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Description YAAAY this one is my Thank-You-For-300-Watchers-Pic!!

..and it is for all the people who watched me due to the Warriors stuff I do! I hope you like it!

From left to right: Lionblaze(m), Jayfeather(m), Hollyleaf(f)

I know the title isn't quite correct, but I wanted to name it like thiiiiis! xD (people who read the 3rd series will know what I mean)

Tried to consider their characteristics as good as I can o.o Lionblaze is strong and a little bulky (that's how I imagine him), Jayfeather is smart and skinny and Hollyleaf is plushy and sweet ^^
I know the poses are not very inventive °xD and the colours aren'r very realistic, but who cares, its Warrior Cats <.<°

...and... and I... drew a background!! D8
Yep.. a simple.. boring... forest.. background... well at least it was a little fun <.<°

First time I request critique x///x

< EDIT >: Thanks to Slipping-Star I now know that blind born cats don't have grey pupils... Jayfeather should have quite normal black pupils. Those grey pupils result from a disease called cataracts.


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Comments: 179

Xavienna In reply to ??? [2012-06-21 17:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome :]

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kawaiikiba [2012-06-03 19:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Jayfeather looks like an alien but I love it because nobody else ever makes him actually look blind.

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creanima In reply to kawaiikiba [2012-06-03 20:23:38 +0000 UTC]

An alien? xD Okay, I haven't read this ever before ^^°

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Leopardclawthecat In reply to ??? [2012-06-03 16:01:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow, amazing job!

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creanima In reply to Leopardclawthecat [2012-06-03 18:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <3

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xWildOnex [2012-06-01 00:11:52 +0000 UTC]

Just a tiny critique- people/animals that are blind also have pupils.

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creanima In reply to xWildOnex [2012-06-01 14:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Yep.. I wrote about that fact in my comment ^^
Maybe I'll change this on Jay's eyes later..

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silverstar456 In reply to ??? [2012-05-31 20:10:04 +0000 UTC]

nice!

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EmberStars In reply to ??? [2012-05-30 23:58:37 +0000 UTC]

It's drawings like this that make me jealous that I don't have this type of talent. Absolutely amazing!

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creanima In reply to EmberStars [2012-05-31 16:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks for that ^^

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kikotori In reply to ??? [2012-05-30 10:38:26 +0000 UTC]

love it!

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ValiantShadow In reply to ??? [2012-05-30 04:02:15 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! Awesome!

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UnicornCat In reply to ??? [2012-05-29 12:38:10 +0000 UTC]

great pic ^^

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Nesuki In reply to ??? [2012-05-29 06:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Waaah da ist es!!
Habs mir gestern im Bett schon angegafft!! >//< Da haste mal wieder richtig abesahnt, wa??

Super Bild!! >//<
Die drei sehen echt supercool aus x//3 Und alle mit völlig verschiedenen Gesichtsausdrücken °////°
Das Fell ist so schick Q///Q Argh und ich neide ja immer rum wenn ich deine Augencolos sehe D//:> So schöön leuchten die Augen von den dreien .//3//.
Besonders der Blick von Hollyleaf durchbohrt einen förmlich °////° Also das hast du (unter anderem x//3) echt raus!! >//<
Aber sag mal... D//": *sich ja nich so auskenn* ist Jayfeather blind? °3°
Und die Schnuuuuuurbarthaaris >///< Du musst mir bei Gelegenheit unbedingt nochmal flüstern welchen Brush du dafür benutzt

Und welcher davon is nu dein Liebling?? ://3

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creanima In reply to Nesuki [2012-05-29 19:06:30 +0000 UTC]

Dannnnnkeee ;//3//;
Ich glaub demnächst hau ich echt mal n kleines Augen-Tutorial raus, wenn so viele Leute immer die Augen betonen .///.
Ich hab das Gefühl ich zeichne sie auf jedem Bild anders xDD Ohne Mist..

