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Published: 2010-10-12 20:49:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 4172; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 26
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...mostly done with the touchpad. Again. RAAAAAAAAAAWR TEACH ME NOT TO FORGET MY STUPID TABLET EVER AGAIN.WHO CAN IT BEEE NOOOOW?
11 pages left, folks. I'm going to try to finish them as fast as possible.
Aaron (c)
Charlie (c) :iconand-also-dinosarus:
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I wonder how they're gonna die! The ambientation in the midpannel with the dead bodies is well done, which has been graphically true to most of the comic! Despite some very minor details here and there you've done a good job with graphical story-telling, specially with palettes. I hope you plan on doing comics for a living!
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Sure Aaron. Run after the creepy voice in the RED SPEECH BUBBLE. Great idea =__=;;
Translation: WAAAAAAAAAAAH, HE'S DEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD
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I look out for your comics (or any of your art for that matter) in week eagerly and I'm never disappointed, even if it is sketchy and "fast". You're one of those rare artists who has me looking at everything, great work!
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Poor, poor Danny.
I almost screamed when I saw this page in my inbox! Huzzah!
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Do you weep for him?
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HEADLESS DANNY WOULD CRY IF HE HAD EYES
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DANNY
THE PIPES
THE PIPES ARE CAAAALLING
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U_U I am starting to think that THE LIFE OF DANNY THE HEADLESS is going to have to be a minicomic some time. He gets infected by some chick named Cass.
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That angled shot into the hallway of corpses is great.
-Aaron, come back here and make out with me!
-...what?
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WHO CAN IT BEEE NOOOOW??? *epic saxophone*
Only 11 pages left? Wow.
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EW! Heyyy! Do you want me to get dead person ick on my shoes???
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I am so loving this story. It should be a webcomic.
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Well, it's a comic... on the web... what more do you need? XD
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DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!
Sorry, it had to be said. xP I love this comic so much, I feel the need to poke fun at it. ._.
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Limping, darlin. Aaron's been limping since the beginning, he's just not able to run. And Charlie is too much of a baby to follow after him right away through dead bodies.
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hahaha so true :'D
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Aw. I wasn't sure what was wrong. I thought he couldn't walk period. I guess I should reread the last few pages. I'm starting to forget things.
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He's got a bit of a foot and ankle problem at the moment--it's why they went to the hospital, he needed pain medication. O: I'm sorry if I wasn't very clear, I think that's a growing problem with me XDD
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Well if it's something that was referenced in another comic (from another artist) it's my fault I don't know, since I don't read up on the other entries.
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Can't help but question why that was the only thing you had to say on this page, (and in a flat, critical sounding tone) given that you admit to having forgotten things that recently happened and to not having read other comics that might help you understand.
I mean, it didn't sound polite, and was that really necessary?
Anyhow, great, compelling work as ever, Crispy, love the panel especially of them coming across the blood strewn hallway- very well lit and I love the tilted, exaggerated perspective.
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I'm sorry I didn't mean to make that SOUND sarcastic and rude. I was sort of channeling my internet reviewer self. I thought he was more seriously injured than he really was and thought it was strange that he was limping by himself when I first believed he needed help just to stand. Sorry if it came out rude. If I was gonna just bash a thing for no reason I wouldn't post anything to begin with.
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Honesty, and especially self-honesty can sound like sarcasm, since most people are un-used to this strange thing of telling the truth. You didn't sound sarcastic or spiteful or anything to me, but it is a good idea to double check your comments and think of them from another person's perspective if they aren't bright and shiny and rainbowy. c:
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Now don't be mean to Graid, I think she was just trying to defend me >.< And to be honest, it IS a big pet peeve when you're trying to tell a story and someone brings up a criticism that's been addressed already throughout the comic (Aaron's been walking and standing on his own already). XD I wasn't offended by what Aika had to say, but Imma admit to exploding in annoyance when stuff like that happens, because stuff like that WILL happen, and it ends up just feeling like you didn't do your job as a storyteller right. Which may or may not be true, I'm not saying it's not, things like that just tend to get my goat.
