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Name: Angel Maria FalconeAge: 20 years old
Birth date: 1st of January (yes the day I first post a pic of her in 2013)
Birth place: ????? (muahahaha)
Species: Human/ Feline (she is like a half human half cat like spiderman but with cat and she can turn into human or cat as much as she wants and no XD she didn't born this way, let's say JUST LIKE SPIDEY she got her powers by accident)
Sex: Female (obiously)
Job or occupation: in her human form she is studying photography and when she turns cat sometimes thief (yes she is a thief but she just steal as much as she need and she give the rest for orphanages.....or to people......or to herself xD)
Affiliated: Jack (her girlfriend), Jessica (her sister, but they don't live together), Michael aka Black Rider (her oldest brother but they don't live together but he is usually arround), Cayla (the dragoness crazy close friend), Eria (another close friend), Kira (her friend too), Noriko (friend). Also some others characters that may appear soon ^^ and some Others Ocs I will be showing XD
Hair: human form: black with red(dyed) highlighs, in her cat form: blonde with red (the dyed part stay there) highlighs
Eyes: blue(human), yellow/golden (cat )
Height: 5'48 ft / 1.67 meters
Foot Size: 7 (US), 4 (mexico)
Skin: quite white more like pink/white
languages: she can speak spanish and English pretty good, but kinda like her native language is spanish anyways she usually always talks in english ^^
About her: well she used to live with her brother (Michael who is 5 years older than her), sister (jessica who is 3 years older than her) mother and father when she was a child very very child, but bad things happened and her father abandoned them when she was no more than 4-5 years. Leaving her mother to start to take extra hours at job and even getting another job to can pay the educations of the three children. Making the mother of Angel be pretty much out of home and only at mornings and nights making Angel to get more united with her brother and sister but at the same time lacking that need of an maternal image she needed.
During her childhood Angel was bullied at school making her get pretty shy and pretty docile since child till she was a teenager, usually protected by her brother and her sister but still bullied cause of the bad reputation of her missing father and family Angel lived as a fearing child, a small little child who didn't knew why they did what they did. in her house the things atleast from the point of Angel things were slighly better but still, she always feel like in the shadow of her sister, Jessica was intelligent, athletic, friendly and one of the prettiest girl in their school. Angel by the other hand feel like the leftover one and she even trying to be better could not reach the goals her older sister had. Some years after she got the notice about her father dead in an accident.
When her brother was 16 till he got 18, he participated in street fights and making street jobs to get money for the family, making him at the end leave the possibility of study in a college or university is order to help his younger sisters. Her mother and brother worked they way they could to keep the house together till she was 14. Then her brother got a real job in as a car mechanic and other stuffs thanks to his girlfriend. It was then were Angel would met Annabelle the girlfriend of her brother in those years who help her to have a bit more self steam and also giving her that image of a strongh woman she wanted to become, teaching her to play the drumbs, an escape for Angel from all that chaotic world she had at school and finally but important helping with the relationship of Angel and Jessica to become more strongh. Things started to look better for Angel as finally had a friend and an example to follow, also feeling closer to her family and even having like a new member with Annabelle almost always coming to visit them.
That was till at the age of 16 Angel lost her mother. She, her brother and sister feel the last as a big bomb as now they have had turn into orphans. But now with her sister and brother having more than 18 years, the two sibling worked now to keep with nails and teeth the family together as much as they could. Due to many crazy things happening some time after due to Michael secret activities, Angel and Jessica got their powers one year after their mother died. At the very first momment Angel was shocked and scared of what she had become. long nails like claws, golden eyes blonde hair even cat ears over her head she saw herself as a monster at first. She was affraid of using her powers, but eventually she learned to control them, to turn and go back to her human form was the first trick, then the agility that almost naturally she could make use of, the claws, the better hearing sence, till eventually she realized this was her new her and actually she like it, she was no more the weak one, no more the one that people could bother and make fun of. Using her new powers plus the inspiration and self Steam Anabelle gave to her she decided to change a bit. Of course she was still the shy girl she ever was, the one her brothers love and take care of but once she turned into her new cat identity she was braver, stronger, faster, she was atleast for herself the exact opposite of herself. And actually that helper her a lot to move on and grow up a bit happier. when she reached her 18th birthday and she finally was an "adult" she got some jobs to help her brothers, eventuall realizing that she was suffering the same abuses she suffer as a child by her new bosses she decided as Annabelle teached her to never let anyone else control her life and abuse of her, so she took the path of a rebel and used her powers to steal some money for her and her family from those same wealthy people that tried to again abuse of her.
