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Published: 2010-11-23 19:33:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2430; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 15
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... I guess this turned out well. I worked too hard in the boxes, I think I twisted their personalities and made it worse, the flow of this page sucks, and the dialogues are so crappy I want to hit myself. I tried to make it humorous and kid-safe ... but it appears I fail at that, too.
Edit: I forgot to tell you guys I had my own OC in the comic. Her name is Missie the Bandit. Err~ ... She was supposedly dating Bandy Andy in a quiz show ... until she started fangirling around and hugging James Bandit. Ohoho~ Oh, and Keke18, I had your bandit design added to the panel where it showed a blue bandit with a handkerchief.
So err~ ... Yeah this is my contest entry. I had three weeks of disciplinary and exhausting work. Ahaha.
... Do enjoy.
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Dood! This is sooo cool!
It's like straight out from a manga!
Love the expressions you gave them~ X3
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Thanks~ 
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Congrats for winning the contest! Great work!
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Found a few cameos here...
Ace wrote the tattle book...
Ace and Timeman were in the pages of the Tattle Book...
A "Time" Card was left on Quizmo's hat...
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Hehe!
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Hehe, it's always fun to add those in a comic
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Lovely work! ^0^
This makes me think that Goombalina should look up Bandits sometime in the comic. Hehe. That'd be great!
Thank you SO MUCH for entering!
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oh thannnk you I'm going to draw you a picture of bandy andy christmas I LOVE YOUR COMIC THANK YOU VERY MUCH MY BEST FRIEND!
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Cute but spelling/grammar errors make me QQ. I mean, if it's a contest, shouldn't you check that stuff :/
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Yep, all spelling's correct, thanks to dictionary.com!
Thanks for reminding me!
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I seriously LOL'd At Missie's scene. Mostly because... I'm a fangirl too and can relate greatly to that XD;
I'd probably want to hug James too, But he probably wouldn't like that XD
Either way, Awesome comic, and Good Luck in the Contest! ^^
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Bandit fandom here, too.
Thank you! Danke schΓΆn!
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Awesome!
No Problem!
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I am saying this not as your fried, but as an art critic,
This is the best entry so far, in my opinion.
You probably extended it a lot, but it's not a problem, why?
First, That section was way too short and was missing excitement.
Second, This was no random Improvement, you actually tought of what the characters would say, and adapted them to their personality perfectly, Not to mention you added your own character for an small(Kind of...) cameo, And made everyone look amazing!
The Shading is just Unbelivable, I can't say it's perfect, but you did an excellent job, Adding a bit to each part, but not so much that the shading looked like the spotlight of the comic.
The Background, it might look simple, but it doesn't look bad at all, Actually, You didn't make it perfect, of course, but you captured the ssence of where tehy are, and taht's what matters for now, and after all, the characters and aditions make up for it, right?
You didn't just say "Hey! let's make an entry for the contest!" and re-drew a page in two seconds, no.
You extended a short page into something very well though.
I assure you you're going to win, M-*cough*....Ace!
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Hehe!
Oh, and you can call me whatever you want, really.
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