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Inks over my pencils for this Narrative homework assignment. Not very happy with the inks, honestly. I didn't get the energy in them that I feel I had in the pencils.Related content
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theyallfalldown [2009-12-10 16:08:56 +0000 UTC]
wow this is aa fantastic piece!! the energy is amazing, only thing i would say is i would have liked a little more expression in meras face, she looks a bit like she is kinda giving up, not strong and determined! love the shadowing on her body, the energy effects, everything just wow!!
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craigcermak In reply to theyallfalldown [2009-12-10 20:52:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Also noted about the face. Sometimes you don't notice these things until it's too late.
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craigcermak In reply to wheniwakeup [2009-12-10 20:51:39 +0000 UTC]
That's a new word. Thanks
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MannyHernan [2009-12-08 01:33:36 +0000 UTC]
This piece turned out great Craig as Nick said if you were drawing a Mera comic I'd pick it up too. Especially one with this cover.
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craigcermak In reply to MannyHernan [2009-12-10 20:50:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Manny, but we both know Alan Davis should do it.
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MBDavenport [2009-12-07 21:20:43 +0000 UTC]
I think the energy you speak of lies in Mera's face. I feel like pencils for anything are always more energetic simply by nature of them being pencils. There's a rawness to them.
I think if you changed Mera's face around on this, it would work out well. If you feel like going back in there, or merely for the sake of constructive criticism, I would say she simply needs more of a snarl. She kind of looks like she's sleeping here. Maybe have her right eye (her right) open a little. Some clouds of sea floor debris and what-not whipping up around her feet would also help, I think.
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NickJustus [2009-12-07 21:18:26 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, I don't think you lost anything in translation. I'd collect MERA if you drew it!
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craigcermak In reply to NickJustus [2009-12-07 21:37:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm hoping she does get a new book once Blackest Night wraps up, unless they kill her too. I only hope they get a good writer/artist team to do it.
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