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Description "why?" -asked fluttershy as her tears disappeared into the clear morning waters of the river. such a simple question but bearer of a painful answer. why lying to her? why betraying her trust? why kiki?...WHY?

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or whatever...
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AlexKazhdan In reply to ??? [2013-11-11 21:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Huh? This isn't Cloudsdale.

What is the meaning of this? Just a second ago I was at home, working on my latest order, and suddenly I find myself-

Oh... Hello, gentlemen. I believe we haven't met before. My name is Rarity. And what are your names?

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-12 03:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Raven: Whispers to Deadpool Notice the sudden change in the tone? Flirter.

Dr. X
: Hello to you too, milady. Tips his hat and bows respectfully You may call me Doctor X.

(OoC: Took me a while to manage to find a suitable plz for AJ. Is there some sort of place where I can see a collection of these plzs?)

Beg yer pardon, Rarity, but Ah reckon this ain't the time for flirtin', 'cause we oughta figure out how we-

Pinkie Pie??? What in tarnation are you doing here too??

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-12 03:38:04 +0000 UTC]

Here is the most complete guide available. I always use it.

I bet she's flirting with me!

Silly Applejack! Can't you see? We're having a party! And you are here to join us!

By the way, let me introduce you to my very special friends. You already met Doctor X. This is Raven, and this is Deadpool!

The one and only!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-12 06:32:45 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Thanks)

Raven: Dude, she can't even see your face! How do you expect her to think you're charming?

Wait, what?

(OoC: And in case you forgot, this conversation involves seven peo-....... characters, and you're in control of four, and two of'em were silent in your past comment)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-13 01:26:32 +0000 UTC]

One of your characters was silent in your latest comment.

Looks aren't all that matters. My masculine charm is irresistable! Any lady will tell you that.

Oh, I see! Applejack, these are humans, who came from another world. Twilight told me all about them.

For Celestia's sake, Rainbow Dash! Don't just stand there with your mouth open. Introduce yourself to these lovely people.

... Right!

Name's Rainbow Dash! The most awesome Pegasus in all of Equestria!

Well, that will do. Now you, Applejack. We need to make a good impression on these gentlemen.

And yes, I'm keeping Pinkie Pie silent in this comment to prevent things from getting too confusing.

See you in the next comment!

Pinkie! I thought I told you to remain silent.

Sorry!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-13 03:30:50 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: That's one character. Plus, the Doctor doesn't always talk)

Raven: Facepalms at Deadpool's remark

Well, shoot. Howdya t'yall! Name's Applejack! Pleasure to be makin' yer acquaintance!

Raven: Is shaking his hand with her hoof Likewise, I suppose...

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-14 13:47:19 +0000 UTC]

You're really good at making excuses. You know that, don't you?

Okay, split screen time!

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Oh my! That hat of yours is absolutely gorgeous, Doctor. Do you mind if I ask where you purchased it? Is it a custom job?

You see, Rarity here is an fashion expert. Fashion is her passion!

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So, your name's Raven, huh? Is that even a real name?

Look who's talking. What kind of a name is Rainbow Dash?

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-14 14:01:33 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Meh. I adapt with logic)

Dr. X: Ah, you mean this old thing? Takes off his hat, holding it in front of him I must admit that it is quite fashionable, though it is not worth to brag about, frankly. I searched for a very long time for a hat that is adaptable to my tastes in fashion, yet I failed, which is why I made this one, which eventually leads me to say yes, it is a custom job. (Yes, he speaks quite a lot..... usually....)

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Raven: Lemme handle that.

Whoa there, Rainbow, that ain't a very nice thing ta say-

Raven: 'Least the people who mock me can't say something like "Rainbow Crash".



Raven: ...... Thank you, Wade.

(OoC: Well, I suspect he'd be handling the drums there)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-14 18:41:19 +0000 UTC]

So the Doctor doesn't always talk, but when he does, he talks a lot? That actually reminds me of myself.

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Wait, you made it yourself?

The quality is amazing! What material is that?

(That would be really funny if it's leather...)

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Hey! Who told you about that?

HAH! IN YOUR FACE!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 00:54:46 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: No, Wade, you can't shoot Alex in the leg because he didn't reply yet)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 00:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Give the guy some time, dude! Controlling four characters at the same time isn't easy. Writing my lines alone is hard enough!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 01:04:12 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Wha- Hey!! You're the one who said you're gonna shoot him!)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 01:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me?! Deadpool, explain yourself.

What?!! I never said anything like that! I swear!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 02:10:23 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: The Doctor's lying detector says otherwise)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 03:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Alright, DP. Now it's your turn to get stuffed with chimichangas!