Or when people complain about a story direction before they've seen the direction it's actually going. Or they criticize an entire story before they can look at the thing as a whole.
...And I did sort of read her comment with a tone myself. *shrugs* But whatever.
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I didn't think I was being mean... just was explaining to IronBlood how things can be taken wrongly on the internet easily (as in this very case), and that he might re-read before posting. Now that I understand what his comment was about yes, it might have been better to rephrase it into a question, or not comment at all. Criticism (which Graid did), even while justified, is hardly ever a good idea, because people will always want to defend themselves against it, making little flame wars here and there, especially on an art piece that isn't yours. It is unnecessary, and it should be left up to the author to defend themselves alone. I meant no offense, and I am sorry if my comment gave such, but I was certain it was constructive, as it was mostly only giving advice to IronBlood. But, as I said, now I understand the context better. (I hadn't noticed him limping at all, all my eyes are for Ned)
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It wasn't offensive XD I didn't mean "mean" necessarily, it was more meant in a "just leave it be" sort of way. What I meant was what could be implied by what you were saying (as in, like...something that Graid or sommat might see and think you meant about them), which seems to be an undertone, intentional or not, suggesting that Graid wasn't able to take what was being said because it didn't have sparkles and rainbows. I'm not saying you said it or that you meant it, just that the wording can be taken as such. As for the Graid's commentary being unnecessary, that's up for opinion I guess and I don't feel much either way, but I'm not going to fault her for it any more than I'm faulting IronBlood for mentioning anything at all. *shrugs* But whatever. I think Graid just knows I never stand up for myself unless I'm faced with utter stupid.
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Nonono, I didn't mean offense about the sparkles and rainbows, I meant it in sort of a literal, everybody-including-myself-does-it sort of way, haha. That's a perfect example of how people can read sarcasm where it may not be... ;A; And you're right, it is up for opinion, like, I am sort of glad when people do it, but I have been that person, the one that stands up for others, and most often than not it isn't worth it, just ends up worse. I'm glad she is the type of person to do that though, rather than one that makes sarcastic comments. And just to clarify, I wasn't defending Iron's right to make the comment, just the right to make a comment that might be taken a different way, which, now that I see by context, doesn't matter anyway, because it was an ignorant comment to begin with. So I was dumb.
...now I will stop taking up valuable paper-writing/sleeping time. Sorry I made a bigger mess of things. c:,
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XD I JUST SAID I DIDN'T THINK YOU MEANT IT THAT WAY, JUST THAT PEOPLE COULD TAKE YOU SAYING IT LIKE THAT XDDD Seriously. I'm not offended by either side, it's just, you're telling IronBlood to be careful with what they say, and now I'm just tellin you to be careful too D: And I'm the one who stands up for others a lot too--while I understand the repercussions, I think that sometimes it's a comfort to the people who are stood up for to know that someone else is on their side. XD Again, I'm not saying it's right, clarify clarify clarify.
XDD but in the end, it doesn't matter, really, it's all a case of "I'M JUST SAYIN."
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Sorry! I'll be more careful next time I tell someone to be more careful.
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To be supportive to Graid just a little bit, it is somewhat frustrating when someone criticizes a part or point of a comic when it was addressed earlier. Like...Aaron walks when they're entering the hospital and is standing and walking on his own during the confrontation with Birdie. But that's a pet peeve with me, and I wasn't really offended by what you said XD It's just that I know where Graid's kinda coming from at least in basis.
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Well I'm sorry Crispy, it was my fault. I didn't think what I said would come out as offensive. Once again my fault. I was just confused.
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O: I thought I said I wasn't offended. I just kind of wanted to assume Graid's side of it, and explain my own pet peeves about the storytelling process. So it's absolutely nothing you have to worry about. XD I'm not mad, I explained what was going on when you first commented, and you seemed to get it pretty quickly, so it was pretty resolved from the start.
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Okay. XD Sorry, it's just I was a little shocked when everyone started responding and saying I was acting like a jerk. Didn't know how to react to that.
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