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Published: 2017-01-30 01:43:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1155; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 2
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Idea for a villain. Actually I find her design pretty cool, but I need to refine it more.Related content
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This is quite a nice piece you have there
The brush strokes especially on the hair are quite appealing, and I suppose that the lack of thin lines is purely your style, and it is nice to look at. I'd recommend though probably thinning a bit more the tips of the locks to give out a better sense of realism (if this is what you ambition to do)
I need to point out though that the position of the character is quite confusing, it's difficult to tell if his torso is facing us, or that it's a limb (shoulder) that is under his chin. It's also difficult to tell if it's an eye-patch on the character's face or strangely coloured bandages.
The density of the shading, especially on the eye area really conveys the intensity of the scene you tried to depict, giving a sense of macabre and dark atmosphere
I'd recommend to add a more smooth, metallic texture to the sword, as it looks more soft that actually sharp, you should probably use shapes in order to have straight lines for the shape and lightning so you can't get it wrong.
Overall, this is a piece of correct quality, it could be improved, but the raw talent is definitely there. I'm pretty sure with even more practice you could draw really amazing things, and I am looking forward to that.
I hope I did not come across as not liking this piece : This is not the case, it has a solid base, and the things I pointed out (except for the sword) are not that detrimental to the composition, but must be taken into account for further improvement
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Meep! That girl has that look in her eye and her cheeky smile that she is going to end my life. In the most brutal way possible. 0-0
Here is a list of things you can improve on:
- The chin kinda looks weird. With the bandages and the sword. Kind of makes it looks like her chin is about to fall off. :/
- I think you did a great job on the coloring overall but the details need more refining on the top of the hairdo.
- Maybe you should add some lighting to the eye. That way not only that she'll look striking. She'll also more focused.
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This looks amazing!
I love the way you did the hair, and the bandages look great. There's just two things that need a bit of tweaking from what I see:
1. the sword should looks a bit more metallic, so try blending the brush strokes a bit more maybe and make the reflection in the metal more pronounced. After that, it will be fine e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
2. The person looks great, but the lines around the lips and teeth are a bit too soft. It takes away from it looking menacing. Try making those lines a bit harsher, and add a small bit of shine in the teeth.
Other than that, this is perfect!
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Very well done! The Lighting is absolutely gorgeous and has a great impact on this piece. The blurring really adds depth, and makes it look quite unique. Since this is supposed to be a 'villain' figure, I think that the bandages (?) were a great choice. They add a much needed ominous felling to this work. I believe that you have a great concept for this character. The color scheme is also very appealing. The navy purple contrast well with the different shades of green, and blends well with the sword and backdrop. Very well done, and I hope you improve with every pice you create! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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"I can't wait to watch you squirm" the title with the drawing fits perfectly. I could just imagine her saying this to the protagonist during the middle of the story X3 This would be a rather interesting villain indeed!
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Haha yeah it is something she'd say
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You're welcome
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I like your idea.Β Just having the hair down in front of her eye and drawing some well placed bandages you have created someone who easily could be viewed as villainous.Β I think the choice of color (primarily the purple) gives the impression of slightly crazy as well.Β Nice job.
Thanks for sharing your creative work with us here @ .Β Have a great day. Β
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The lighting is beautifully done. The character's face's has an interesting texture to it, not quite matt, but not dripping with sweat either. How do you texture the character's skin? They always look so well done. This piece is worth a fav as the lighting really does make the atmosphere, it stand's out, especially against quite a few thumbshare's I've seen. Β Keep up the good work!
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Thanks! 
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Ah, that's a pretty neat technique.Β Β
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I love her design, I'd only recommend to "crisp" it more >< I feel that would really add a threatening atmoshpere
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Thanks for the advice! I was going for something a little more painterly but I get that having sharper lines might have added to the effect. I'm kinda in this limbo in my coloring style where I'm not sure what I really want to do
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Yes, the design is pretty nice but IMO it needs more detail and maybe slightly less blending overall. The sword needs to look more metallic and the textures need to vary more, but you did the lighting fantastically! I love it though, it's really nice. ^^
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Thanks! Yeah, variety of textures is something I need to work on my art. Glad you liked the design. On a side note, though, when I said I liked her design I was more referring to her body (which isn't seen 'cause I kinda want to keep it a secret for now XD).Β
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Yessss she's a spooky one
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Hey from !
First of all, I think the bandages were a nice touch, adding to the overall villain-theme. A suggestion might to add faint blood stains (depends on context, so just a suggestion!).
The shadowing was well done and the slightly bulging eyes add to the effect.Β
However, I think the blade should be portrayed more...sharply which would make it look a lot, lot more dangerous than it actually isΒ Β
Overall, great job!
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Thanks for the comment! 
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this insane look and the dark colors
love itΒ
>:3
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wow, that's pretty scary. Nice job!
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Thanks!
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ya got me spooked real good with this lady here 
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It's a villain idea for a story I have in mind. I haven't really cemented her clothing design but there are parts of her design that aren't shown in this pic that I find pretty cool and I kind of want to keep it a secret for now XD
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Walp I hope to see more!
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Cool
Thanks for the watch btw! Much appreciated.
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Does she really wanna watch my potatoey self squirm around like a spud on the floor? Cause if so, she can just buy her own produce and drop them on the floor: it saves on time and energy
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Yeah but she's a sadist. She won't get any enjoyment from vegetables
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Then she wouldn't get any joy from THIS spud!
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Hopefully XD
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Hi! I'm from ProjectComment and I decided your piece would be fun to comment on~
I really like this characters design just like you, especially the eyes. I feel like despite having a pretty face and hair, she still manages to let out that dangerous, almost psychotic vibes with the way she's looking at the camera. Also, lovely shading on the eye just to also mention, I love how the only light comes from below, really showing how dark of a character she is.
The only thing I would say is a little off about the piece is the lack of fine detail. Maybe adding some hair strokes to the hairline, eyebrows and eyelashes will give the piece a bigger sense of realism. Though of course, if you're going for a more distinct unique style then it's amazing as it is~
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Thanks for the comment
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Ah, that's okay~
I think the picture is perfect just the way it is honestly : )
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Well that's terrifying. She might like my character Cyrus, he's a scientist with a slightly less than humane way of gaining scientific knowledge.Β
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Haha, she's more of a serial killer with a certain MO and all that. She might like him if he helps her rack up her victim count
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If he learns something from it, he just might.
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Could make a deadly combo
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I can squirm WITHOUT you dragging a sharp thing across my tender parts! That would nice!Β
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