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CountSixstring — Solstice
Published: 2005-08-03 06:43:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I saw what I saw.
Tell me not what to say.
I saw what I saw,
On that pretty August day.
She held me in her arms.
As our insides hit the walls.
She kept me even closer
As the summer turned into fall.
I watched as se left her body.
I cried as I saw her soul.
I fell as her eyes shut.
I crawled away from that hole.
The police caught the criminal.
I still wasn't happy at all.
The leaves falling were her tears.
The wind was her melancholy call.
I told myself to take his life.
I wasn't surprised when he escaped jail.
The swordfight was the easy part.
Now I'm happy because he's in hell.
Don't cry we're here together.
Everyone else is dead.
For you, killing is a wind.
When I'm in hell, Satan will taste my lead.
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Comments: 2

KazeNoKage [2005-08-07 03:26:57 +0000 UTC]

Cool, nice rhyming skills, although you should go back and check the spelling ^_^. One more thing IMO there are too many "jail(s)" words...

Still tho, very sexy.

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CountSixstring In reply to KazeNoKage [2005-08-07 03:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Okay, umm, thanks Stan.

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