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Remember When...Of all the sorrow-filled stories in the world, few compare to the tale of the Fenton family. Nobody knows the true story of what happened those few months last summer, but guesses have spread like wildfire through the town of Amity Park. All we know for sure is the aftermath: lives were torn apart, families were devastated, and heroes vanished.
Who would have thought that the mind of one young teenager could change the destiny of the thousands?
One piece of evidence has surfaced, lending credence to a few of the more seemingly insane theories. A small journal managed to survive the horrible fire that consumed the Fenton's home. The words, written by the Fenton's son, sent the world into a spin.
All that remains of the family is that journal, a charred picture, and a single rose that was left on the grave of their youngest child.
A brief excerpt of the journal follows.
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I stumbled down the stairs to the kitchen, my vision blurred from the tears. I didn’t really know what was going on. I couldn’t remember what had happened. All I knew what that I had to get away from it. I couldn’t stay in my room with it anymore.
My parents were sitting at the kitchen table. They were eating supper – a supper that I had skipped out on. Mom looked up when I entered the room. “Phantom?” she asked softly, concern in her voice.
It was the sound of her voice that drew me to look up and meet her eyes. Instantly, a wave of disgust blew through me. Of course she was worried about Phantom. She didn’t know.
I blinked at her a few times, trying to clear the tears from my eyes. All I succeeded in doing was knocking them loose from my eyes and letting them trickled down my cheek. “I’m sorry,” I whispered. “I didn’t mean to…”
Mom smiled gently at me. “It’s okay.”
Dad pushed a chair out and asked me to come sit down and talk. I just shook my head. “I’m sorry,” I repeated. I turned my gaze down to the ground and watched one of my tears sparkle against the linoleum.
I felt a hand on my shoulder. Mom was looking at me strangely, her eyebrows furrowed. “What’s wrong?”
I glanced back at the stairs that led upstairs. She followed my gaze, her eyes narrowing as she contemplated what secrets the stairs might hold. I trembled slightly as I repeated the only thing I could think of to say. “I’m sorry.”
Mom had finally caught on. Her eyes widened. “Danny?”
I nodded slightly. My throat was closed up. I couldn’t talk. Not even to say those two precious words. Those two words that meant so much.
She pushed me out of the way as she raced up the stairs. Dad almost knocked me over as he followed her, his bulk making the floor rattled and creak. I stood there, in the kitchen, shimmering tears trickling down my pale cheeks as I realized what had just happened. I was alone. Again. They had left me.
They didn’t really care about Phantom. In the end, what does Phantom have over Danny? Nothing. After everything I had done, I was still in the way.
I sank to the floor and buried my face in my hands, finally giving in to the pain that was racing through me. Nobody cared. No matter what I did, I was just in the way.
Only now I could remember very clearly why it was upstairs in my room.
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Ah yes. Talk about a VERY dark and depressing story. It's written... I just don't want to post it. It's THAT depressing. It's too angsty for ME.
That's saying something. I'm the queen of angst.
hm...
Totally computer-drawn. My first attempts at the various members of the Fenton family, thus they don't look quite... right... Other than that, I'm pleased with it. I like the rose.
Leave your comments please!
--Cori
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Comments: 70
JohnRose In reply to ??? [2007-02-06 04:35:38 +0000 UTC]
You should post the story. You have my attention with the little blurb you have.
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JohnRose [2007-02-06 04:35:38 +0000 UTC]
You should post the story. You have my attention with the little blurb you have.
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cordria In reply to JohnRose [2007-02-07 01:25:32 +0000 UTC]
Another vote for posting...
hm...
I just might have to.
Thanks for the comment!
--Cori
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phantommagic In reply to cordria [2007-04-27 01:51:41 +0000 UTC]
please post if you haven't already! this story sounds so interesting!
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cordria In reply to phantommagic [2007-04-27 21:27:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm working on it!! I'm hoping to get it posted... sometime during my life time... It'll get up. It's REALLY good. It's not often i say that. But I don't want to post it until I get a few plot holes fixed and some extra scenes stuck in here and there.
-Cori
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JohnRose In reply to cordria [2007-02-07 01:37:32 +0000 UTC]
That or learn how to fend off many many angery people here. (Just joking. )
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cordria In reply to JohnRose [2007-02-07 02:52:44 +0000 UTC]
hehehe...
Just remember, I prefer CLEAN shovels and natural-burning torches to those ancient, polluting ones and the manure covered pitchforks.
Other than that, we're all good. :-D
--Cori
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plotqueen In reply to ??? [2007-02-05 14:07:07 +0000 UTC]
you could e-mail it? it sounds so horribly angsty and i love it and the pic and the rose and the cape. i love you. you make my monday better.
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cordria In reply to plotqueen [2007-02-06 00:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Aw... thanks....
I might post it afterall.
I'll have to think about it.
People, apparently, love angst for some reason. hm...
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Obi-quiet In reply to ??? [2007-02-05 07:59:30 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...what happened? It seems there's a lot behind this, and a lot after this that we don't know about.
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Obi-quiet In reply to Obi-quiet [2007-02-05 07:59:46 +0000 UTC]
Oh, and btw, that rose is gorgeous.
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cordria In reply to macaroni28 [2007-02-04 04:44:57 +0000 UTC]
hm... it's a picture based off of a story that I wrote. That was just a small section of the story, it's understandable if you got confused.
Thanks for the comment anyway.
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Nonamei [2007-02-04 00:45:39 +0000 UTC]
Cool picture, dear. But really creepy story...I wonder what the rest of the story would be...
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cordria In reply to Nonamei [2007-02-04 04:43:44 +0000 UTC]
I don't wonder. I know.
Yet, I don't WANT to know.
*nightmares*
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