sherlock, stay with me."
John. He was found.
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Cobyfrog In reply to dragontamer363 [2011-04-11 22:17:18 +0000 UTC]
D:
That Was Beautiful!
The tea analogy was a brilliant idea, and the attention to John's movements set a perfect picture! (The little part about him standing on his tiptoes made me actually giggle!) I couldn't ask for anything better!
Thank you so much! This was amazing You just made my day!
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dragontamer363 In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-12 01:16:04 +0000 UTC]
aww I'm glad you liked it
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UniversalOpera [2011-04-11 18:52:29 +0000 UTC]
Sherlock! NO!!!! *sob*
TO MY WRITING PROGRAM!
Well done, by the way.
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Cobyfrog In reply to UniversalOpera [2011-04-11 22:05:14 +0000 UTC]
AND AWAY~! THE GAME IS AFOOT! But please come back! 8D
Thank you!!
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moonagedaydreaming [2011-04-11 15:23:40 +0000 UTC]
AAAARGGH the awesoness of this is making my brain implode!! It's so good!
As I too am a sucker for hurt/comfort fics I'm dying for a fic to this picture!!!!! Luckily, this picture is so delicious that I will probably survive by staring at it for some hours...
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Cobyfrog In reply to moonagedaydreaming [2011-04-11 22:06:40 +0000 UTC]
Aww you are too kind! 8D Thank you!
oooooh >///< Such kind words! DX
Thank you so much!
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-12 00:36:44 +0000 UTC]
YOU'RE BEING TOO SLOW, HURRY IT UP!!! PSYCHOSOMATIC LIMPS ARE NO EXCUSE!!!
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-12 08:10:25 +0000 UTC]
DAMN IT MAN! NOW IS NOT THE TIME TO ACTUALLY LISTEN TO YOUR THERAPIST!
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-12 13:30:08 +0000 UTC]
YOU SHOULD HAVE FIRED HER, THE ONLY GOOD THING THAT CAME OUT OF THOSE STUPID SESSIONS WAS YOUR BLOG!!!!! NOW STOP DAWDLING AND RUN GOD DAMMIT RUN!!!
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-13 17:37:59 +0000 UTC]
AMEN TO THAT BLOG! 8D BUT NOW IS NOT THE TIME TO THINKING OF WRITING OR YOU'LL HAVE TO WRITE ABOUT SOMETHING VERY SAD!!!!
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-13 20:02:23 +0000 UTC]
IT WOULD MAKE A VERY DEPRESSING BLOG POST, AND WE DON'T WANT THAT, WE WANT A POST DESCRIBING ABOUT HOW YOU SAVED SHERLOCK BY FINDING HIM!!! BUT NOT NOW!! AFTER YOU HAVE SAVED HIM!!! WRITE IT IN THE GOD DAMN AMBULANCE IF YOU REALLY MUST, OR AT THE HOSPITAL, JUST MAKE SURE HE LIVES!!!!
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-13 21:58:33 +0000 UTC]
NOW GO MAN GO! BE A DOCTOR!!!!! THAT'S WHAT YOU DO NOW DO IT!!! FIND THE POOR HALF DEAD DETECTIVE!!! OH GOD THE HUMANITY!!!!! THE STRESS!!! THE EPIC SHADING!!!!!
oh look, You found him :>
someone wrote a fic XD
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-13 22:00:29 +0000 UTC]
THE STRESS IS UNBEARABLE!!
*Runs off to read the fic*
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-14 00:31:35 +0000 UTC]
Here, I'll get you a link!
[link]
oh and another person wrote a short one in the comments of the picture^^ Its really good too!! *-*
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-14 00:47:15 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh thanks, I tried looking, but I kinda fail at stuff like that
That is one goood fic, better than mine on fanfiction at least, but I can never write serious stuff, so I'm glad someone who can actually WRITE took over this
Once again, cheers for the link
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-15 18:22:24 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem bud^^
Aw I would love to read some of your work! 8D
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-15 18:58:18 +0000 UTC]
Haha, it's all on my Fanfiction (note that I have an inability to keep stuff it serious): [link]
It's pretty crap though...
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-15 19:05:53 +0000 UTC]
ooooh I can't wait to go through these! 8D Thank you
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-15 19:33:39 +0000 UTC]
Pfft, don't get your hope up XD
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-15 21:32:10 +0000 UTC]
how can I not when in the presence of your brilliance?
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-15 23:08:50 +0000 UTC]
I think you replied to the wrong message.... I have no brilliance...
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-17 18:33:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh don't even, how could you think you don't after you've written all those fics? 8D
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-17 18:47:44 +0000 UTC]
Three mildly interesting fics?
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-17 19:43:53 +0000 UTC]
Woop woop!!!
Your drawings are way better though
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-18 16:10:29 +0000 UTC]
You're too kind, but thank you. I really enjoy your writing style
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EejitCat In reply to Cobyfrog [2011-04-18 17:43:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
I hate it when the plot bunnies leave me though... I think I angered them...
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Cobyfrog In reply to EejitCat [2011-04-18 20:30:36 +0000 UTC]
I understand that :/ I'm having a major artist block
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