Pa-lease! Over the years, I've eaten so much chimichangas, that I'm immune to them.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 03:23:15 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: And he has a healing factor, so I say we instead burn the chimichangas!)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 03:25:41 +0000 UTC]

That's actually a great idea!

Wait. You can't be serious... Right?

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 03:27:38 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: )

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 03:33:39 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOO!!!!!!!! This is too painful. I can't look!

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AlexKazhdan In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 10:21:33 +0000 UTC]

You're evil.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-23 17:20:02 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: EVIL! EEEEEEEEEEEVIIIIILLLLLLL!!!!!!!! )

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-23 17:27:50 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking more like this .

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-23 17:29:43 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Been years since I watched that movie)

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 03:37:09 +0000 UTC]

( TINK
OoC: Ok, so, who's up for some crispy chimichangas? Man, that oven sure shows a lotta fire... Oh, well. These chimichangas are crispy and not burnt, so it's all good)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 10:22:14 +0000 UTC]

I have no words... And that's saying something!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 10:33:40 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Well, I can be crazier than you, Pinkie and Discord all of you combined sometimes)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 12:02:30 +0000 UTC]

This isn't craziness, this is amorality!


Serious Deadpool: As if we know the meaning of he word...


Child Deadpool: I actually have no idea what it means.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 13:30:54 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Craziness)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 20:23:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I know I made a typo in my previous comment.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 20:25:05 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: You didn't. I was talking to Wade, anyways)

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-14 23:36:45 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Usually, yes. He's a rambler, see, though more of a rambler like Twilight, but he knows how to simplify)

Dr. X: It is a combination of both fabric and cotton, to ensure that it maintains warmth on my head and also to feel comfortable, and evidently by usage over the years, it was quite a success.

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Raven: Oh, so you were called like that? I was thinking that it was a possibility, but now, you confirmed that it actually happened.



(OoC: Couldn't find a better face) Hahaha! Sure got ya right there, RD!

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 01:42:37 +0000 UTC]

The Doctor didn't answer my question.

But that's no biggie. I forgive you!

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How long have you had it for?

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Look, that was a long time ago! Let's just forget about it, okay?

Does anyone else hear those drum rolls, or are they just another noise in my head?

Serious Deadpool: You do realise you are offending us, right?

Child Deadpool: Yeah, we aren't noises! We're your best friends!

Oh right, how could I forget...

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 02:16:28 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Technically, he already did answer you, Pinks)

Dr. X: Hmm........... Puts his hat back on I suppose......... I am not certain, frankly, but it must have been with me for years.

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Raven: Whatever you say, Rainbow Crash. Just think twice 'fore you try to mock me.

Well, Ah reckon that's a nice name there.

But Ah can't say the same fer "Deadpool". What sort o'name's that? No offense, but that's a little tad weird, if ya ask me.

(OoC: Wade! You're supposed to be the one doing the drums!)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-15 03:30:44 +0000 UTC]

It still looks as good as new.

Actually, I was wondering. Why do you always wear a mask and sunglasses? Are you secretly an invisible man?

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Ah, you see, I get my name because I can't die. In other words, I'm at the bottom of the "dead pool", get it?

Come on, that can't be true! Only Celestia and Luna are immortal.

Oh, so you think!

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Wait, what? How am I supposed to do the drums without the drums?

Serious Deadpool: Unless that tall, dark and handsome man has got a drum kit hidden in that magical jacket of his.

Child Deadpool: Or bongos!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 03:44:06 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: You're the goddarn Deadpool! You break the Fourth Wall but can't bring out drums and sticks? 'Sides, you can just teleport and get those stuff in, like, five seconds)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-16 00:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, my teleportation device is having a day off.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-16 02:57:49 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: ....... Dude, really.......)

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-15 03:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Dr. X: Flinches at Pinkie's question, though apparently pays it no heed I clean it daily, and do other things to ensure that it remains presentable and quite good with me. So, there is no wonder it seems new.

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Can ya prove that ya can't die?

Raven: Pulls out a knife and stabs Deadpool in the heart with it

What in tarnation?!!!

Raven: Sorry if that hurt a little too much, Wade.

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-16 01:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, looks like a certain OC might have a very interesting backstory. The suspense is building!

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So, according to Twilight, you are a scientist. What sorts of things do you study? By the way, I apologise in advance for my poor knowledge of science.

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Ugh... Talk about a heartbreaker! Ladies, give me a second... There! See, no harm done?

That. Was. So. AWESOME!!! It healed so quickly! How did you do that? Is this magic?

Magic schmagic! This is called a healing factor. It's in my DNA.

What is "D and A"?

*facepalm* Need an egghead here!

