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CRANBEARY β .:You Are the Moon:. Ch. 1 Pg. 3
Published: 2014-07-09 04:34:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3587; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 2
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BEFORE ASKING FOR A NEW PAGE, THIS WAS SOMETHING VERY NEW TO ME AND SOMETHING THAT WAS MOSTLY A TEST FOR ANY FUTURE SERIES I PLAN, SUCH AS MOONBEAR. THERE IS A SMALL CHANCE OF THIS BEING REMADE, BUT THE PLOT WAS SO AIMLESS IT'S MOST LIKELY GOING TO BE WRITTEN QUITE DIFFERENTLY!--
Well, well, well. Look who FINALLY uploaded the third page of this. I could've had it done sooner buttt I have no excuse other than I was lazy. I just rushed to finish this. It's 12:30 AM. I'm going to bed. I rushed because I'm leaving for a week tomorrow k thx bai
Gonna have short chapters probably.
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This page: Flaky is an inconsiderate asshole to Flippy's actual reason for being there. You get to see exactly where they stand with their stats. Really I needed to do that the gamer in me nEEDED it. I didn't bother with equipped things, though. Flaky is pretty well balanced, but Flippy's kind of pathetic for his level.
Points if you read the cover's description and probably know what's bound to happen from their skill set. (Hint: I said Flippy did the navigating.) Look at my disgusting handwriting though lmao
Characters:
Flippy
Flaky
Giggles's head
Please notify me if you want something to happen (that isn't plot related or seriously plot bending) or if you want an OC to appear as a cameo! (I can arrange a lot, trust me. It doesn't even have to be HTF!)
Characters (c) MondoMedia
Story and Art by Me blah
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Comments: 39
Flaky, You Don't Know How Bad Of An Idea This Is. He's Already In Distress, This Is Gonna End Badly.. xD
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You know more than me i haven't even thought about this thing for months
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Flaky Should Know Better Than To Send A Veteran With PTSD Into Battle. I Mean, He Can't Even Enjoy French Fries With A Side Of Ketchup Without Thinking It's Blood.. xD
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It's being remade with better writing and art hopefully soon when I get time in summer
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probably// i don't even know if i'll have time or motivation to do anything
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I'm so excited for this .3. Also I'm gonna give some sorry excuses for ideas for the story. 1. Can flaky at one point glump flippy? (Glump: Its basically like literally running up and throwing yourself at somebody.) 2. I think you know I was gonna say it....Can you at one point make flippy flip out? ( I'm a sorry excuse for a human for asking this... Β .-.) 3. Please make Lumpy get hurt. I know it sound mean but, c'mon he deserves it. 4. I have nothing else.Β
Also plz don't stop making the comic in the middle of it. When people do that i'm just like: Β Β Every year there is a comic that get cancelled.Β Β
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Oh dang!! I'm sorry for suddenly stopping with this comic, but I decided to take a break and just formulate ideas and get a direction for the story before going on because I didn't want it to be pointless. I think I do have an idea for how it will end, but hopefully that's in a farther off future. To answer you requests,
1.) I don't imagine Flaky to be a very touchy person, but I do imagine later in the story when she adopts her canon personality she will be clinging to stuff in surprise! Maybe in the epilogue too, but just take that but how you want with the story. Who knows what it means if she's that happy to see him later!
2.) That's part of the Flippy mini-story sort of going on! Sure he can pseudo-flip in the beginning, but later I assure you it will become real flips! Both Flaky and Flippy get their little stories in this!
3.) Lumpy grows on you. He doesn't mean any harm, and he could be a victim of one of their targets, but the team will never hurt him on purpose.
4.) I don't have anything either.
It's not cancelled per se, but I'm going to redraw it because I have a newer style now since this page was drawn in July of last year and I hate all the mistakes I made! I'm also going to be redesigning characters too since I now have more practice in that field.
Also, if you really like where this comic is going, I recommend you stick around for my Moonbear comic intended to be started this summer alongside the revision of this one! It follows a different kind of plot, but it still features our favorite tree friends. Get pumped, because Fliqpy is actually his own person in this one!
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Lumpy to me is balloon boy to most people HE IS SATAN. HE ATE DISCO BEARS HEART! WHILE HE WAS WELL AWARE IT WAS HIS HEART. OMEHGERD SATAN.Β
Also I saw no Flaws in your art :3 Β My art sucks .3.
Also this is how I plan the glump to happen....I guess......(Please kill me for my crud load of a visual Β ) So at one point when they are "fighting the dudes" or whatever they end up getting split up...Then when they find one another and she run to him and BOOM glump. But then she realizes HE'S FLIPPED. OMG DAT SUSPENSE. (OMehGerd why me... Β )
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I think Lumpy's pretty okay. I don't even know why everybody hates BB that much, he's an animatronic like every other beloved character besides Purple Guy.
You have to remember this is Lumpy. He DOESN'T realize what he's doing until it's done. He put a whale heart into Disco Bear for god's sake, but he somehow made it work. It's a cartoon. It was for humor.
Don't put yourself down. I know my artwork is flawed, so I'm working to fix it.
They can handle themselves solo. You're forgetting Flaky planned to start bounty hunting on her own but needed a partner in order to start because she wasn't experienced enough. They also would most likely want to be professional since it is their profession (although unwilling on Flippy's part), so they'd have to refrain from full on embracing each other, sadly. Becoming too attached to your partner is a death wish.
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ill give you that about lumpy, I know its for humor and he is funny :3 But I still hate him XD
Your art is not flawed. Its SuperbΒ Β
I know they can handle it (OMehGerd I sound like a douche bag XD) alone but what I'm sayin' is that..........I just realized half of this discussion is about the glump XD....... Just forget the glump Β Β .... Β But seriously I love this comic already, I'm sure you got this.... Anyways, I'm only a kid....Not an author so i'm not gonna' be that helpful. Β
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Alright that's your opinion, but I'm not going to hurt him.
