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Published: 2015-06-23 00:27:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 307; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Please critique me! I want to improve! 

There is change coming once and for all
You're getting too old, too weak
to keep holding on
A new world is gunning for you
and Joe, we is too
Til once and for all you're 
gone!

--- "Once and for all" Newsies


I have fallen in love with this musical. Despite never seeing the movie or musical, I already have an idea of what the scenes look like. Haha, I was way off with "Once and for all" scene. I always imagined them running through a stormy New York, crying out the injustices, throwing papers to any poor passers-by that happened to be on the same side on the street.  


I own art, wolf designs/puma designs, not characters nor song


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ThePunkCat [2015-06-28 01:16:58 +0000 UTC]

more fandoms I don't know ; w ;
Welp, time to try my best at a critique nonetheless. So, first off, the shading and the rain effect look spectacular, and the way the water drips off of the characters looks really cool too professional critique words are professional . It's really stylized, and contains an element of seriousness and power. My only critique would be that the shading is like a tiny bit inconsistent? Like I can't really tell where the light is coming from, it could be the middle or the right but like I said it's kinda hard to tell. No big deal, just trying to nitpick as usual. Also, with wolf/puma anatomy, their mouth opens more to a point, rather than to a flat line of skin like humans(this is mostly about the black-furred one, the brown-furred one next to him looks more accurate). BUt this could just be a style thing, like I've said before everything doesn't have to be anatomically PERFECT, I was just pointing it out in case you wanted to know ; w ;//
though I could be wrong about that. I looked it up while writing this and have heard about this from other wolf-artists, but you still probably know more about wolf/puma anatomy than I ever will lol

AAHHHhhh I did it again ; ^ ; sorry for the wall of text. Amazing work as always, friend~!

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Cryingcloud1999 In reply to ThePunkCat [2015-07-03 17:48:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 

Sorry for the late reply  

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