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Description Cinderpelt and Firestar?

There have been many battles over this case, and I have decided to end it once and for all. My views on why Cinderpelt loves Firestar.

1. Why not?

Before I start with the evidence, I just want to say to all non-believers: Why not?
ApprenticeXMentor... Isn't that just cute? Although many of you say that medicine cats can't fall it love, and that Cinderpelt is a dedicated medicine cat, your arguement is weak. Erin Hunter is just the sort of person to stir up this kind of intensive storyline. After all, she made Spottedleaf and Firestar fall in love with each other. She made Leafpool and Crowfeather happen. She made Yellowfang love Raggedstar. Isn't Spottedleaf a dedicated medicine cat? Isn't Leafpool? Isn't Yellowfang? So why not?

2. Rising Storm

Our very first clue comes in Rising Storm. As we know, this is the bigbig book where Fireheart and Sandstorm's relationship starts to blossom.
Many will argue that CINDERPELT was the one to tell Fireheart about Sandstorm's feelings. But look at the way Erin Hunter wrote it:

    "'You talk about her as if she were still alive,' murmured Cinderpelt, closing her eyes. 'Why can't you let her rest with StarClan?'...
    'What's wrong with remembering Spottedleaf?' Fireheart protested.
    'Because while you're dreaming about her, there's another cat - a living one - right under your nose whom you should be thinking about instead.' " - Rising Storm, pg. 154

Although it is supposed to refer to Sandstorm, the "living one" may refer to Cinderpelt also. It may serve as a double meaning. After all, at that time, Cinderpelt and Fireheart were great friends. Cinderpelt may be afraid that just coming up and saying "I love you!" to Fireheart may cause their friendship to break, which will make things even worse, so she inserts her feelings as a subtle message.
Which is why, immediately after Cinderpelt tells Fireheart about Sandstorm, she ends the conversation adruptly. She does not wish to speak more, as she does want Fireheart too. She just said Sandstorm because she panicked when Fireheart asked her who is was.

That's our biggest clue in the book. There is also another one before that:

    "He [Fireheart] tried to catch her eye, but Cinderpelt wouldn't look at him." - Rising Storm, Pg. 53

At first glance, there is nothing much to this sentence, but look at Erin Hunter's choice of word: wouldn't. Why didn't she just say "but Cinderpelt didn't look at him"? Because Cinderpelt was ashamed. She had just received a scolding from her mentor, Yellowfang, so she does not dare to look at Fireheart in the eye. She's embarrased because Yellowfang just scolded her right in front of Fireheart.


3. Dangerous Path

In the beginning, we don't have have evidence, but then we have our first clue:

    "He [ Fireheart ] jumped as an irritated yowling sounded from behind him. 'Fireheart, are you going to be all day?'
    Glancing around, he saw that Sandstorm was waiting or him at the entrance to the burned fern tunnel. 'I've got to go,' he said to Cinderpelt.
    'But-'
    ...Cinderpelt's ears twitched in annoyance. "  - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 39

Although it isn't strong, it's still a clue.

After that encounter, Cinderpelt isn't mentioned much, except for her medicine cat duties. But soon, less than 20 pages later, we get another hint:

    "[ Cinderpelt: ]' Assuming you can spare the time from Sandstorm.'"    - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 53

Even Fireheart starts to feel something after Cinderpelt's words:

    "Fireheart felt uncomfortable. 'I don't know what you mean.'"  - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 53

There aren't much anymore, although Cinderpelt starts to spend more time with Fireheart, as a friend, or at least in Fireheart's point of view. Soon, we have something else:

    "Fireheart glanced admiringly at Sandstorm...
    He was roused from his thoughts when he heard Cinderpelt clearing her throat..."  - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 101

Immediately after that episode, we have our biggest clue:

    "Both she-cats [ Cinderpelt and Sandstorm ] were being very polite to each other, but somehow Fireheart felt it wouldn't take much for them to unsheathe their claws...
     ...Fireheart felt completely baffled by the tension that chilled the air.
    'Good.' Cinderpelt gave him a curt nod, and Fireheart felt her blue gaze trained on his back all the way across the clearing."   - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 104

If you don't guess the score after this, you must be mouse-brained.
After this, there is one more, but it's not very obvious:

    "Cinderpelt's voice was strained as she moved closer to Fireheart and pressed herself against him." - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 221