Don't talk nonsense, everybody can always improve somehow.
Alrighty, I'll try to work on it, but surprisingly, you're the first one to request a FlippyxFlaky scene. Other people were just screaming about how it isn't supposed to be a love comic.
Don't worry yourself I'm only fourteen.
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.0. I'm the first to ask? OMehGerd.....I feel so alone XD, But I didn't expect this to include any shippings. But just a friendly glump is what I was imagining not a "love glump" or whatever you want to call it XD . But I can live without it XD .....I really hope I don't seem like a person to beg. ;c Β
I have to ask, When did you start animating?(drawing, whatever) I'm almost 12 but I want to start as soon as possible (by almost I mean like seriously 6 days or something XD) I just want to know so I can get an idea of how long it takes to master animating. :3
I'm also fine with you not hurting lumpy. Though I think of him as a major douche, Β I don't mind if he doesn't get hurt :3
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Yup, you really are the first one to request any sort of interaction between them. Feel proud. Don't worry, you're fine, I just need to see if I can manage my time to find a way to do everything I want to, which includes reworking this comic. I should be a bit more organized this time around.
Well, I technically started in 2011 when I started using Flipnote Studio, and I started to really draw a lot when I was in sixth grade, although I've been drawing my entire life. I was around 11/12 when I started, and it's been a good two or three years improving myself, which is great because I know I'll improve even more as time advances. I'm far from a master animator, but the sooner you start the better. Don't give up, even if your first hundred tries are terrible, and make sure you're always trying something new so you don't plateau!
A word of advice, though, you really shouldn't be on dA if you're not even twelve yet. You could get into huge trouble for it, and usually underaged users are looked down upon. Don't worry, I did it too when I was your age, and boy was I embarrassing. Being underage could get you banned though, seriously.
Okay, thank you for understanding.
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I'm not being rude here but I'm just going to drop the conversation because 1.I'm going through alot right now ;-; (How would you tell your own mother the man who she fell in love with was cheating on her. Also she just told me everything about my real dad ;-; ) 2. I know I don't completely understand what I'm doing wrong but It already happend. 3. I know just talking does not inprove my skill. I talk with them to either, make their day, give an opinion,have a conversation,or for advice. 4. To me your reply (don't take this the wrong way but,) seemed offensive to me. So I would not like to get into a fight. Which this seems to be turning into. 5. (I know this sounds like I'm acting like a douche but I'm trying my best not to) I don't need somebody else's opinion on my techniques. I understand alot. And one thing I do know is, Life is like a game of chess. You make the moves, Nobody can move you. But they can knock you down and take your abilities away. You just can't let them do that.
To end this let me say, I love your art, Its not hard to tell your very kind but have strong understanding of things as well, Your not afraid to speak your opinions and that is ok. I don't hate you, Hopefully you don't hate me. I know your trying to help me. I would know if you were trying to be offensive, I know you weren't. I've had a rough life for a kid. This place is one of the few things that makes me happy. I hope you understand ( If this offended you in anywayΒ Β )
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This week I'm gonna be 12 so ... XD Β I don't mind if I'm banned. I know I'm young but this is like, Β only way to talk to people. And I'm living my life the way I choose 
My dream is to animate so I just go on here to see other artists work and interact with them :3
This computer is really bad anyways. So if I can never go on here again.....I can live. This computer is probably gonna get a virus soon anyway. This computer is pretty bad XD
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You need to be thirteen to use DeviantART, I'm sorry. Sometimes you can't choose when you want to abide by the rules, and lying about your identity is one way to get in trouble with the law. The best way to learn is to practice, not talk about techniques. It's different to apply those techniques than to simply discuss them. I could tell you an effective pan and motion tween could make or break an animation but you wouldn't know what works until you try it out for yourself.
Don't take your computer for granted. It's a grand old beast. I've had mine since maybe 2008 and it's stuck through some pretty nasty viruses and malware. Don't give up on it. Besides, DeviantART is a relatively low CPU site to use.
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aaa thank you although this is a little old by now. comic is (hopefully) being rebooted and rewritten this summer
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I can't wait to see it then
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love the pokemon kind of ting going on at the bottom (so isnt really late on typing this XD)
It would be funny to see someone put an oc in the background which is a complete sparkle tard XD
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I really am interested with this comic. the last reminds me a bit of Monster Hunter
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;w; aa thanks!! I wasn't too sure anybody really liked it so thanks for the reassurance!! lol the last bit always reminds people of something
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well since there's a mission board, so yeah XD
so... when did the next page comes out? :'''D
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I have no idea! I haven't even sketched it and I was in Cali for a week lol and I'm having an art giveaway on Tumblr so there's time going to that along with school starting soon. I have it plotted out, so I guess it's okay.
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sadly I don't have any OCs to feature in this comic, because I only have the ordinary one, just like other generic tree friend perhaps
looks like you really are busy out there
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It can be any OC! It's just that it has to be able to fit in with the tree friends (aka be an animal)
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this one?Β riznben.deviantart.com/art/HTFβ¦
lame OC is lame QAQ
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Very possible uwu I could just make them interns and bloop they're there lol
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lol siriusly? XD
naaah I would be really appreciate it~ :'''D
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okay uwu then they're interns now lol
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This reminds me a bit of pokemon, mainly the bottom panel.
You still did fantastic on this ^^
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The poke nerd in me man
I decided they're part of a guild instead of bounty hunters XP but I'll try to stop making it seem a lot like Pokemon.
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It's fine, I don't mind. I love pokemon too ^^
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This looks pretty good! Can't wait to see where it goes.
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