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Published: 2011-07-11 04:50:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 944; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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WHOO. YES. I AM AWESOME.

Will add desc. later~

These are actually 3 pages in one, haha. Put them in sets of three for convenience.

Edit: BAM. Finished editing all of my pages. Out of all of them, I think this was the most sloppy. XD I dunno. Just feels better now, I suppose.

Anyways, after a bit of thought I decided to stay with black and white instead of grayscaling and/or coloring. Yes, I do intend to fully color them, but after seeing just how well things pop out like this, it just works. Same thing with grayscale; it just didn't look right to do some things in gray. It killed the wonderful wonderful contrast that is black and white. I just feel like this helps show all of the lines that I put in (and the speedlines I abused, fufufufufu, but they get used a lot in action manga anyways, so maybe it's not abuse? =7= ) without distracting from the content. So. Yeah. <3

Glad I got the lil deadline extension, cause these are sexy now, haha. The perfectionist in me definitely thinks this helped. Though I guess learning how to line and stuff so fast without making a lot of mistakes and losing quality.

...man, 30 pages. That's the most pages I've done for one story ever. Add that into R1 that makes 37. *flop* Also, you may only see 10 total, but trust me, there's 30 pages total. If you don't believe me, here's an example of how my raw pages look before any digital work. They're all done on regular computer paper. So. *shrug* IDK I'M GLOATING HUH. I'LL JUST GO SHUT UP AND ANTICIPATE THE RESULTS ANXIOUSLY.

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Kinshayti
Casper
Sherry
Amber
Kris
Beka
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Comments: 14

MizuOCTS [2011-07-27 17:01:06 +0000 UTC]

..the way you draw Casper is somehow really refreshing.

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crateshya In reply to MizuOCTS [2011-07-28 04:07:33 +0000 UTC]

That's cause I don't draw Casper. I draw CASPERADO. eve

*murdered forever*

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CherryOrange [2011-07-15 14:37:19 +0000 UTC]

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, IT'S AWESOME~ You did a great job! Pumping out all those ages, and the action scenes were the best~

*twirls you* CONGRAAAAAATS ON FINISHING R2~~~!

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crateshya In reply to CherryOrange [2011-07-16 23:37:44 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAH CHERRY ALL OVER MY PAGE AHAHAHA *TWIRLED AND DIZZY FOREVER* @w@'

FFFFFFF THANKS MANG. I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THE CHASEY-CHASE IN THAR CAUSE HE'S SO CUTE FOREVER. AND I HOPE I'M GOOD AT ACTION PAGES GIVEN THAT'S WHAT I WAS RAISED ON AHAHAHA.

So. Many. Pages. *flop*

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CherryOrange In reply to crateshya [2011-07-18 15:13:40 +0000 UTC]

So many pages, indeed. I AM IMPRESSED BY YOUR DETERMINATION AND HARD WORK, EEEE~

AND I ENJOYED THE CHASEY-CHASE TO THE MAX. I WAS LIKE... THAR'S MAH BOYYYYY~

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Dragonica93 [2011-07-11 05:35:03 +0000 UTC]

O, the tension!

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crateshya In reply to Dragonica93 [2011-07-11 05:38:55 +0000 UTC]

YES THE TENSION. IT IS EVERYWHERE. eve I LOVE LEAVING OFF ON A GOOD CLIFFHANGER.

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Dragonica93 In reply to crateshya [2011-07-11 05:41:55 +0000 UTC]

YES! AND NO! Cliffhangers suck, but they make the reader want more which is good! It's.... guck? <_< idk.

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crateshya In reply to Dragonica93 [2011-07-11 05:50:28 +0000 UTC]

XD WELL I HAVE TO BUILD UP STORY AND MOTIVE WITH KINSHAYTI SLOWLY SO THAT MY PLOTS AREN'T COMPLETELY DRY. >:I So the cliffhanger was sort of a necessary evil here. Not to mention this is gonna be up on Smackjeeves at some point, so. XD

SOMETIMES THEY CAN BE REAL BITCHES THOUGH I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN. ALSO. CAPS. God I must be tired. :U

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Dragonica93 In reply to crateshya [2011-07-11 05:55:44 +0000 UTC]

O sweeeeet! xD Good luck! Bah, I'm working on the extra comic that was supposed to be a cliffhanger but I didn't want people to be like, "ffffff end it already!" But yeah man, I got plans >w< Just... having the same problem. xD

O MY YES! CAPS! TYPE 'EM OR WEAR 'EM, THERE'S A CAP PARTY GOIN' DOWN IN HERE!

Embrace the exhaustion-induced craziness! >D

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crateshya In reply to Dragonica93 [2011-07-11 06:02:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah man. I still gotta go back and finish up Chapter 1 stuff SO UM YEAH I FEEL YA THERE. I suppose I should start building up buffer for...this scene I have in mind for like R4 (assuming I get that far lol). SO MANY THINGS TO DO MAN. IT NEVER ENDS. PLANS WILL BE THE END OF US.

CAPS PARTY. CAUSE WE'RE CRUISING DOWN THE HIGHWAY TO HELL ALL COOL LIKE 8U

But am tired and have work tomorrow. Wanna sleep mommy. =7=

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Dragonica93 In reply to crateshya [2011-07-11 06:15:46 +0000 UTC]

*brofist*
I'm sure you'll get pretty dang far. Your work is so clean, and you've already got a plot development where most people treat it like a normal tourney (Needs plot or I fall asleep!) and your style is awesome! From my experience (of stalking OCT's), good art gets people far, but if it has a not-so-good story, not that far. A good story is the best route. If anything, it should be about the story, and use art as a tool to tell it. Just gotta keep people interested ;D Like a movie! The book comes first, and if it's a hit, they add visuals!

YEEE, BOIII! (<- not a lie)

Good night Good luck in future rounds!

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crateshya In reply to Dragonica93 [2011-07-11 15:24:24 +0000 UTC]

*brofist back*

Eh, you never know, man. Just cleanliness and story will only get you so far too. XD But yeah, that's what I heard from my friend , who is a judge for HC, and I heard it from some of my OCT vet friends too. So trust me, definitely staying on the story path.

You too man. You too.

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Dragonica93 In reply to crateshya [2011-07-11 21:02:24 +0000 UTC]

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