You might not think there is anything odd about this sentence, but look at Erin Hunter's choice of word: "strained".
Why would Cinderpelt's voice be strained? It's not because of the dog pack, which was their conversation topic. We have evidence because of what she says to Bluestar later on:

    "'No!' Cinderpelt faced her leader. "StarClan did not send the pack. Our ancestors care for us, and they would never disrupt the lie of the forest or destroy a whole Clan for a single grudge. Bluestar, you must believe this.'" - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 225

Isn't it strange that Cinderpelt's voice isn't "strained" as she's talking to "her leader", but it is when she is to Fireheart, even though they are talking about the same thing? Cinderpelt even manages to keep her cool with Bluestar after she names Brightpaw Lostface. The only reason is that she is embarrased at what she did, "mov[ing] closer to Fireheart and press[ing] herself against him."

But that is the last clue we have in Dangerous Path. The book draws to an end, and the Darkest Hour is arriving...

4. The Darkest Hour

There aren't many hints in Darkest Hour, as the plot is focused mainly on Fireheart becoming the fire that would save his Clan.  But before the thick of the action, namely the battle with BloodClan, there are one or two hints dropped carefully inside the book.
We have our first hint when Fireheart is going to the Moonstone to receive his nine lives and his leader name:

    "Sandstorm's green eyes shone as she gazed into Fireheart's.
    ...'Fireheart, come on!' Cinderpelt called from where she was waiting at the entrance to the gorse tunnel. 'We have to reach Highstones by nightfall--and remember I can't move as fast as you.' - The Darkest Hour, Pg. 37

But it is not what it seems. They reach Mothermouth when "the sun was sliding down the sky". That's way before nightfall. We think that Cinderpelt was more frustrated about Sandstorm than reaching the Moonstone on time. After that, not much happens. But then, we have a clue:

    "[ Sandstorm: ]'You're closer to Cinderpelt now than anyone else.'" - The Darkest Hour, Pg. 71

But Sandstorm knows just as well as every other cat in the forest that Cinderpelt is a medicine cat, forbidden to fall in love. Although Fireheart dismisses this, there may be more that meets the eye. After all, in love issues, we all know that tomcats are pathetically pathetic. Fireheart needs Cinderpelt to tell him about Sandstorm before he figures out the score. Also, Cloudtail is really mousebrained when he completely ignores Brightheart to work with Daisy. But Sandstorm is a she-cat. She knows exactly how Cinderpelt feels. After all, if you see the above quote under "2. A Dangerous Path", "both she-cats were being polite to each other" and that their claws were both unsheathed. So there.

After this, the heat of battle starts to arise, and all romance disappears except or when the newly-named Firestar tells Sandstorm that he loves her. But that is not all. We now have the New Prophecy to await us.

5. Twilight

I was too lazy to check before Twilight, but let me just say a few words.

When the New Prophecy comes, all the main characters in the original series are shelved: you now see firestar, sandstorm, graystripe, cinderpelt, etc. in a new light. Now that they're shelved, we are very unlikely to pick up signals, but Cinderpelt still plays a main-ish role: as Leafpool's mentor and ThunderClan's medicine cat for 4 - 5 books.

So, why did I look at Twilight? Because Twilight is the big book where Leafpool and Crowfeather's relationship takes a big hike upwards. Cinderpelt, sensing this, will remember her own young and foolish days were she was in love with Leafpool's father. Although her secrets are quite well buried, her time to time tantrums tell as much. We get out first hint after Leafpool finds herself missing Crowfeather:

    "Leafpool narrowed her eyes. Her Clanmates had only just left the clearing. Was Cinderpelt deliberately keeping her away from Crowfeather?" - Twilight, Pg. 89

The answer is simple: Yes, absolutely! This is because Cinderpelt wants to prevent Leafpool from making the same mistake that she did so long ago.
But this is brushed under the carpet, only to be picked up again much later in the book, when Cinderpelt catches Leafpool and Crowfeather together:

    "'Leafpool!' Cinderpelts tone hardened as she lashed her tail. 'Crowfeather belongs to a different Clan, but that's only the beginning. You're a medicine cat. You can't fall in love. Not with Crowfeather, not any cat. You have always known that.'
    ...'It's not fair!' she [Leafpool ] meowed. 'I've got feelings too, just like any other cat.'
    ...Every word she [Cinderpelt ] spoke tore into Leafpool like a badger's fangs. Fury surged inside her. 'You can't possibly understand!' she spat. 'You've never been in love!'
    Cinderpelt's blue gaze rested on her, unspoken thoughts flickering like minnows in her eyes." - Twilight, Pg. 246

What are these "unspoken thoughts"? There are no explanations for this, except for one: That Cinderpelt is thinking about the cat she loved, and possibly still loves: Firestar. But it doesn't stop here.

