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ConscriptDavid — ROD fan chapter-Vengence.
Published: 2011-07-13 17:55:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 173; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description David looked at this bran new 4X4 car. Military green plates covered every inch of the car. Reinforced Steel covered the Wheels, like Shoulder pads in Knight's armor. Rust colored Hammer & sickle emblem was nailed to the hood. Everything in this car said its owner was Soviet, proud, Scheming, but most of all- A paranoid Maniac. He smiled calmly as he checked the car. Everything was perfect. Then he noticed a piece of paper on his windshield. He recognized the style, even tough the letter was printed.

"Don't forget I am still on your tail, you commie scum. When I'll get my hands on you, I'll… er… YOU WILL BE SORRY, okay?! Let's just put it that way, okay?! Now, be ready. Tomorrow at noon. I'll come, and proceed to stomp the SHIT out of you. You foiled my plans for the LAST TIME!

Yours, whit Raging hate,


A.s Villin. Head Scientist in the allied Inter-dimensional Research Program."

David smiled. Back in the Dimension were he came from, he managed, along whit some other conscript, to foil an Allied plan to erase the soviets. The result sent him and the rich scientist who was behind this project to another universe, and killed everyone else in the facility. David spent his day running or fighting the Doctor. Tomorrow he would put an end to this. An end to the allied freak.


Alfred Stein Villin looked calmly at his limo. He liked the new universe. Cars, Explosions, Fun! Great opportunity for science! The only problem was that meddling conscript. He was also in that universe. He looked at his limo again. The six-Seater Limo was the most amazing Thing he ever built. Laser turrets in the wheels, Plasma cutter in the exhaust pipes. Hover technology! He put everything he knew from allied research, everything he knew about allied Military vehicles and huge amounts of money to build this thing. And he was going to race that Conscript, and CRUSH HIM!





David waited one hour, and another one, And another one and he was just about to wait another hour when he saw the Limo in the horizon. Dark-blue limo, whit the allied bird-of-prey emblem on its hood, whit flames painted on it's side. His nemesis has cometh.

The limo stopped near him and his car. A window opened a bit, revealing a young scientist whit wide grin on its face.

"Ready to eat my dust, burn, melt and scream in agony, Comrade?"

"Really smart, dude. I bet you spent more time on that line that on that limo of yours. You really say you can drive this thing and shoot?"

"Oh, I would not be shooting. My Built in AI would do that for me."

"So, what track are we going to race on?"

" I'll let you choose, 'Comrade'"

"Okay, let's say… Crash Cove? What do you think?"

"That newbie track? HA!"

"Do you have a better idea?"

"I…Well…no…"

"Then let's race!"

To David's sheer surprise, many people came to see the race. Two people from other dimension, racing to the death, in hands down, battle.

"Get ready to beg for mercy! FOR I HAVE SCIENCE ON MY SIDE!" Shouted A. S villin

"We Soviets have Science of our own, STUPID!" David shouted back.

A girl in a tight checkered leather clothes came, holding a green flag. David noticed she had fur. And Canine ears. A Humanoid chicken yelled something from a large screen.

"Now, we have this totally awesome battle! Did you ever put a ham in a wood chipper? No? well I Tell you that this battle is gonna be just like that, but whit twice as much boom!"

Another similar chicken took its place now.

"Yes indeed, and that because the contestants in this Battle, are two enemies, Coming from a dimensions similar to ours, whit a lot more war. They foiled each other plan, hate each other's faction, and ready to kill each other whit whatever they can."

David smiled. This is going to be shorter then they think.

The furry girl put her flag up, and then waved it downwards. The limo and the 4X4 quickly dashed.

The Track on the island was abandoned long ago, and was now a dust-bowl battle rather then a race. David's grin suddenly grew even larger. The Scientist was right behind him now, pointing its lasers on David's car.

David pressed a button. It was not a Big, Red, flashing Button. It was small, black and dusty button. He pressed him, and watched calmly at the mirrors. He saw Villin's Amazed and shocked as David's 4X4 began to glow red. The greatest Soviet Technology, The Iron Curtain, Turned on. Rendering every metal invincible, it was far too big and clumsy to be installed on a machine- Unless it was meant to be used only one time. And David's plan did not involve a second chance. He made a quick u-turn and stopped right in front of the Limo, which continued to move towards him. David's 4x4 started to move again. He had less then 1 minute to make this. The David Pressed on the gas pedal to the end. In two second the two cars Clashed. The Red Glowing 4X4 smashed the Front of the limo, the Drivers seat, and half of the Passengers seats. The 4X4 Went on, smashing the roof entirely, leaving only the back wheels and the Car's back bumper intact. And soon even they were not recognizable. The Limo was Smashed, a burning wreckage. The 4x4 stopped right behind what was once the Limo of A.K villin. In the melted thing that was once the Driver seat, were the remains of what was once Dr. A.S villin, Head allied scientist.

David returned to the mansion. Nixx met him whit a worried look in her eyes.

"Where have you been? Every one's been worried. What happened?"

Nixx worried face turned into an even worrier face when she saw the wild smile of David. A wild smile that one would expect to see in a horror film, or on the face of a drooling psycho in a mental hospital. He put a finger on her lips.

"Shh. What's happened it's not important. What you need to know, is that it was a triumph." He took a burned piece of metal from his pocket. The words A.S villin were still seen on it.
Whit a laugh he threw the piece into the air.

"This for my Comrades!" he yelled, as if it was a battle cry. Cody came out to look what the yelling was about.

"Everything's fine? What all that yellin' is about?"

David looked at him.

"Oh, what? Yes everything's fine."

And he stepped in the mansion.
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Comments: 9

crosserdog1 [2011-07-19 08:52:45 +0000 UTC]

that was fricking awsome

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ConscriptDavid In reply to crosserdog1 [2011-07-19 08:58:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

What part you liked the most?

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crosserdog1 In reply to ConscriptDavid [2011-07-19 09:02:13 +0000 UTC]

the beginning

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StephDragonness [2011-07-14 10:18:33 +0000 UTC]

AWSOME!

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ConscriptDavid In reply to StephDragonness [2011-07-14 10:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Nixx911 [2011-07-14 02:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice story.

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ConscriptDavid In reply to Nixx911 [2011-07-14 04:37:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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crosserdog1 [2011-07-13 18:06:07 +0000 UTC]

wow, thats alot to read, i'll save the text on a memory stick and read it on my laptop and comment on this after i give it a good read

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ConscriptDavid In reply to crosserdog1 [2011-07-13 18:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Sure,sure.

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