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Published: 2015-07-12 13:22:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 754; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description Working on some portraits of crows for a shadowrun returns editor project I'm working on.

This one is based on this photo
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Sol-Caninus [2015-07-21 04:30:18 +0000 UTC]

technically I think the bird is drawn and rendered very well.  The issues of concern are higher up in the hierarchy of skills regarding planning/composition

Like the other bird, this one tends to blend with the background,  though to a lesser extent.  That is because you are throwing light behind light and dark behind dark. 

Take a lesson from the long tradition of portrait artists of reversing that order.  A bright face is framed with a dark background while the dark back of the head is framed by a light background.  The issue at hand is Framing.  And here I'm suggesting framing by tonal contrast.   

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