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creanima — The Power of Three
Published: 2012-05-28 13:08:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 22237; Favourites: 989; Downloads: 145
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YAAAY this one is my Thank-You-For-300-Watchers-Pic!!..and it is for all the people who watched me due to the Warriors stuff I do! I hope you like it!
From left to right: Lionblaze(m), Jayfeather(m), Hollyleaf(f)
I know the title isn't quite correct, but I wanted to name it like thiiiiis! xD (people who read the 3rd series will know what I mean)
Tried to consider their characteristics as good as I can o.o Lionblaze is strong and a little bulky (that's how I imagine him), Jayfeather is smart and skinny and Hollyleaf is plushy and sweet ^^
I know the poses are not very inventive °xD and the colours aren'r very realistic, but who cares, its Warrior Cats <.<°
...and... and I... drew a background!! D8
Yep.. a simple.. boring... forest.. background... well at least it was a little fun <.<°
First time I request critique x///x
< EDIT >: Thanks to Slipping-Star I now know that blind born cats don't have grey pupils... Jayfeather should have quite normal black pupils. Those grey pupils result from a disease called cataracts.
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This is absolutely amazing! It's very bold, and he caught each of their personalities PERFECTLY! The back round is strange, and is done in a way that I have never seen before. You can possibly already tell what they are like without reading the books, by just taking a look at their expression. I want to point out Jayfeather's. It's amazing. Your style of cats is something I have never seen before. It's very realistic, and it gave me a chill. The only thing you could have done better.. Mmm.. I'm not sure. I don't have anything negative to say about this piece of art. Well done!
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I love the drawing, mainly because they look different.many artists make the cats all look alike, but you have them all specific features to make the picture interesting.very good!
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I love the way you drew this! it is truly amazing you are way better at drawing than me! I love the expresions on their faces so cute! I also love how you drew their eyes you did a great job overall! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
your work is amazing it is the best work I have probably seen so far! I love the colors you used and the background of the forest this is leafpool and crowfeathers kits right? well anyways you did awesome great job keep up the great work! I don't know what else to say? amazing!
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WOW! I just love this picture! I love the face that JayFeather is making, although his mouth line doesn't have to be so thick (my opinion) But other than that, he is GREAT! moving on to HollyLeaf. She looks awesome, just like JayFeather! I'm not trying to sound so negative, but her front arms are a little short XD But like I said, It's very great! And last but So not least, LionBlaze, the Little fighter of the three x)
I am speechless of how he came out! they all look great! His smile is very fitting for him! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Oh, yes! Very good! I love how you drew this!
I especially love how you did the detail in the shading and fur. An d those eyes! I especially love how you did Jayfeather's eyes with that misty affect in his pupil.
Now to take a look at Lionblaze.
Mmm, yes, I love how you blurred in his tabby stripes, and the fur on his chest too! Although, his arms look a little thick, and his shoulder seem a little bit high.
Now, Hollyleaf. I love how you gave her a little smile. It makes her look cuter. But the thing that really caught my attention was the fact that I can't really see her front legs. But other than that, very good!
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Thank you for the critique! :3
I wanted to make Lionblaze little bit more bulky, guess I overdid huh? xD
Ah yes, Holly's front legs are hidden unter her pelt, but according to the fact that I drew the legs of the other two visible, I should've drawn hers visible too x'3
Yea yea a good drawing needs to be good planned it seems x)
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Wow. This artwork is fantastic!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you very much for this critique! :3 I think it was fair and yes, it will help! I just sit here reading it and think "Yes, yes, this is what I thought myself before.." but sometimes you just need to read your own thoughts written by another person, not? :]
Jayfeather's supposed to look a little frowning, worried and yeah.. knowing, but as you say I should have worked out his wisdom more carefully..
Lionblaze is kinda bulky yep xD Maybe I paid too much attention to the words "broad shouldered" ^^°
Again, thanks for criticizsing!
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Yeah i know the feeling of needing to confirm your thoughts from someone else. For me, it's common.
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First of all, this is amazing because that's pretty much exactly how I picture all of them, so way to go there! now for the actual critiquing. I'm going to start with Lionblaze: the fur and anatomy are all astounding, so I;m just going to say that I love how you did the fur on his chest! It looks very much like fur! Secondly, the way you do your eyes!! It's amazing! Would you care to do a tutorial on that? Because for some reason I can never get the eyes to be that perfect. Now on to Jayfeather: the anatomy, colors, fur, everything is great. I love the way you did his tabby stripes - there subtle, but still noticable. Hollyleaf: I really like her nose for some reason...it's just so cool hahaha! The way you managed to do the shine on her eyes is fantastic! So all in all, you did a fantastic job making this picture, the picture is very clear and nice to look at, and the cats don't have any hair (I hate when people put hair on their cats, so thank you for not doing that!) and the depiction of the characters is very accurate! The only thing I would say is that they look quite young (like apprentices)...but perhaps you drew it that way on purpose? I have one parting question before I end this critique - Do you use a tablet or mouse pad?
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I like the nose too.
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Thank you so much for such a nice critique! (notably cuz it's the first one I receive *w*)
I don't like it too when cats have any hairstyles x//D
Thanks for the eyes-compliment! I'm thinking about making an eyes tutorial for a time, more and more people ask for it. So I think I'll make one any time soon.
At this stage they're young warriors. It's okay if they look a little youngish.
I'm using a wacom graph tablet <3
I think your critique is quite fair, thank you!
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No problem at all
oh you are? Good
Oh, good, a tablet haha. I plan on getting one someday in the future, but I just don't have the money right now. No problem
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Jayfeather is staring into my soul (my dirty dirty soul)
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Awesome but instead of Hollyleaf... isn't it supposed to be Dovewing?
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Hollyleaf has a greater power than dovewing could ever have! the randoms respect.
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at the beginning hollyleaf was part of the three. before she turned bad and stuff :3
didn't want to spoil so obviously..
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If Hollyleaf "was" at the beginning the part of three, then, what power did she have??
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mmh maybe the power ti kill :'D
anyway she was part of the trio then. maybe i should change tie title to "the three" ^^
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Oh, heheh my mind. Okay then x3
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I like their face expressions, very close to the character.
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Lionblaze and Hollyleaf are like 'Hey, how ya' doin'?', and Jayfeather's seems to... lack their enthusiasm... to say the least. Shows how sceptical Jayfeather is of literally every cat around him.
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That is REALLY COOL! Jayfeather is my favorite character and you drew him just how I imagined him!
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COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
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I love your drawings! They are magnifique! This is me trying to do art on a computer (the equivalence anyway)
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Favourite warrior cats fanart so far
Great job
Love the expressions!
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Oh gosh Jayfeather looks kinda creepy O.O
But really nice pic! I really do like it. (ouch, was this correct grammer?)
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That face Jayfeather has, I bet he's like "What are staring at?"
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jayfeather: what are we looking at
lionblaze: just smile
hollyleaf: im only smiling cause im inclued in this pic
lionblaze: shut up
jayfeather: i wont smile
lionblaze: you both suck....
AWESOME PICTURE !
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LOL your dialogue xDD
thank you .u.
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Wait, help here. In my land, there dosn't exsist the book where those three are, so, is Jayfeather(?) blind?
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Jep he's blind :3 but his eyes actually got black pupils, because his eyes don't have a desease, he was just born blind, so his eyes shall look normal. I did it wrong here. anyway xD he's blind x3
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Owe, well, I think he looks great! I <3 your art!
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