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Published: 2006-03-15 02:49:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description Sunlight never grew so cold.
My knuckles grow white from the pain.
The insects scream to escape
Infections of death and pesticides.
Slowly I remember the dream.
I remember you in arms.
We act as if it were so real,
Real even though it never happened.

Hold me my glowing darling.
Breathe in my cancer.
Put my heart close to yours.
Utsukushii hana no genki wa
Omoi. I'm lighter than you.
Kiss me until forever.
Intertwine our diamond veins.
Hold me my pathogen.

Your visual resonance wades.
In the back of my iris.
My sweaty palms clutch yours
As we dance through the wind.
I slowly wither away,
I leave with the dandelions.
Faded into the sunset
Into the berry colored clouds.
Serenade me with no sound.
A painting that comes to life.
How far can you walk.
Walk over the water to hold me once more.

Hold me my glowing darling.
Breathe in my cancer.
Put my heart close to yours.
Utsukushii hana no genki wa
Omoi. I'm lighter than you.
Kiss me until forever.
Intertwine our diamond veins.
Hold me my pathogen.
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Comments: 7

Autistic-Wolf [2006-03-20 03:17:28 +0000 UTC]

maa, utsukushii desu ne~ ^___^

yes, it does have that cryptic cancerous feel that I've known you to use. I like that ^_^ I want you to explain it to me, though.

who's this for, anyway? you gonna tell?

daisuki desu yo, tomodachi ^^

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CountSixstring In reply to Autistic-Wolf [2006-03-20 03:47:44 +0000 UTC]

It's for anyone I've ever felt something for. It's talkng about how there's love, but it's not there. That kind of thing infects you and makes you sick, emotionally. That's where the term Pathogen comes in. I began writing this one day during Biology class.

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Autistic-Wolf In reply to CountSixstring [2006-03-20 03:55:06 +0000 UTC]

interesting. I know what you're talking about, too.

I was mulling it over, and I wanted to also commend you on your imagery and your word choice. Pathogen is a good word, mate, because it sounds almost beautiful even for what it is.

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CountSixstring In reply to Autistic-Wolf [2006-03-20 03:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. it honestly means a lot to me.

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bite-insane-iam [2006-03-15 21:40:12 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful...hope the person sees it one day...

PS. glad you put up more writings!!

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CountSixstring In reply to bite-insane-iam [2006-03-16 00:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanx!

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bite-insane-iam In reply to CountSixstring [2006-03-17 19:14:30 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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