    "'It's easy for you,' Leafpool went on bitterly. 'You've never wanted anything else.'
    The medicine cat flexed her claws, and her neck fur began to rise. 'How do you know what I want?' There was the hint of a snarl in her voice. 'How do you know what hopes I gave up to follow to path StarClan laid down for me?'
    Leafpool flinched. She had never seen Cinderpelt this angry.
    ...Cinderpelt's eyes flashed and she launched herself at Leafpool, claws out."  - Twilight, Pg. 246-7

Hold on a second, something doesn't add up. Claws out? Cinderpelt is gentle and kind. Would she use claws to discipline her apprentice? Yes, because Leafpool's words struck her harder than any badger fang. "How do you know what I want?" Leafpool doesn't know a thing about her mentor's history. Cinderpelt feels unfair and misjudged when Leafpool argues with her about a topic every medicine cat finds jumpy: love.

6. But...

Although I have included loads and loads of points on why it is true, many of you non-believers will still try to argue. Therefore, i have created a column here to answer all your arguements.

1. Fireheart never loved Cinderpelt!

Precisely! That's my point! Fireheart never loved Cinderpelt, but Cinderpelt loved Fireheart dearly. It's called one-sided love, my friend.

2. Cinderpelt's a med cat so she can't fall in love...

As I said, Erin Hunter made Spottedleaf and Firestar fall in love with each other. She made Leafpool and Crowfeather happen. She made Yellowfang love Raggedstar. Isn't Spottedleaf a dedicated medicine cat? Isn't Leafpool? Isn't Yellowfang? So why can't Cinderpelt fall in love too?

3. Fireheart's waaaaaaaaaaay too old for Cinderpelt.

Although Fireheart may be a lot olden than Cinderpelt, so what? There have been many cases of cats taking mates that are a lot older/younger than he/she is.

EXAMPLES: 1. Ferncloud and Dustpelt (They have like... 7 kits?!)
                   2. Sorreltail and Brackenfur

INCIDENTALLY, Sorreltail is the mother of Cinderpelt's reincarnated self. Isn't it a coincidence? Perhaps Erin Hunter planned it that way, because Sorreltail fell in love with a cat much older than her, just like Cinderpelt ))

~ End ~
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Comments: 47

rogersangel [2021-05-09 02:29:58 +0000 UTC]

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Moonfur1717 [2019-05-27 19:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Firestar and Cinderpelt’s kits?
What would they look like?

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SpottedWave [2014-08-07 02:58:15 +0000 UTC]

I think some people think medicine cats have hearts of stone XD like they can't fall in love. They can, Its just against the rules to take a mate...

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ShastaToEpic [2014-06-12 22:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Thankkk you for making this! Im currently in a agument with my BFFL (Now XBFFL.) about Cinderpelt. Im on your side.

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Hyperbreeze [2013-10-08 22:32:17 +0000 UTC]

I still dont like Cinderpelt and Firestar. Im more of a SandxFire shipper.

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khasaki [2013-09-27 21:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Poor cinderpelt...I can understand her :/

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CaptainKiwi101 [2013-03-22 02:36:11 +0000 UTC]

But-but..why do people complain? Cinderpelt did love Firestar. Erin Hunter said so~!
It don't matter if Firestar didn't like her X3 All arguments are now invalid

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Phoenix-10-16 [2012-12-21 14:39:05 +0000 UTC]

YOU MUST BELIEVE

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scooberk [2012-11-11 12:35:42 +0000 UTC]

i agre with you and i must say this is well planed out

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ShinigamiKitten [2012-09-03 04:17:27 +0000 UTC]

I always thought Cinderpelt was in love with Firestar. Never had any doubt about that. x'D

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Mermaid-Girl-13 [2012-03-27 03:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Woah! Great reasons!