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-16 02:56:59 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: Aaand I'll be honest, I still don't have a full idea of the backstory)

Dr. X: Ah, there is absolutely no need to apologize. And the things I study are every. Single. Aspect.

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........... Whoa.......

Raven: It's D-N-A. DNA is............ Well, to simplify it for someone like you, it's basically what makes your body different from anyone else's.

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-16 03:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Do you mind giving an example?

Ooh, tell her about that machine! What was it called... The Corno-sphere!

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I don't get it.

You should ask your nerdy princess friend. I'm sure she can explain better.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-16 05:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Dr. X: It is called the chronosphere, Ms. Pinkamena. And there are numerous aspects for me to set an example, Ms. Rarity. (Ironically, that should please her) Hmm........ I suppose the simplest aspect would be chemistry and alchemy.

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Raven: It's what makes your hair a mix of colours and AJ's blonde.

Hmm...... Ah think that sounds a tad familiar..... Maybe Ah heard 'bout that D-and-A once in class when Ah was a filly.

Buuut Ah didn't really pay much attention back in science class.

Raven: She definitely would pay attention to apple bucking class.

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-16 16:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so that's what it's called!

Did you say "alchemy"? That's sounds most intriguing! It is about turning common materials into precious ones, isn't it?

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Do they even teach apple bucking in schools?

Anyway, why are you wearing that maks?

Oh, it's because I'm so incredibly handsome that anyone who sees my face would instantly fall for me. Which can often cause problems... But jokes aside, you really don't wanna see my face.

Child Deadpool: Why don't you just show her?

Serious Deadpool: Because Equestria is not ready for this.

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AlexKazhdan In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-28 03:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Epic typo.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-16 17:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Dr. X: Ah, your guess is absolutely correct, though it is very simplified, yet that is not bad.

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Raven: ....... Good point. But I'm pretty sure they do if it's an apples school.

Incredibly handsome, huh? Now, why can't Ah believe that.....

Raven: You don't wanna see his face. Trust me.

Well, alright...

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-16 17:24:25 +0000 UTC]

As a fashionista, I'm interested in all things precious. Especially gemstones!

I think you can guess it from her cutie mark.

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That's a cool-looking belt! What does this button do?

Hey, no touching! It's my teleportation device. I can teleport, just like your friend Twily.

With this little thing? Prove it!

Unfortunately, the "little thing" decided to take a rest today, so I can't show you how it works.

Yeah, right...

So you don't believe me, huh? Hey, Doc! Would you be so kind and fix this device for me?

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-16 18:32:47 +0000 UTC]

Dr. X: Yes, I know-

Hey, Doc! Would you be so kind and fix this device for me?

Dr. X: Oh, very well. I suppose it is an opportunity to display my knowledge in science. Takes the belt from him, then walks over to his reading chair and sets the belt on the table in front of it as he takes a seat, pulling out a small case from his formal jacket (A piece of his default outfit for you, Alex)

Are ya gonna repair that belt with that small case? Not sure if ya got enough tools there....

Raven: I thought you had the ability to teleport, not that you use a belt.....

(OoC: I did too. Are you serious?)

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-16 19:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Sadly, teleportation wasn't on the list of superpowers Weapon X gave me, so I have to rely on this device instead. I don't even remember where I got it from, but I've been using it for years. It does its job. Most of the time...

That's a rather unusual belt. I'm not sure what it's made of, but it looks very... "stylish".

Oooh, sciencey stuff!

That case does look small.

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DrX-Raven In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-11-16 19:49:58 +0000 UTC]

(OoC: ....... Seriously? He uses a belt and it isn't in his superpowers? All this time, it's 'cause of the belt?)

Dr. X: Puts the case on the table, then presses it with one finger........ which made it open up into a very large case, filled with so many equipment that most of which not even Twilight can define

Whoa!! What in the hay?!!

Raven: Ah, the good ol' case.

Dr. X: Pulls out a pair of small glasses and puts them on top his blackout shades I work better without an audience, so if you do not object....

Raven: Alright, people. The Doctor's gotta work. Off we go.

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AlexKazhdan In reply to DrX-Raven [2013-11-16 20:13:39 +0000 UTC]

As you like to say, "Eeeyup. "

And I should probably point out the grammatical errors in your description of the Doctor's actions. But I'm not gonna do that.

That's a LOT of stuff!

How does it even fit in that small case?

Come on, guys. Let's give the Doctor some privacy. In the meantime, can I have a closer look at your jacket, Mr Raven?

Careful, lady! You might get lost in that jacket.

Child Deadpool: How does that thing even work?

Serious Deadpool: Shh! Never question the utility jacket, remember?

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