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The awesome photograph was done by ~LittleRedRidingHoody . Alright i saw a bunch of writers writing about weellll writing, and moment i saw =BleedTheDream180 do it ,i decided to join the flock. Hope mines original and i hope everyone enjoys
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hmmmm, i couldn't give less of a crap
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It is good to write and learn things about yourself you did not know before.
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Wow alright hurt my feelings why don't you
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I'm sorry. It's the best poem I've ever read.
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take away the possible sarcasm and that would b the nicest thing i ever heard
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Well, as a poem, this simply did nothing for me. It's very simple in terms of language and imagery, very basic. I'm sure you're happy with it, and props to you if writing is cathartic, but I was unable to enjoy this. I guess I've become more and more demanding over the years, when it comes to poetry.
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My usual writing style isn't like this, i decided to change it for this poem since it, in all means, had a different theme than i'm usually used to. Since i'd hate to leave you unsatisfied, i'd hope that you read another poem by me ummm one called "Silently Screaming Your Name". i don't mind if you think that to much trouble but please . (Also cathartic, is that the best adjective for the situation, cause it kinda compares my writing to a laxative)
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It would be a very bad sign if someone's art was the equivalent of a laxative, but that did get a chuckle out of me
I will read your other poem.
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you didn't need to write "bad poem", that makes you a jerk.
if you think it isn't a particularly good poem, give the writer constructive criticism.
it may have been a SIMPLE poem, its called free verse, but it was in no way a bad poem. in fact, enough people like it that it's on the front page.
if you demand more of poetry. go read another poem. don't bash someone who is happy with their work.
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Yay, another reprehensible, fascist white knight that wants to silence people that don't agree with her. Sumarlegur is completely within his rights to say it's a bad poem, we're not in elementary school, we can speak our minds even if it what we have to say isn't exactly nice.
His opinion does not make him a jerk, it's wholly valid and you have no right to say he can't say it. Just like you, you can say all the stupid bullshit you want and all I can do is tell you exactly how stupid it is... It's very stupid.
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Simple poetry does not necessarily equal free verse.
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wow love the enthusiasm, and thank you for defending my honor, but i didn't mind, everyone has differing views and its difficult to cater to evryone, i'm just glad so many people liked it
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I don't understand what free verse has anything to do with a poem being simple or not. It has nothing to do with form. Also, you just said it wasn't a bad poem. Does that mean you're allowed to give out your opinion, but I'm not? I said it was a bad poem and didn't give any reasons why (in my first comment, at least), but you just said it was a good poem and didn't give any reasons either. Why is your comment more valuable than mine?
Also, assuming every artist in the world is happy with the art they publish or present to an audience, does that mean no one should ever give out their opinion unless it's made out of positive remarks?
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the reason your initial comment differed from mine is because it potentially hurt the author. nobody has the right to hurt another person's feelings. like i said in my first comment, give the person some criticism.
her poem was rather good because I THOUGHT it had a good point to it, and was well written.
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I did offer criticism afterwards.
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Hey, hey people, not arguments in my comments plz, i don't want things to turn nasty
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Hmm.. maybe you write for all of these reasons. ^^
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so that I don't discolor my sister's skin, what should I use to make the letters? acrylic paint? pen??
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acrylic paint works fine except for on sensitive skin
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okay 
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Ignore the double comment. I thought my first comment didn't post.
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haha alright than , thanks for the compliments
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This is awesome. So creative and full of meaning. It sounds like something I would write. I write too so I enjoy how others express their words. Well done.
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I like this a lot. It sounds like something I might write. It's cool.
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I am a writer myself and this says so much about writers that people sometimes do not understand! I love it!
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I'm glad you liked it
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I really like this poem. The only thing I would comment on is the last line feels a bit out of place. Consider playing with different words that fit into the puzzle or delete that last bit? I don't know. Just play around with it, as I'm sure you do. I like the individual reasons and how they are explained. I can relate to several of them.
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The last line was meant to show that no matter what the original reason for a writer making a piece that the reader decides its purpose and beauty. But i'm glad you more or less like it
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Sweet poem. There is always so many reason why to the things we do, especially the ones that matter most. I want to find that one person that has a mind to be driven by one singular purpose, but I think that's insanity. Not to mention they'd probably be annoying.
I don't really think much about why I write though. I just do. It's expected, a way of life, communication. As far as I see writing is key.
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you write for every single one of the reasons you mentioned
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You mean, "You write because you are crazy."
Language, friend, language. I assume you go to school.
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I dunno. You might assume too much.
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Wow, beautiful culmination of all those feelings we have about that wonderful craft, writing. Cos really, how can we say there's only one particular reason over another? Excellent job, my friend!
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Thank you and i'm glad you liked it
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you write because there are no dragons to slay
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