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sorralwing [2011-12-23 01:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome argument

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Bramblethornn [2011-10-04 10:17:43 +0000 UTC]

Hey can I gave the link in my utube description for a speedpaint ill be doing soon?? I'll make sure you get all the copyright and I don't want to just copy stuff without ur permission. Please reply, please.

Very wonderful and good point. I never really supported FireXSand

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cailycat45 [2011-08-28 02:13:35 +0000 UTC]

im not a big fan of sandstorm...i guess you could say that i hate her XD lol well, cinderpelt and fireheart/firestar could be the BEST warriors couple EVER 1. they are best friends 2. its easy to tell that she loves him and 3. even though cinderpelt was an med cat doesnt mean she cant fall in love like the other cats.

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cassie203 [2011-07-17 01:12:00 +0000 UTC]

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send it to her she might get it published

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cassie203 [2011-07-17 01:10:25 +0000 UTC]

i agree with u
cinderpelt was always in love with firestar
u r a very good writer dont quit at this u can send this to erin hunter and maybe she will write a book about cinderpelt in love with firestar(heart)
i loved that story
keep on writing

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midnightthefox [2011-01-12 04:03:38 +0000 UTC]

also when she was dying she came clean with leafpool and told her that he loved firestar.

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renadarling [2010-12-05 21:16:52 +0000 UTC]

In an Erin Hunter chat, Vicky Holmes revealed that Cinderpelt had always been in love with Firestar, but Firestar had never known.

You are super dee-duper right mi amigo. (:

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Nightshine156 [2010-05-13 05:48:00 +0000 UTC]

I love you for making this! It makes me love this shipping even more than before.

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The-Skykian-Archives [2010-04-03 02:54:40 +0000 UTC]

And Firestar isn't even that much older than her! A few days after he was made a warrior, Cinderpaw was made his apprentice. If anything, he's only about half a year older than her! 8'D

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Pinkstar14 [2009-08-01 08:26:31 +0000 UTC]

OMSC! OMDF! WTF? UR NOT LAZY!!! NOT AT ALL! Medicine cats are like Jedi: They CAN fall in love, they just aren't allowed to.

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Kafoo329 [2009-06-02 23:55:30 +0000 UTC]

nice agument! i think it would be sweet if in her reincqarnated self cinderpelt/heart fell in love again!
She SOOOO disverves a mate! mabye its lionblaze?
who knows?

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CelesteStorywriter [2009-05-03 00:15:49 +0000 UTC]

...I think you've just made me fall in love with this shipping.

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TsukaimonBOOM [2009-04-26 23:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Firestar is only six months older than Cinderpelt. Why are people going around saying she was WAAAAAY to young? Spottedleaf was WAAAAAY older than Firestar. She already had her med. cat name, so likely she was older than twelve moons, while Firestar was exactly six months. Think about THAT FireXCinder haters.

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ThePurgatoryPirate [2009-04-07 18:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Awesome points! I do really like CinderXfire. ^^

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NightOfTheClans [2009-04-03 21:03:17 +0000 UTC]

well,firestar isnt exactly too old because right after hes a newly made warrior cinderpelt becomes his apprentice,so theres not much of an age difference

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dietywolf [2009-02-19 01:04:55 +0000 UTC]

I have always had this thought flicker in my mind since I read Dangerous path. not to mention Feathertail and Crowfeather! Feathertail is waaay older than him! She was born in the end of book 3 Forest of Secrets! but I still love CrowxFeather. Also with Ashfur loving Squirrelflight. I absolutely adore Cinderpelt and this is just another little boost!

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sunheart04 [2008-11-23 21:43:04 +0000 UTC]

wow this is awesome, great job! i am a big cinder x fire fan

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GrayKitty [2008-11-17 23:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww I love this...! Now you've got me hooked on CinderxFire

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Amberstarthunder [2008-06-07 11:18:04 +0000 UTC]

This is really well done, and I agree. I am more of a SpottedXFire fan, but I also love CinderXFire.

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cailycat45 In reply to Amberstarthunder [2011-08-28 02:16:44 +0000 UTC]

the thing is, spottedleaf is dead or else they would be mates, but he had cinderpelt all along but didnt notice it.

