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CSImadmax — THE TOWN: part 12
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"why?" -asked fluttershy as her tears disappeared into the clear morning waters of the river. such a simple question but bearer of a painful answer. why lying to her? why betraying her trust? why kiki?...WHY?tune in next week for more drama. same bat-time same bat-channel!
or whatever...
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(OoC: Uhh........... And my grammar there was good enough. And good to see someone remembered not to question the Jacket)
Raven: Is glaring hard at Rarity Not by a long shot. This jacket's worth a hay load more than your manecut.
Ya really like that jacket, don'cha?
Raven: Well, I didn't win it at a bizarre, plus it was hard enough to get this, which is one hundred percent compatible for what I want.
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And how do you know how much my manestyle costs?
What do you need so many pockets for?
Oh, Raven keeps all sorts of stuff in his pockets. Like cakes! And lollipops! And-
Pinkie, I think you should stop right there. Unless you wanna set off another "war and peace" discussion. The same goes for you, Deadpool.
What did I do?!
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(OoC: Forgot AJ there)
Wait a minute! Lemme get this straight: That jacket costs a hundred grand o'bits???
Raven: Approximately, yes.
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Raven: Well, I'm pretty sure your manestyle doesn't cost a hundred thousand bits.
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Well, no... It's not that expensive.
A HUNDRED THOUSAND BITS?!! That's insane!
I bet your hat doesn't cost nearly as much, AJ.
Which makes me wonder... Where did you get all that money, Rave?
Serious Deadpool: For all we know, he could be a mercenary, just like us.
Child Deadpool: What? Oh hell no! We don't need no stinkin' competition!
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Consederin' that I won it in the Ponyville Fair while bobbin' for apples, it sure don't. If anythin', it cost me two bits.
(OoC: www.youtube.com/watch?v=uWcxeB… )
Raven: Too laaaaate. I am a mercenary. Insane for people.... or ponies with normal jobs. Me? You'll be surprised at how much some of my clients pay.
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Yes, I saw that video. But Rainbow Dash meant the hat's retail price. I guess we'll never know.
Well, I guess that makes your hat a real...
...bang for the buck!
I'm really curious as to what sort of job you have, Mr Raven.
Actually, all this time I haven't thought of asking you. What do you do?
Uh oh!
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Oh, yer' gonna get it, RD! Glomps her into a wrestle (Just a friendly wrestle is all. Nothin' to worry about. Pretty sure that's how they settle things, especially since neither of'em would get hurt in the process, so no worries)
Raven: Well, you could call me a 'taskmaster'. No pun intended.
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Girls! That's no way to behave! Stop this right-
Oh forget it.
I see what you did there, Rave.
And what about you, Deadpool? What do you do?
Me? Uhh... The same things he does! Except I'm also a party organiser .
Like me?
Yeah, I guess you could say that...
Child Deadpool: Hah! She has no idea. Our last party was a BLAST!
Serious Deadpool: Perhaps we shouldn't have replaced all the firecrackers with dynamite.
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(OoC: NO, WADE. I won't give you any poisons to put in a chimichanga to give to Alex)
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I'm not falling for this again.
Thank you!
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(OoC: Seriously, though. It isn't that hard to RP characters, even if they're a handful)
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Easy for you to say. You're controlling 3 characters, 2 of which are a basically you. I'm controlling 4 characters, and neither of them is anything like me.
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(OoC: Oh, for criminy..... Here, lemme show you how it's done. Note that it's just an example)
Agh.... I-I took it easy on you, ok?! Besides, I still didn't eat my lunch! And I had to do some warm-ups!
Well, I hope the two of you are finally done....
Whoa-hoa there! You're scaring little ol' me with those eyes! You sure you're not related to Fluttershy or something?
Is everything ok??
(OoC: There. Was that so hard? The hardest part was just finding the right icons)
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Wow, you're really good at this! Why do you even need me?
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(OoC: 'Cause it's apparently more fun. And it's not that I'm 'good at it'. It's about knowing the characters well enough to anticipate what they'll do and what decisions they'll make. That's one of the critical parts of making comics, like the one we're commenting on right now)
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Well, it stops being fun for me as soon as it turns into a chore.
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(OoC: Well, me waiting for your reply is like when you're waiting for someone you're expecting to join into your multiplayer game)
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Raven: Flinches, then turns to Deadpool with a scary lool, then speaks with gritted teeth Don't you dare call me "Rave" again. Ever!
Has Rainbow tied up with her lasso Ha! Guess Ah win, sugarcube. Again.
