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joelashimself — MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' Chapter 1-6
Published: 2012-06-15 19:15:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 12712; Favourites: 145; Downloads: 104
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For the full experience, listen to thissong while reading Shining's speech: [link] (Fixed)
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I faved this Just for the Speech man. so amazing. and the song I was listening to made it even better. The soldiers of the the Night by SlyphStorm. Read this again while listening to this sing and you will have all the feels. The feels to battle for Luna.
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Glad you like it homie. I really enjoyed writing it.
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Don't forget the magical artifacts that run on love.
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Dear god, that was an amazing speech! So many feels!
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Mare looking and cshedding a tear at the two hearts, looking at the picture of two relatives (siblings ? son and daughter ?),
and the greying old veteran ( former colonel ?) sporting his peak cap and crying moved me.
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Good eye soldier.
Glad you felt it.
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"Good eye soldier."
Sir ! Thank you, sir !
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uaaaa loving this so far! Art style, story, adn this dialogue is just uuuaaa!!
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I actully teared up...kudos! (/ω＼)
This is already a great start!
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The greatest speech I pony history. In history period.
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I woke out of a dead sleep at four AM with the need to write this. Did you listen the music while you read it?
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Unfortunately I couldn't, since my iPad doesn't want to run a youtube page while I look at another. I listened to the music after though, and it was epic.XD
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You should have made a St. Paul reference: "love is patient, love is kind. . ."
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It was a parody of it actually. Good catch.
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Hey, you're damn good at this. I know because it gave me real feels. Comics pretty much never do that.
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Thanks man, that means a lot.
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Love this whole comic indeed! You deserve some praise.
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That veteran pony in the 7th panel is my favorite part!
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He's based off of my Grandfather.
A survivor of the Normandy invasion.
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Hm...
My grandpa was also a veteran, but from Soviet gulags. He only survived because he was a private.
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Bless your family for their courage and valor.
The Reds were notorious for their cruelty.
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I know, Sir. Thank you.
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I like the references to Elements of Harmony. Well played good sir. Well played.
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so with this i will begin calling myself a fan of your work. very good stuff.
also the link for the song broke, but i can only hope it was "The Power of Love"
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Minstrel boy actually. I'll get right on it.
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It was the first element mentioned in the paragraph, actually.
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Glad you like it man.
Did you listen to the musical link? It really ties it all together.
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hmm it says its not available
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Gah, I'll try to fix it. It really isn't the same with out the music.
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no i didnt, maybe ill try that
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(Just an update that the link doesn't work)
Man...I have a feeling that the Nightmare Moon, Discord and Chrysalis incidents were expanded upon to be much worse than they were portrayed in the show. Which is...maybe except for Discord, unsurprising in my honest opinion. And this page was...man, that's heart-wrenching, even not knowing what exactly went down.
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Glad you like it.
I wrote it at 4am. Woke out of a dead sleep with the words on my mind.
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Problem corrected,
Thanks for the heads up!
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"Lives were lost"
When? Nightmare Moon's reign lasted all of 2 hours, neither Discord nor Chrysalis are the type to kill (because corpses don't scream in pain or give you Love Energy respectively)...
In fact the whole "we have endured hardships" thing is out of place. There were about 7 isolated incidents, none lasting more than 2 days, and most of them restricted to one town. It's been a pretty damn good 2 years for their nation
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Listening to the song and reading. Crying. Why? Why would you do this? The art's so good, the story's amazing so far, I just love it!
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