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Published: 2015-01-27 20:25:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 875; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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The time I spent doing this I could have played five games of League. So not worth. (Also fishbones looks like shit
) She's a really fun character though, both in lore and gameplay.
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No problem.
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cool drawing, those are a huge caliber bullets
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I love the overall concept. It has movement, an original pose and a fun feel to it. For improvement, I would say you need to focus on dept and 3D forms a bit more. For example, the bullets she carries on het body look really flat. It you would show a little bit of the top of the bullet, it would make it more like a 3D object. You add quite some shadow, but it fails to give the objects (also the arms) their 3D shape, because they are drawn too flat.Β
I hope this helped a bit n.n
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Thanks for the feedback! 
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You're welcome! Good luck practicing (:
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Cool! I've never played LoL, but I've always found the character designs really cool and I like your drawing of it. 
Anyway, good job!Β
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Thanks! I've always been kind of scared to add contrast XD, but I'll keep it in mind.
Yeah, I don't own a scanner, I try to edit photos to make them look nicer. D:
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Love the expression you chose for Jinx. Β Nice work on this piece.
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LoL, man I really want to play, but I... will be lol'ed at
I like the fact that she filled the most of the canvas. adding one or two bullet shells on the top left corner may tie up the space and the whole pic. The pose with her arms looks a bit more timid for her character, but I do like how it shows off her tatts. The anatomy could be improved (and the best way is to use a photo reference 
Overall, nice pic
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Thanks for commenting! Is there anything about her anatomy that I could improve. (I've been staring at the picture for too long, so help me out
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right, sorry for the vague reply, it's a bit hard to just describe without actually showing you what I mean, that's why a photo could be better,Β
so here's a pic that is quite close to the pose you have (just need to flip it horizontally, and crop to just the upper body):
www.deviantart.com/art/Te-He-Pβ¦
- notice the chest and the neck, the neck is situated on the top, but linked directly at the bottom to the spine in the back (notice that our neck when standing always seem to tilt forward) . so in a 3D sense, it's not only in the middle, but also to the back a bit, especially with poses that raises the shoulders, you could tell that there's a backward ark made by the end of the neck and the two shoulder joints. in your pick, the neck seem to be forward and flat directly above the chest.Β
Β - another thing you could improve (since the reference hair style is pulled back and quite similar) is the shape of the head. our skull are heavy to the back (it's not completely spherical), and in this pic the roundness on top of her head is distributed evenly to the front and back.
I think those are the big things I've seen in this pic, hope my explanation make sense.
note: btw, you could also take a break (for at leas 30'), stare at the reference photo for 15', then immediately look at your piece, it may help as well
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Okay, thank you.
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