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CuriouslyAlone — End of the Line
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Published: 2015-08-06 20:27:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 2525; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 0
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Description What you do not want to hear
Is that there is no hope

What you do not want to hear
Is that there is no where to run

What you do not want to hear
Is that you failed

What you do not want to hear
Is the snickers and taunts

What you do not want to do
Is let go of the only thing that has meaning to you

What you do not want to do
Is end it all

But what can you do
If all the voices tell you

Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes
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Comments: 7

Verifiety [2022-11-10 20:07:36 +0000 UTC]

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evanightmares [2015-08-06 21:11:14 +0000 UTC]

At first, I thought this was boring; but when I reached the ending, I was excited. So excited I had to reread it again.
A very thoughtful poem.

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CuriouslyAlone In reply to evanightmares [2015-08-06 21:44:55 +0000 UTC]

I very much appreciate it!  

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tiffogirl97 [2015-08-06 21:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I really liked the repetition

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CuriouslyAlone In reply to tiffogirl97 [2015-08-06 21:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
Thank you
Thank you!

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tiffogirl97 In reply to CuriouslyAlone [2015-08-06 21:50:26 +0000 UTC]

I see what you did there

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CuriouslyAlone In reply to tiffogirl97 [2015-08-07 00:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Clever one, aint cha!

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