Jayfeather ist blind jop ^^ Von Geburt an °-°.. aber er kommt ganz gut damit klar und hat stattdessen eher spirituelle Fähigkeiten.
Achja und tada, hier siehst du also einige der beliebtesten WC's xD Geschwister, und sie sind der Wurf von Leafpool, die ich auch schon gezeichnet habe. Und Leafpool ist eine Tochter von Feuerstern, den ich auch schon gezeichnet habe x//D Diese ganzen Stammbäume sind echt intressant *-* Ist das bei WSD auch so im Buch? Ich wills wirklich unbedingt noch lesen! x3

Öhh mein Liebling ist wohl Jay^^ Oder vllt wird es später auch Holly, das weiß ich noch nicht, weil ich die 4. Serie noch nich gelesen habe °xD *wartet bis die günstige Sammelbox draußen is* x//D

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Nesuki In reply to creanima [2012-05-31 07:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Jaaahhh ein Augentutorial!!! *//////*""""
Mach mach mach!! x//333
Die sehen auf jeden Fall auf jedem Bild geil aus!! >//<

Blind... wie cool dass er trotzdem super klar kommt °///°
Der is mir sympathisch >//<
Echt?? Das sind die Kinder von Leafpool? °_° Und die wiederum von Feuerstern? Da gehts in den Büchern generationsmäßig wohl richtig ab, was? °///°
Also bei WSD is das nich so krass mit den Stammbäumen ^//^ Ich glaube die einzige Verwandschaft, die erwähnt wird ist, dass Hazel und Fiver Brüder aus einem Wurf sind

Ob's davon wohl irgendwann mal nen Film gibt? °///°

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creanima In reply to Nesuki [2012-06-03 09:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Es wird ja einfach regelmäßig nach nem Augen-Tutorial gefragt x3 Aber irgendwie bin ich jetz doch wieder der Meinung, dass die Welt das von mir nicht braucht x'D Es gibt schon sooooo ends viele auf DA, und die meisten sind besser als das, was ich hervorbringen könnte o_o"

Ja geraationsmäßig gehts wirklich heiß her xD Aber sind ja auch ewig viele Bücher, wenn ich jetz kurz zähle.. so fast an die 30 schon o_o aufgeteilt auf 4 Staffeln und n paar Specials ^^ und in jeder Staffel ist halt ne neue Generation "Held" ^^

ich hoffe, dass es irgendwann nen Film gibt! °u° Wär richtig cool! >//< Es gibt nen Anime, privat gezeichnet, der ist nicht gerade elite °xD Aber viele mögen ihn, weil is besser als gar nix zum anschauen xDD
Es gibt knapp 2 Episoden oder so.. ^^° Kannst ja mal reinschauen! °-° [link]

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Nesuki In reply to creanima [2012-06-03 11:15:45 +0000 UTC]

"Wir" wollen aber nich irgend n Augentutorial D:
Wir wollen eins von dir!! x//33 Und nu hör ma auf deine Fertigkeiten immer so runterzureden! D:<
Du kannst super zeichnen! >//< Deine Tausend Fans sind jawohl B.weis genug dafür!!
Also hau rinne und sei nich son Hassenfuß, Katze! >//<"

Danke für den Link!!
Werd mir den auf jeden anschauen!! >//< Gleich nach meinem Bild

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Intotheshadowsoftime In reply to ??? [2012-05-29 01:56:37 +0000 UTC]

wow the way you do eyes is absolutely stunning.

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creanima In reply to Intotheshadowsoftime [2012-05-29 16:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^u^

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Intotheshadowsoftime In reply to creanima [2012-05-29 19:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Np

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Slipping-Star In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 23:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Apparently, the eyes are only grey if a cat has cataracts! Since Jayfeather was born blind, this isn't likely,

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creanima In reply to Slipping-Star [2012-05-29 16:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh.. I didn't know this ^^° I really didn't think about the eyes, I just drew o_o"
Okay.. *sigh* Learning never stops.. >u<

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StarDapple In reply to creanima [2012-06-23 03:13:30 +0000 UTC]

Jayfeather wasn't born blind, he was blinded soon after he was born. So it may have been cataracts that caused it.
Anyways I think that the grey pupils look awesome

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creanima In reply to StarDapple [2012-06-23 08:34:13 +0000 UTC]

Hm if you say so I'm quite happy my Jayfeather is rightly drawn xD
I can't find a description that answers the question if he was born blind or became blind after birth..

