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Published: 2009-03-31 02:26:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 9752; Favourites: 139; Downloads: 12
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A showdown in the Land of Nowhere landed Jack in a slight situation…Can you see Doom Mountain tucked away behind a cloud? Lol. I’m trying here, give me a break! XP
Anyway, this is just for fun- seeing as I can’t commit to anything until all my assessment tasks are done away with. I sketched the first two pages during a lecture - I was listening! Don’t look at me like that! XD
Anyway – PLEASE tell me if this flows all okay… the words above the panels, are Jack’s thoughts as he’s coming to… I hope that was kinda obvious…
Warning: if it really matter; language... *rolls eyes*
Constructive crit =
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Comments: 45
I like the silhouette of the monks and dragon.
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Oh, thanks! ;A; Such an old piece!
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Little details are nice, though! Without the old things, your new stuff wouldn't be half as awesome.
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Ah, you're too kind! Thanks for that! 
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Maybe they felt if they ignored the damage, Jack would fix himself up like he always does?
Or they forgot their own strength and didn't realise what they'd done...
Who knows, I don't like them XD
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Well I just hope that someone will help him. If not well then, I'll just poke you. [link]
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Haha~ someone does save him~ have you seen the other pages? XD I should really link them together
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No I couldn't find the other pages
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[link]
Go to the bottom of this gallery~ ;3
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i hope to see more now i most go look at you stuff. you have don a hard thing and piced my intrsest. good job XD
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Heh - You'll have to be patient. Page two/three is sketched up - but I've got assignments coming out of my ears! XD
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Ohh, this looks cool. I was like, wait, did I miss something? when I saw it in my inbox. Can't wait for page 2! (has gotton interested)
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Yep- it should be coming soon... XD Thank you
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do more do more do more!!
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I know! Damn them!!
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Aw. Thank you XD
I need to sketch my stuff out on paper more often ^_^
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I know! Hopefully things will get better for Jack soon... >.>
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I love how you drew the monks' symbols all around them in their panels. If I had any confidence in myself, I might ask permission to color this...
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I'm glad you noticed the symbols... XD Thank you.
Hey, if you want to colour it- go for it ^_^ I'm sticking with grey tones cause I don't have the time/patience to colour it.
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If I get the random urge to try to do something I'm not sure if I can, I just might. XP
You're welcome. I'm apparently good at noticing little things like that. =3
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^_^ It's only if you want colour it. No worries XD
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Good to know I've got your permission if I decide to, though.
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Who knows >.> I have no idea where this is going... XD
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I was able to understand it perfectly fine!
Besides that, I'm incredibly intrigued by this and hope to see more of it soon!
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I practice Antaurism daily!
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Thank you!! I'm glad you understood what was going on... My comics are weird... >.>
Hopefully I'll get some more pages up soon- I got the next page sketched already. But alas- I have... 4 assignments that I need to work on! DX
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Nuuuu, they're not weird; they're AWESOME!
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I practice Antaurism daily!
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^_^ They're different then XD Thank you ;D
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You're welcome! XD
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I practice Antaurism daily!
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