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CommanderEX — Twilight is going to kick flanks
Published: 2013-06-03 18:09:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 2252; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 13
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This is a small animation I made base on this picture: [link]Background belong to: [link]
It took me 3 days to finish this animation from scratch, I can only hope that quality of Twilight walking animation is good enough, fell free to leave your opinions and criticism.
" Group of teenage Dragons were angry on Spike for not crushing Phoenix Egg and they captured Spike in attempt of revenge, and while they are hiding in a cave on mountain near Ponyvile, Twilight is pissed and is going there to kick some scales and flanks ".
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It looks really cool!
I am doing MLP too,
you can check it out on my page if you want^^
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YAY! you're back 
this animation is really nice, by the way!
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Well, I am still reading fanfics, but now I decided to work on animations as well, and since MLP show provide characters with great animatios, I will focus on it.
I plan to make Alicorn Twilight animation once I make good Unicorn Twilight animation, and then maybe do small very simple game, nothing big, really.
Anyway right now I need to work a bit on this animation before I move on, any suggestion what I should improve ?
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well everything on the animation looks perfect
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Thank you for the credit!
I can't give much crit since I don't know how most animation programs like flash work, but the animation itself looks fairly smooth. The lines look a little rough though, I'm noticing it on the tail especially. I believe the right foreleg is a little off too. The joint she's lifting it at is too low. I think we should see her elbow lift with it too? I wish I could draw a mini pic to describe it better.
I like the eye-blink the little highlight wobble.
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Yea, flash animation program does not give much chances to be precise when it comes to lines ( unlike paint where you can fix small details more easy ).
I will try to make lines on her tail and other parts of her body a little less visible and less rough ( though it wont be easy ).
As for her foreleg, I am not really sure how to fix it, small pic what would describe it would really help since english it not my primary language and I do not know what joint mean, but I will give it a try.
Any more detailed explanation would be welcomed, thanks for info.
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