After a while she got use to it and decided to made it her "job"
Years passed and after many things adventures she stopped stealing so often and decided to take a carrer in something she also likes photography.
Living with the idea of "make the good people happy" Angel eventually turned into the girl she is now, still shy but a bit more confident, friendly, with some good friends and some crazy other ones but as usually Angel.
Fun facts about her:
How did her "tickling" acts started XD cause all of you sure want to know!. Well since she was usually sad as a child and her sister and brother couldn't do that much to cheer her up but to be next to her, they decided to use ANOTHER way to take a smile from her XD eventually this turned also into a wayof her older sister to punish the young girl. Teaching her that she should smile even when things got wrong AND that tickles are a powerful weapon XD Also Annabelle kinda contributed since she kinda tried to teach Angel also that life is too short to be sad and that she should smiles and make others smile atleast once per day.
Jessica was the first who left her house then Angel did the same some time later. After that Angel used her power to steal some money and live in an appartment and she usually practices her powers playing tickling and bothering with other people.
She and Jessica didn't knew about his brother's other activities (the black rider). till the day they got their powers
Angel used to be tickled a lot and I mean a lot by her sister and sometimes playfully by her brother. as said in the lines above.
Another thing that made her get bullied was her exual orientation, as she kinda showed herself her bisexuality when she was 13 years old.
She had a boyfriend who broke her hearth and tried to abuse of her, eventually his ass was kicked by her brother and she didn't had another relationship til years later when she meet Jack.
At first she was jelous of Annabelle cause of her relationship with her brother, she was affraid of losing him XD but eventually Anna get slowly close to her to became her friend and ever her "idol" so much that Angel some years later would dry her hair red after the young drummer
SHe gets drunk pretty easy with Whine, so much she gets all dumb and sleepy XD
Her birth day was a crazy day for family since it was new year and everyone were crazy about the new boy coming that day.....but actually it was a girl XD (that's why is ANGEL)
Personality: in her human form she is a bit shy actually but lovely and friendly too she couldn't kill even a fly, in her cat form she is usually a brave and playful person, likes playing jokes and bothering people, she can be a bit more evil in her cat form but doesn't like hurting people.
Likes: Rock, Metal, Punk music, Playing, tickling, going out with friends, playing videogames, drawing a bit, take pictures, milk and wine she loves wine and Jack obiously.
Dislike: been cheated, that someone lie to her, show her bellybutton (she is a bit shy and insecure about her body usually in her human form), been tickled, pop music (it deppends but she hates Bieber), twilight , and many more.
Hobby: photography, play videogames, listen to music, steal some things, watch Tv, play the drums and a bit the guitar.
Habit: say "meow" while laugh in her cat form, drink maybe a bit too much, listened to music a bit loud.
Fear: the sea (she never learned how to swim properly), her sister, hurt people feelings or physically, snakes, ghost, slenderman.
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SO A NEW BIO OF HER YES ^^ I actually had this pic coming like....a month ago XD it was suppose to be posted on November 19th! in my second anniversary of been in Da making the "fetish pictures" XD but due to college issues I decided to move it to December 19th I was gonna say "2 years and a month later" but I ALSO FAILING THE DATE! so now it's "2 years! 1 months and 2 days later ANNIVERSARY!!!!" yaaaaaaaaaaay
SO XD now I updated her look and her BIO. Believe me....I suck at writing stuffs XD so sorry for the lack or....grammar.....coherence....and....well narrative XD but I did what I could. Hope you enjoy and now you know some more of her ^^
ALSO the next commission it will be soon XD posted since I have it almost done XD JUST COLORING!!!!! SO more coming XD and get 2 years already in DA XD I should celebrate a bit ^^ (TIME TO GET DRUNK!) XD
HAVE A GOOD NIGHT! XD
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Comments: 36
Naga-Asura [2015-12-21 06:01:35 +0000 UTC]
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I really like how you have made her clothing more diverse and no longer just generic black clothing. Its a better look for her and the variations show off her personality. I like the golden eyes though, will admit that it feels a bit overdone with catgirl characters and wish you could have done a closer closeup on her eye. That way you could have maybe designed it to look like a certain cat breed or maybe even something like a jaguar. But that is nitpicking on my end so don't take that part to heart.
