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CSEmber β Moonlight Rabbit
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Published: 2016-06-10 22:06:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 282; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Ok, the subject is rather...unusual, if I can say so. Not complaining, just an opinion. But the technique, well, it's another matter: I like how this pic is really full of light, but it's not a strong one, instead it's a dim, relaxing one. The outline is not strongly defined, but the shapes are still clear and recognizable. My compliments
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Not sure what you mean by unusual, but thanks ^.^
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I just meant that not everyday somebody draws a winged rabbit in a sphinx pose under the moonlight: it's quite an original idea
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The piece is rather unique and for that I very much enjoy it. Β It has its own element of simplicity that adds to it while simultaneously having a great deal of meaning to it. Though I have a few critiques. I would have loved to see the wings also reflected in the water with the same vibrancy as the rabbit. Though that may be a personal thing. As well as a little more colour variation to the bushes. It would surprise you what adding a few tones of greens and yellows, blurring them together and stepping back can make. Not all leaves are the same shade of green and adding that variety will add just a little more depth to them. The sky is very empty maybe a few stars would have helped complete the space. Adding slightly more depth to the sky, and interestingly with stars you could make them unique in how you shape them putting even more of yourself into the piece. Overall the piece is beautiful and unique, it holds a calm peaceful feeling making it a relaxing image to look at. While its bright moon contrasting with the dark sky helps bring attention to itself. Overall its a lovely piece dear <3Β Β
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Thanks so much for the critique. It's great to see what other people think of my work.
I know I might have gone a bit under-detailed in some things, but I was trying to balance the simple, soft image and keep the focus solely on the center of the image. I was afraid that if I added stars and things like that it would detract from the strength of the focus.
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As long as the colours of your focus are the more vibrant it will be alright. Your stars could even be faded, they don't have to be a bright white but a soft grey. Don't worry though, You did lovely <3
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I'll keep it in mind if I ever do another picture in that style again ^-^ Thanks
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This is very nice. I love that you included the reflection in the water. This is a very nice piece. Though the two foreground bushes look a tad rushed. I love how the wings are essentially 'framing' the moon. Great work.
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Thanks a lot for the comment ^.^
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