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CountSixstring — Soul Cancer
Published: 2006-02-04 02:47:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 187; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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As we wait there by the creek,Insect itch from the grass.
You fortell deeper and deeper into the future
As I try to let the water take the past.
Will this be a storybook ending
or a romantic tragedy?
If this will make our hearts stop
just end it fast for me.
The love that was there when we began
Is deteriorating in the water somehow.
Has the taste on my tounge changed?
Your kisses are sulfuric to me now...
There was never the skin
To protect my flesh.
Now I'm left with no body,
Just this decayed and rotting mess.
Soul Cancer...
There was a name for this thing.
It used to be my soul
Now it breathes with cancer.
It oozes sick and jaundice from its holes.
Soul Cancer...
Hold hands with me
during this last crash and burn.
May you be free from lonliness,
as I may no longer yearn.
The remains of my spirit
leave my chest through boiling vomit.
Hopefully my body's rotting on this plane
ensures my escape from it.
The love that was there when we began
Is deteriorating in the water somehow.
Has the taste on my tounge changed?
Your kisses are sulfuric to me now...
There was never the skin
To protect my flesh.
Now I'm left with no body,
Just this decayed and rotting mess.
Soul Cancer...
There was a name for this thing.
It used to be my soul
Now it breathes with cancer.
It oozes sick and jaundice from its holes.
Soul Cancer...
Let me go into this cancerous dream
Because your blood isn't as thick as it seems.
Leave here because you may not get very far.
The devils and the angels can see what you are.
The love that was there when we began
Is deteriorating in the water somehow.
Has the taste on my tounge changed?
Your kisses are sulfuric to me now...
There was never the skin
To protect my flesh.
Now I'm left with no body,
Just this decayed and rotting mess.
Soul Cancer...
There was a name for this thing.
It used to be my soul
Now it breathes with cancer.
It oozes sick and jaundice from its holes.
Soul Cancer...
Comments: 8
This piece is really colorful. I really like the imagery you play with. Thats what I've always liked about your work
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can you say Dir en grey complex? x3
I must say my favorite part, despite your typos, was the pre-chorus.
The love that was there when we began
Is deteriorating in the water somehow.
Has the taste on my tongue changed?
Your kisses are sulfuric to me now...
Thw chorus is nice and grotesque, thanks to some choice words like "ooze." heh heh ^^
the last verse is quite good, too ^^
fix some typos, and you'll be set!
daisuki desu yo, tomodachi!
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Thank You Sooooo much *hugz*
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It is fill with emotions... Like you understand the poem from the begining!Which I like!But the only problem was some spelling. WHich isn't bad.Love your work.:bravo:
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you and your songs. good to see you're still alive and working on your masterpieces. pfft, love....
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