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Pause
Well, I guess it's time to "drop it". End of-
Woah, woah, woah! Hold on a second! If we end this now, who is gonna fix my teleportation device? I need that thing, you know!
I actually totally forgot about that...
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Dr. X: Ironically, I am finished with it. I believe that I must sum and simply tell you that it will be much more efficient now. The explanation is quite simple, yet I believe that neither Alex nor Raven wish to continue this any longer.
Raven: Is cleaning Shredder silently
Dr. X: ........ That aside, there is your belt after modificating it. Hands the belt to Deadpool
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Ah, thanks! Hey, wait a minute... What have you done?! There's so many new buttons! They're making my head spin!!! And if the story ends here, I don't even get to test them! It's not fair!
Ugh... Fine. If we continue the story, will it make you happy?
YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES, YES-
Okay, okay, I get it! Now we need to convince Raven to get back into action. Look, Raven, I'm sorry. Don't be mad at me. We need you in order to continue the story. Will you join us?
Pretty pleeeeease!
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(OoC: BTW, if it helps, think of this as if you're helping me write a story. That is the secret of writing stories, anyway: You know the character's personality well enough to write a good story with them in it, whether they're the main characters or supporting characters)
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(OoC: Goddangit! I forgot about that typo! Ugh....... Let's try this again)
Raven: Flinches, then turns to Deadpool with a scary look, then speaks with gritted teeth Don't you dare call me "Rave" again. Ever!
Has Rainbow tied up with her lasso Ha! Guess Ah win, sugarcube. Again.
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Hahahahaha! Look at you, Dashie! You're all wrapped up like a birthday present!
Well, I must admit that was quite amusing.
Yeah, yeah, whatever... Untie me already!
Hey, ladies! Forget your silly fights and check this out! Doc fixed my teleportation device!
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Heh. You got it. I will.
Riiight after ya promise not to make fun o-mah hat again.
Raven: Ooooh, that oughta be nice to hear.
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Well, so much for trying to take the spotlight.
Serious Deadpool: Our time will come. Let them sort out their business first.
Child Deadpool: Pinkie promise? What the f*ck is a pinkie promise?
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Raven: Right after finishing his presentation, he went off to get a spotlight and set its lights on Deadpool
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(OoC: The whole speech thingie in the other comment)
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Alright. I promise not to make fun of your hat again.
Pinkie promise?
Are you kidding me?
You have to do it, or you will be left tied up...
...FOREVER!
Ugh... Fine! Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye. Happy?
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Yup! That'll do real nice. Pulls one end of the rope, untying her in a second automatically
Raven: Fillies and-!........ Well, just fillies..... I present to you now, in person, the teleportation device of Deadpool! Show'im, 'Pool!
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Thank you! And now... prepare yourselves to be AMAZED!
Woah! Where did he go?
Right behind you!
SWEET CELESTIA!
Haha! That was awesome!
Amazing! Just like Twilight does it. Is it a magic belt?
Magic schmagic! It's just highly advanced technology. Too advanced for your little pony brains to comprehend. Hey, what does this button do? *click*
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(OoC: Best face I could find) Suddenly appears above Raven- AHH!! -and falls on top of him
Raven: Ow!! What the hay, Wade?!!
Dr. X: Ah, it teleports the first object that is in the invisible laser line emitting from the base of the belt.
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Sa-WEET! So, basically, I can teleport anything just by aiming my crotch at it?
Serious Deadpool: How ironic...
Child Deadpool: This is awesome! Imagine all the the ways we can use this!
I am impressed, Doctor!
This is amazing! I wish Twilight could see this.
Let's try it again. *Teleports Raven, causing him to reappear on Rainbow Dash's back.*
Hey!
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(OoC: Aaand I forgot AJ.....)
Is a little dizzy from the previous fall Hey y'all...... Why are y'all goin' in circles like that? Shakes her head rapidly a bit
Forget Ah said that....
Raven: Is getting off of Rainbow, then dusts himself off Alright, I've had enough out of this! You do that to me again, and I'll make sure your manhood doesn't regenerate!
Dr. X: This is something that the belt itself was capable of accomplishing. However, it required something that was in my possession for it to be able to reach the highest potential within it. The belt apparently uses Sithronium shards as a source of energy. The Sithronium crystals are a very rare gemstone with an almost never-ending energy source. The belt required at least three shards of Sithronium to be functional, and it did have three. However, to be able to accomplish the highest abilities within it, it requires ten. Fortunately, I possessed seven shards that I used within that belt.
