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Attention! This isn't a SpikexRarity.
I imagine Spike really sad and I create the reason and a story inspired by a my personal experience.
I create this 3 or 4 month ago, but my scanner was brokne and I cannot scanning this.
Now I do and color. This is the first page. I hope you like it.
MLP:FiM (C) and
Story, draw and lettering (C) Me
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I give the same advice to everybody who isn't a native English speaker and is producing comics in English: get a native speaker to proofread your scripts. It takes a long time to learn a language well enough to consistently produce dialogue that sounds natural coming from a character who is a native speaker, and it doesn't take much of an error in that area to distract from the content.
It's so kind of Rarity to finally admit that she's never going to be interested in Spike that way, rather than continuing to lead him on for free labor.
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I don't know a people can correct my script.
In addition, I am self-taught and initially this story was my exercise. But I liked it so much and it is complete.
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wowย
did anyone else feel a kick to the balls just now? i know i didย
Ouch ._.
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Beware of the incoming Sparity shippers ย
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Exactly... unfortunately
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this just destroy my heart....damn so many feels
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Burn Equestria to ashes, devour the sun and bring eternal misery to those ponies.
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E giร . Ma รจ troppo piccolo per essere ricambiato.
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Want you oxigen?
the 2nd page is in progress
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Awww... Poor Spike! Rarity's gone and broke his little heart!
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*adds to watch list*
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Can't wait to see where this goes!
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2nd page is in progress
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As a tip, get someone who speaks English natively to proofread for you. There are a few spelling and grammar errors which are distraction from the story.
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Azz... thank you for reporting
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Too soon Spike,you need to wait as you grow older into a young teen.
Rarity will wait.
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