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StarDapple In reply to creanima [2012-06-23 13:38:37 +0000 UTC]

In the last book of the third series I think it talks about how he saw Leafpool when he was a kit, when she lead them to camp. I think they mention it in the first book too.

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creanima In reply to StarDapple [2012-06-23 17:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ I'll have a look at that :3

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StarDapple In reply to creanima [2012-06-24 05:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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StarDapple In reply to creanima [2012-06-24 05:21:13 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Slipping-Star In reply to creanima [2012-05-30 01:18:41 +0000 UTC]

xD Inorite?

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AlleyKat666 In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 23:20:14 +0000 UTC]

IT'S MY LITTLE ADORABLE JAYFEATHER!!! WHERE'S THE STICK?!

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creanima In reply to AlleyKat666 [2012-05-29 16:50:35 +0000 UTC]

The stick lays in front of him so we can't see it on the pic x//D The next Jay I draw will include the stick, I promise x3

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AlleyKat666 In reply to creanima [2012-05-29 23:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!! STICK!

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bmblbeaky In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 21:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Hollyleaf ish cute!

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FrostbittenKittenn In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 21:42:41 +0000 UTC]

This is really good <3 I love your style, the lines look smooth and soft, and the cats are realistic yet in an original style x3 If that makes sense xD
I really love how you drew Hollyleaf's face, it's adorable~!

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creanima In reply to FrostbittenKittenn [2012-05-29 16:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the comment! °u°

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FrostbittenKittenn In reply to creanima [2012-05-30 16:22:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem! <3

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Rosepetal866 In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 21:22:27 +0000 UTC]

I think it's funny that you're not really getting critiques on this, you're getting compliments. Which, the compliments are more than deserved. This is a fantastic piece.
One thing I could say that sticks out oddly to me is Lionblaze's mouth, it seems like it goes out a little too far. BUT that does give him some character, so it all depends on if you were going for more character or realism.

Like I said, fantastic piece. Keep on keepin on. //now goes to look at your non-warriors stuff.

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creanima In reply to Rosepetal866 [2012-05-29 17:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you for taking the time to write that comment for me!
I know it has got mistakes ^^° but I'm also very happy that so many people like it x//D
Nevertheless I'm learning so much reading comments like yours! :3

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Rosepetal866 In reply to creanima [2012-05-29 20:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Awh well you're a sweetheart. You're welcome btw ^_^

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ChewyOrphan In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 21:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Great job! I love the expressions they each have, they correspond perfectly with their personalities

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creanima In reply to ChewyOrphan [2012-05-29 16:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ://3

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SummerStorm98s [2012-05-28 20:45:51 +0000 UTC]

I can't critique this, so I'll make up my own little critique!
Pros - The colors are very nice, and they match the characters well. I love how you made the eyes look so shiny and lively. The way that you make the three cats look realistic, and still cartoony is amazing. The background is quite exceptional even though, as you said, it was 'simple and boring'. I personally like it. I'm now a fan of your style and I will be devWatching you soon!
Cons - As you said, the poses are not very inventive, but it still looks great. Other than that, thats all i can think to say! With a little more lively poses, I think this would be the most amazing piece of art yet!
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Dev. Rating:
Vision:
Originality:
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Hope this helped!

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Jayfeatherlovr In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 20:11:14 +0000 UTC]

I love it! Its so realistic and adorable!!!

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creanima In reply to Jayfeatherlovr [2012-05-28 20:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^u^

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Jayfeatherlovr In reply to creanima [2012-05-30 00:28:49 +0000 UTC]

No prob!! It really is great!!

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Mondkralle In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 19:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Das ist einfach nur Geil... ich kann einfach nicht mehr dazusagen, es ist sowas von der Hammer...

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creanima In reply to Mondkralle [2012-05-28 20:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww danke.. ;u;

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MadameFurryMamma In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 17:56:24 +0000 UTC]

too much cutness is here O.O

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catpain In reply to ??? [2012-05-28 15:46:54 +0000 UTC]

du hast dich mal wieder selbst übertroffen!
Wirklcih richtig, richtig klasse!

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