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CoolBoysEnt — commision for a card game 3
Published: 2017-07-02 13:17:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1073; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 0
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I very much enjoy this work. The body proportions are good, the color is vibrant, and everything is very clean and sharp. I love the color transition of her hair and how it is complimented by the background. I even like the little reflections of the fire in the armor.
-Opinions and Observations-
Some immediate, small, discrepancies come to mind though. First, the white line and dot highlights are not needed. The source of light does not create that effect (nor on the face or leggings). These highlights make her look wet or oily. More shadow (and darker shadow) along the side of her body, especially on her face and legs would be more true to a campfire light source. Her left arm would either be in full shadow and devoid of highlights or 8/10s of the arm should be in shadow with minimal highlights. Her hotpants need light as well if you go by the same light source.
The belt is really well done. The subtle color variation is wonderful. The lack of lighting for it is what caught my eye. Without the highlight and shadow, it almost goes unnoticed due to it sharing similar colors to her skin tone.
I'm unsure of her mood. She looks to be indifferent, but her eyebrows show anger.
These are small things which most people will not notice at a glance, or even staring at it for a solid minute. All in all, it is a work that anyone should be proud of.
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This is super nice too! You really did some great work for that card game!
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