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Published: 2009-04-02 02:37:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 354; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 25
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Description without a cover,
your dog-eared frontispiece
is on trial for thought crimes
of passion and for making
poor first impressions
on visiting schoolchildren.

Sitting on a rusting drawbridge,
you are watching the smiling
sunbathing-rainwashing tomatoes,
collecting tolls and corrosion
from a lonely semi
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Comments: 5

pseudometry [2009-04-04 01:54:16 +0000 UTC]

I love the idea, the coverless book, exposed to all and ironically now being judged in a different sense.
Some lovely, vivid description in the second strophe.

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ColonelFitz In reply to pseudometry [2009-04-13 04:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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pseudometry In reply to ColonelFitz [2009-04-14 00:58:38 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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GetYourGrip [2009-04-02 02:42:37 +0000 UTC]

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ColonelFitz In reply to GetYourGrip [2009-04-02 06:03:30 +0000 UTC]

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