The personality changes are very evident in each pose and style of clothing which I really like. I'm really hoping that you have more plans for her wardrobe in mind because I'd really love to see more on how you can expand it based on her two personalities.
God do I envy your smooth strokes. You are able to keep a steady enough hand to complete the anatomy and give ruffles in her pants. That takes skill so be proud of it. I also envy how you're able to draw her hair in pure color this way. Its not easy to pull off and you do it so well.
The star system speaks for itself and I think you've really improved here. I'll give you a critique on the character herself after this.
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DarkShaquille [2015-12-23 16:56:27 +0000 UTC]
I've said it before and I'll say it again, Angel's freakin' adorable in her human form XD
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codricor1 In reply to DarkShaquille [2015-12-24 04:51:39 +0000 UTC]
thanks X3 SHE IS CUTE!!! XD
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neverb4 [2015-12-22 08:12:14 +0000 UTC]
X3 Very Beautiful~!
XD great info as well, very sweet X3
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Skogsjones [2015-12-21 22:18:35 +0000 UTC]
I like her new design human form looks cute as before and her cat form looks cool ^^
quite the bio description you made,I would´t be able to come with writing so much on one description XD
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codricor1 In reply to Skogsjones [2015-12-24 04:52:47 +0000 UTC]
awww thanks man she is cute ain't she? XD
and the cat form is badass!! XD
Oh believe me I kinda improvised a bit with all my ideas I usually have disorganized XD
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Skogsjones In reply to codricor1 [2015-12-30 17:51:16 +0000 UTC]
^^,hai ^^
yeah xD two characters in one kinda,the shy and the badass xD
okej I see xD
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PraetorZ [2015-12-21 14:54:50 +0000 UTC]
Really like her new design, especially the regular/human one
Also, awesome job on her bio! You sure must have put a lot of effort into it!
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codricor1 In reply to PraetorZ [2015-12-24 04:52:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks man XD she is cuteeee XD
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BlackDragonGuard [2015-12-21 14:09:13 +0000 UTC]
awesome background and eh who cares bout grammer anyway
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DivJustice [2015-12-21 11:01:56 +0000 UTC]
Veo que has cambiado un poco los colores de la forma humana.
En general queda bien y es un buen trabajo la bio.
Sin embargo, creo que es muy larga. Un colega me dijo que dar muchos datos de un personaje no es divertido. Lo mejor es mostrar cosas poco a poco y que el espectador se vaya haciendo sus ideas que pueden o no ser verdad. Por eso las bios de mis personajes son lo más escuetas posibles (y aún así me dijo esta persona que eran largas). En resumen, es una máxima del cine: enseña, no expliques.
Ojo, está bien que tú tengas esta info a mano. Pero yo la iría dosificando.
¿Cuánto te ha pagado nuestro amo y señor Gabe Newell por hacer publicidad a Steam? Esto lo digo porque revises la gramática.
Y una última cosa ¿este cambio de apariencia es permanente, o la volveremos a ver con su ropa de antes alguna vez? Lo digo por si modifico la referencia que tengo de Angel o si hago otra nueva.
PD: Se te ha olvidado mencionar que Calvina es su Vegeta personal. Una especie de rival con la que no se lleva bien, pero tampoco mal
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E-Sideral [2015-12-21 09:56:54 +0000 UTC]
The pic is very nice, you gave to Angel pretty poses ! I love it
And I love her outfit too, beautiful red
Very nice backstory, you worked very hard for making this, congrats ! :3
Keep your good works ! Can't wait to see what you will do next
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codricor1 In reply to E-Sideral [2015-12-24 04:53:55 +0000 UTC]
THANKS A LOT
oh I was playing arround with poses XD thanks man
THANKS!!! XD
Oh well there are many secrets yet XD so stay tunned! XD
Thanks man ;D more soon! XD
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E-Sideral In reply to codricor1 [2015-12-24 09:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Youuuu're welcooooooooome xD
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Naga-Asura [2015-12-21 06:40:32 +0000 UTC]
Okay, in order to review her properly I took your bio, ran it through a word document and corrected all the grammar to make it easier for me to read. I'm gonna go over this in chunks so brace yourself for a long comment. Before I get to that though, I gotta say this explains a lot about you never get back to me on that conversation we were having. I can tell that you took a long time to sit down and perfect it and my crtique I left will tell you why its so good. But for now, let's talk about Angel herself.