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Sootfeather [2008-05-22 22:20:37 +0000 UTC]

on a Warrior Cats website i'm on I sopke to the real Erin Hunter and she said that Cinderpelt loved Firestar. I also remember this passage in the books that you mentioned:

"Both she-cats [ Cinderpelt and Sandstorm ] were being very polite to each other, but somehow Fireheart felt it wouldn't take much for them to unsheathe their claws...
...Fireheart felt completely baffled by the tension that chilled the air.
'Good.' Cinderpelt gave him a curt nod, and Fireheart felt her blue gaze trained on his back all the way across the clearing." - A Dangerous Path, Pg. 104

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xSpottedflowerx [2008-05-19 18:24:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm a big Fire x Cinder supporter, thanks for this!

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skyprophecy1 [2008-05-08 01:43:57 +0000 UTC]

You were right all along! Erin Hunter admitted in a live chat that Cinderpelt DID indeed love Fireheart!

In ur FACE, deniers! Bwa ha ha ha ha!

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crystalfoot In reply to skyprophecy1 [2008-05-11 07:21:17 +0000 UTC]

really?? =O zomg .

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Flightstorm [2008-04-22 20:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done; even if it never happened, I love the idea of FirexCinder.

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Kiarigrl101 [2008-04-19 09:44:47 +0000 UTC]

cinderpelt plain and simplely BELONG with fireheart/star. i think erin hunter thought about doing them, but decided against it. but either way, long live CinderxFire!!!!!!!!!!

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kennyID [2008-04-07 21:15:11 +0000 UTC]

This is very well thought out. I always thought she had something hidden like being in love but I could NEVER think who. My friend said she thought it was firestar and I disagreed, she said that Hunter has yet to make an innocent thunderclan medicine cat! then laughed. I still disagreed, but now I do see it.

My friend adds-let's not forget how excited cinderpaw got when fireheart came in after she got hurt. And how he was the only one to make her do her exercises when Yellowfang in all her rude and scary glory couldn't without her complaining

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crystalfoot In reply to kennyID [2008-04-08 08:42:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comment!
i think i can use the first add-on, but not the second, because Fireheart never liked Cinderpelt in the first place. But oh well.

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kennyID In reply to crystalfoot [2008-04-09 21:44:14 +0000 UTC]

No she wouldn't do them when Yellowfang made her but when Firehart asked her she did

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chloerulez [2008-04-04 19:38:28 +0000 UTC]

This really does make me think... You really have done your research, haven't you! Good job!

Now I'm going to ponder over this... And send it to my friend!

~ chloerulez

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crystalfoot In reply to chloerulez [2008-04-05 02:30:18 +0000 UTC]

You're right about that! My books are severely dog-eared now...
And thanks !!!!!!

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Steel-Plated-Bambi [2008-04-04 00:48:53 +0000 UTC]

This was very well put together. You did your research and picked up on quite a few good indicators of the suggested relationship. Even before I got into fanfiction, I believed that Cinderpelt had some feelings for Fireheart. It's a shame that the issue was never really adressed before Cinderpelt's death, but then again, the second series is mainly focused on the second generation.

There's another passage from the first series that I always thought was a subtle clue:

" 'You talk about her as if she were still alive,' murmured Cinderpelt, closing her eyes. 'Why can't you let her rest with StarClan?'...
'What's wrong with remembering Spottedleaf?' Fireheart protested.
'Because while you're dreaming about her, there's another cat - a living one - right under your nose whom you should be thinking about instead.' " - A Dangerous Path, pg. 154

I always thought that her comment about a 'cat right under his nose' had a sort of double meaning, as though she may have been subtley referring to herself as well as Sandstorm. Cinderpelt likely cared too much about Fireheart and their friendship to come right out and say it.

Anywho, this is very well written and I applaud your effort. You make a very convincing argument, and that's the factor that makes or breaks a piece like this. Excellent work.

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crystalfoot In reply to Steel-Plated-Bambi [2008-04-04 10:22:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot! Ok, I've added it in. Will add your name in the author's comments later..

Laziness is a illness that infects many...

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Steel-Plated-Bambi In reply to crystalfoot [2008-04-04 11:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Crap, sorry. That passage should actually be credited to Rising Storm. Sorry about that.

Thanks for adding it though.

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crystalfoot In reply to Steel-Plated-Bambi [2008-04-05 02:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh nvm. I've corrected it already.

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xBramblestarx [2008-04-03 23:16:44 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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