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Okay, okay, I won't do i again. I need my manhood!
Are you alright, Applejack darling?
This is so much fun!
Meh, whatever. Twilight can do that just as easily without any fancy gadgets.
Oh, shut up! This thing is awesome! How far can the laser line reach, Doc?
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Hey look, another typo!
Ah, fudge!
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A little light-headed, is all. Save for that, Ah feel mighty fine.
(OoC: Just wondering, how am I doing with her country accent?)
Raven: Well, Twilight can't teleport herself every few seconds. She'll end up drained up outta energy. But Deadpool here? With that belt, he can keep teleporting on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on till you get dizzy from counting.
Dr. X: I am quite unsure, yet I am fairly certain that it is limited to ten meters.
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You're doing fine. I actually don't like it when people put too much emphasis on her accent. It just looks ridiculous in text form (and hard to read). All you really need is "y'all" and "-in'". I personally think that even "Ah" is unnecessary, but I don't mind it.
Who needs teleportation, when you can fly as fast as me!
And here we go again...
Ten meters? Not bad. Let's test its limit. Now, what shall I try it on...
Hey, try that rock!
*thump!*
OOOF!
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(OoC: The fanfics made me notice that she says "Ah" usually as in "I")
Raven: Look out! Here comes Tom! (Ironically, I just used that rock for something) Anyways, teleportation's much faster than you. I'm a teleporter, so I know.
Not sure if y'all knew, but she'll- (OoC: And this is where RD cuts off AJ and challenges Raven for a race or something)
Dr. X: Allow me. Pulls out a ray gun, which he uses on 'Tom' to levitate it off of Deadpool
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I understand. I just don't think it's really necessary. You won't see it written like this in Quotes on IMDb or on the MLP wiki. "Y'all" and "-in'", on the other hand, are actually written that way.
Faster than ME? We'll see about that! Let's race from here all the way to the top of that hill and back. Don't even think about cheating. You actually have to set foot on that hill top. Everypony else will be watching to make sure it all goes fair. (You've been looking forward to this, weren't you?)
Weeee, let's do it!
Oh well, this might actually be entertaining.
Ughhhh... Thanks Doc! Much appreciated.
Serious Deadpool: We need to be more careful when using this newly upgraded belt.
Child Deadpool: It wasn't our fault! It's the stupid rock!
Serious Deadpool: We can't blame it on the rock. It's not a living thing.
Child Deadpool: Maybe it is! It even has a name.
Serious Deadpool: Whose idea was it to give a name to a rock anyway?
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(OoC: I know. Still, I prefer to be accurate)
Raven: From the way you've been talking up till now - and since I know her from the Iron Pony episode - , you're the last person that talks about playing fair.
Trust me, when things get too hard for'er, she'll do anythin' just to win.
Raven: Ah, it's alright. Doesn't matter how she cheats. I'll win either way.
Black Box that appears next to Child and Serious Deadpools' boxes: A 'discorded' greedy pony named Rarity. (OoC: Yup, that's me)
Dr. X: Tips his hat to Deadpool You are most certainly welcome, Mr. Wilson.
Raven: So, anyways, I do get to teleport, right?
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Hah, I just realised one of the sentences in my previous comment is grammatically incorrect.
Shut up, AJ! Don't listen to her, guys. It's not true!
Silly Dashie! You no Applejack never lies.
After all, she is the element of honesty.
A third box box? Are you kidding me?
Child Deadpool: It's getting crowded here!
Serious Deadpool: We can read your comments as they are, Mister Author. There's no need for you to intrude on our personal space.
Okay, let's settle this once and for all! Your teleportation against my wingpower. You do the countdown, Doctor.
Oh, this is gonna be good!
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(OoC: Didn't see something like that)
Oooh, this oughta be good.
Raven: Simply stretches Do it, Doc.
Dr. X: Very well......... Five.
Raven: Finishes stretching
Dr. X: Four.
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(Accidentally clicked "submit comment" too early. Oh well!)
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It should be, "You've been looking forward to this, haven't you?" And there's two more errors in the following comment! What is wrong with me?!
I am speed! I can't lose!
Good luck, Rainbow Dash!
Yeah, you'll need it.
Please don't be too disappointed if you lose.
Hah! Not gonna happen. :iconsasyendplz:
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(OoC: That sentence is correct. And I can only see "I am speed", depending on what you actually mean)
Dr. X: Three.
Somethin' tells me you will...
Dr. X: Two.
Raven: Let's do this.
Dr. X: ONE!
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