I like how she's a college girl and I can see a lot of Spider-Man influences in her. I'm very curious as to where you take this. I kind of wish you would have given her a nationality and place of birth though. I know its kind of your thing to keep us guessing but it kind of takes away from knowing where she is in the world.
Her affiliations are nice though I won't deny that I'm feeling a little heartbroken about not earning a place there in some way but I can understand why considering that graduate school is a bitch and I haven't been able to do anything with anyone on here. Cayla I'm still learning about, Eria is an obvious, I'm hoping we get to see more of her siblings soon, and Jack I wish we could have learned more about. You only stated that she's her girlfriend but we (or at least I don't) still don't know how they met. If you get the chance, maybe add that to your bio.
Its useful to mention her languages because, truth be told, I'm feeling a lot more driven to learn Spanish now thanks to you, master417, and divJustice. It allows the viewers to know that you are able to interact with more than one language group and it adds more depth to her. I liked that. My only criticism is that you added in a description of her skin color which is really pretty awkward when you don't tell us where she is from. This is one part I really think you should fix just so people have a more solid idea of her identity and don't just think "another generic white person" when they see her skin description. The format I suggest to you is this.
Nationality: (where she was born and what country she holds a citizenship with and/or if she has multiple citizenships)
Ethnicity: (What her background/heritage is. Just saying that she's white doesn't tell us much. If she's a mix of west Europeans like the Scotts, Irish, etc then it would explain her pink tone in her skin. But judging by her full name, she seems to be Italian which may throw off people with her skin tone. Maybe change it, maybe not, its up to you.)
I actually really like how you did her backstory. You told it to explain how her personality came about and how she became the person she is now. That's very well written and even though you did leave some parts very vague, you explained to us all how her personality came about. That's something very important for people to know. I really wish you had explained more about her powers though like where they came from or how she got them. I can understand if you want to reveal it and tell it to us in another way at another time but try to think hard on that part because its gonna be crucial for how things work in the world she lives in.
That ending to it was a bit anticlimactic. What were the adventures that she went on as a teen? How did she meet these friends who aren't the OCs of others? What made her decide to go to college for a photography degree? The suspense and mystery is killing me!!! Please tell me you're gonna come back to this! Everyone has to know!
Now for all the fun facts you told us about her. You explained well her love for tickling and why she dislikes it too. As for her being bisexual, I am guessing you have some idea of how to write characters like that. I personally don't know how to go about doing that so I can't really make any sort of judgement here. All I ask is that you make this count towards her personality and character and not just a fact to use so she becomes easy fan service for everyone. I have seen way too many people do that with original characters.
Her hobbies, likes and dislikes are great and really make her into a normal 20 year old girl. Though I do have a few questions about her fears but I'll make that a note since this is already really long.
Overall I really like this update and like how you've made her a much more dynamic character. I can't wait to see what you do next and I look forward to your next post. I hope this review was helpful and the critique I did. Please take your time to read these and check out the notes I sent you. Now that I'm done for the semester, we can start talking on a more regular basis.
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codricor1 In reply to demonfootarts [2015-12-24 04:54:13 +0000 UTC]
haahhaha two in one body! XD
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master417 In reply to codricor1 [2015-12-25 16:49:09 +0000 UTC]
ya ya lei la historia de angel, estas interesante, veo cosas raras que y muchas cosas que ya sabia XD, pero pues creo que si tal vez escribiste una historia muy rapida para angel y con una no muy buena redaccion XD, como podria decir div Xp, sugeriria que la volvieras a hacer si tienes tiempo, osea vovlerla a redactar, pues la historia es buena, es interesante, y nos da a entender que angel es una chica que ha tenido muchos problemas u.u pero sabes te sugeriria que trabajaras mejor con el papa, porque lo mencionas que por culpa de el varias cosas pasaron en la vida de angel pero pues no dices mucho de lo que es el papa XP,pero bueno me tengo que volver a leer la historia otra vez para decirte que otras cosas mas note en tu historia XD, en general por lo que recuerdo esta muy bien la idea
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codricor1 In reply to spikedpsycho [2015-12-24 04:54:30 +0000 UTC]
kinda XD more like a "secret identity" XD
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