WolfMessenger In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 01:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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savetherave556 In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 01:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Good work, sir!

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CrumbledWings In reply to MzThomas34 [2012-12-30 00:51:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like the piece , and i wonder your answer to this question is.

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MzThomas34 In reply to CrumbledWings [2012-12-30 01:24:35 +0000 UTC]

I thought about it while reading and am afraid that I don't even know myself.

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starmic In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:42:18 +0000 UTC]

just beautifulllll!!!!!!! i no words just wonderfulll

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MissRandomesque In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it's so beautiful. *sniff, sniff*

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weaveroffantasy In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:34:40 +0000 UTC]

That is the question, eh? This is a beautiful piece and like someone mentioned before, it conveys the emotions behind the words. Just fantastic

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CrumbledWings In reply to weaveroffantasy [2012-12-30 00:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you , and i'd hope you'd be willing to read more of my works

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MrJuniorer In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!! Really NICE!!

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ExSakura-Lit In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:19:31 +0000 UTC]

I know this might not have been intentional, but I love how the last line is on a page of its own. It emphasizes it so well.
I'm a writer too, and I think this describes me really well

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CrumbledWings In reply to ExSakura-Lit [2012-12-30 00:45:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked the poem

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Mmk4U In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:18:20 +0000 UTC]

You write for the same reasons we draw

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leadmare56 In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:17:20 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful! inspiring! makes me want to do one

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CrumbledWings In reply to leadmare56 [2012-12-30 00:43:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you , and i think you should , i'd love to know why you write

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leadmare56 In reply to CrumbledWings [2012-12-30 03:02:10 +0000 UTC]

I just have to find a model.... "SIS! GET IN HERE."

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Always-A-Day-Dreamer In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:15:11 +0000 UTC]

This is a fabulous poem! Now you and BleedTheDream180 have done one.
I think it's a sign from the universe...

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CrumbledWings In reply to Always-A-Day-Dreamer [2012-12-30 00:16:50 +0000 UTC]

haha i'm glad you liked the poem and i love the screenname

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Always-A-Day-Dreamer In reply to CrumbledWings [2012-12-30 20:32:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And thank you!

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DeviousRaptor In reply to ??? [2012-12-30 00:14:48 +0000 UTC]

I love this piece. It really captures the emotions you wanted to convey and uses them to tell a story. Great job, you make a fantastic writer.

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CrumbledWings In reply to violetense [2012-12-30 00:05:43 +0000 UTC]

i turned into into a pdf submitted it and added a cover

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GearsGirl6295 In reply to ??? [2012-12-29 23:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful.

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DPForPrez In reply to ??? [2012-12-29 22:00:58 +0000 UTC]

because you can

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BleedTheDream180 In reply to ??? [2012-12-29 20:12:00 +0000 UTC]

omg i inspired someone. you're awesome!

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CrumbledWings In reply to BleedTheDream180 [2012-12-29 20:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks , and you're an awesome writer

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BleedTheDream180 In reply to CrumbledWings [2012-12-29 20:16:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks. and i read your journal. just keep at it and be happy with what you do.

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unusedEmotion In reply to ??? [2012-12-29 19:39:53 +0000 UTC]

u_u

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CrumbledWings In reply to unusedEmotion [2012-12-29 19:44:36 +0000 UTC]

*never seen* typo

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unusedEmotion In reply to CrumbledWings [2012-12-29 19:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Alright. I'll go respond to the earlier message now.

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CrumbledWings In reply to unusedEmotion [2012-12-29 19:44:14 +0000 UTC]

i have seen someone make that emoticon before, does that mean you liked the poem?

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unusedEmotion In reply to CrumbledWings [2012-12-29 19:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Hm. It means that.... I related? I understood it? I read it and just wanted you to know that? I did like it though, but, I don't know exactly how to tell you what I thought/felt when I read it.

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iKestrel In reply to ??? [2012-12-29 19:15:30 +0000 UTC]

I can't tell you why you write. Well, I can, it just won't be the real/right reason.

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