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Published: 2016-04-04 08:40:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 5611; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Description A roleplay scene between me and ~

Basically, what happened is that Cartman somehow grew into a giant and began to cause chaos and destroy the town. Among the mess, KyleΒ Broflovski manages to save Vic from being crushed by a falling wall but he was unable to move away in time and was crushed instead. So badly, he ended up in the mentioned coma. Rita arrives at the scene too late to help Kyle but instead is able to stop Cartman and turn him back to normal size. The scene takes place after Rita, Stan (Unseen) and Vic were told about Kyle's condition and this scene between Rita and Vic happened.

Something about it caught my attention and thus, drew it. ^^ If I like a scene enough in a roleplay, I'll draw it, 'cause I like showing how I see something through my eyes. And plus, I love when Rita actually opens up to someone and shows that more rare nicer side of herself and revealing a bit more about herself, the fact she's so emotionally strong, she can't even cry if she wants to, only by other means. But what does that even mean..? Who knows. Well, I know, but...

This was also meant as comic practice and to give you guys a view of how my current comic will look once I get the pages done. But they will usually be at least 10+ panels long per page, unless I get stuck. XD But yeah... Hope you guys enjoy~

Also, RitaΒ was meant to be sustaining some injuries, but I felt too lazy to add them. XD Oh well.


Rita, comic (C) Mes~

Vic (C)

Stan, Kyle and South Park belong to Matt Stone and Trey Parker
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Cusackanne In reply to ??? [2020-05-21 17:54:50 +0000 UTC]

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Foxuny [2018-10-30 14:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Why am I seeing all these pretty comics so late.!

Whats wrong with me? QwQ

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Cusackanne In reply to Foxuny [2018-10-30 14:46:43 +0000 UTC]

You hadn't had me watched back then?

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Foxuny In reply to Cusackanne [2018-10-30 14:55:28 +0000 UTC]

mmh Maybe you have Right! owo

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Cusackanne In reply to Foxuny [2018-10-30 15:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.

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marielcatdragon [2017-11-13 22:24:10 +0000 UTC]

poor Rita....i just wanna hug her.....

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Cusackanne In reply to marielcatdragon [2017-11-13 23:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Unless she trusts you, she'll just feel awkward

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marielcatdragon In reply to Cusackanne [2017-11-13 23:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Mariel: *looks at Rita with a calm expression* please trust me Rita..... i won't hurt you.... i promise....

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Cusackanne In reply to marielcatdragon [2017-11-13 23:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Rita: Sorry, I don't work like that. I don't give trust easily.

(She has to bond with someone before she even considers trusting them)

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marielcatdragon In reply to Cusackanne [2017-11-13 23:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Mariel: okay....but....you wanna hang out? since you need to bond with someone in order to start trusting me....Β 

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RuiriosCreator [2017-06-24 03:02:40 +0000 UTC]

I love Vic Β  Β  Β 

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dayle14 [2016-04-10 10:20:34 +0000 UTC]

yikes!, let me guess she's already used up all her tears

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Cusackanne In reply to dayle14 [2016-04-10 10:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Not really. Rita can still cry, just not like everyone else. It takes something extreme for her to even shed tears.

So its not that she doesn't have the tears to spare, she just CAN'T spare them due to making herself very emotionally strong and the fact she tends to stay strong for other people's sake.

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dayle14 In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-10 10:47:48 +0000 UTC]

got it, I had the anime True Tears in my head

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Cusackanne In reply to dayle14 [2016-04-10 10:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol, its okay

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Wilson-22 [2016-04-05 03:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Roleplaying is so fun

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Cusackanne In reply to Wilson-22 [2016-04-05 03:14:09 +0000 UTC]

That it is, been roleplaying for 14 years now. Still going strong. ^^

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Wilson-22 In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-05 03:15:49 +0000 UTC]

I only started for a year and I want to continue to do that.

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Cusackanne In reply to Wilson-22 [2016-04-05 03:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Its a real fun pass time, its like a drug almost, you get addicted and want more. ...Only this is harmless.

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Wilson-22 In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-05 03:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah and that's why I want to do more rping

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rikubattle [2016-04-04 14:37:15 +0000 UTC]

Im feel really sad for Kyle

Where I can find that roleplay?

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Cusackanne In reply to rikubattle [2016-04-04 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. :c

We do our roleplays over Skype so they can't be found.

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rikubattle In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 18:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay

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Cusackanne In reply to rikubattle [2016-04-04 18:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Sorry.

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rikubattle In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 18:46:49 +0000 UTC]

Nothing happens ^^

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Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 11:34:14 +0000 UTC]

The set up was quite good, as Kyle would likely be heroic enough to save someone stuck under rubble like that, even if he was hurt doing so. Then the contrast between Rita and Vic'z reaction in the aftermath: Vic is openly sobbing whereas Rita, despite wanting to do the same, cannot. Plus the artwork itself is incredibly close to the show.

In short, good work.

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 18:32:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad, since I'm the one playing Kyle during this, so it makes me happy to know I was keeping him in character. ^^

Indeed. Rita, having focused on being her brother's rock (Since he cried often) for so long, it just became a huge piece of her personality. Besides working herself to be so emotionally strong to where she can't cry normally, she also gets that urge to stay strong for other people's sake quite often as well, further adding to the reason why she can't cry when Vic totally is openly doing so, thus she instead focuses on her friend, opening up to her slightly and telling her why she can't cry with her and instead, tries to comfort her.

Thanks. ^^ I used screenshot of the Hell's Pass Hospital for the background (Ref'ed it), but its a little lazy. XD Could of been better.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 18:43:57 +0000 UTC]

It's an interesting dynamic she was with both Rick and, in this situation, Vic. It's quite cool.

It looks fine. Β 

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 19:19:33 +0000 UTC]

She does it for any of her close friends (And of course, Rick, especially). If they need a shoulder to cry on, you bet she'll damn well offer hers in a heart beat. Since she's so used to it thanks to Rick and she hates seeing others cry even if she doesn't openly show it at times. But it also helps her lower her guard slightly and thus enabling her to open up slightly since she softens up while trying to comfort her friends.

Glad to hear it. c:

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 19:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and after he was dared to play FNaF, I bet it would happen even more frequently. But I understand how that might be a weakness.

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 19:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Without a doubt. He's more sensitive since he broke under the abuse very badly whereas Rita did break too (With her having issues opening up and trusting people easily, especially with adults) but instead became stronger so Rick would have someone to go to when he needed comfort.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 20:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Which could be how she forms a closer connection to the boys (or to Kyle, at least), given the parallels between her relationship with Rick and Kyle's relationship with Ike.Β 

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 20:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! They both are similar to their brothers, just Rita doesn't mistreat Rick at all. XD But Kyle's been a lot nicer to Ike too over the years and hasn't done "Kick the baby" in ages.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 20:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Well obviously, there would be differences, as Kyle and Ike's mother never abused them (though in the 8th draft of Bigger, Longer and Uncut, Sheila Broflovski would have tried to have her son killed for being a "Canadian Sympathizer") but it's better than having both relationships be exactly the same, as it wouldn't be interesting.

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 21:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Yikes, good thing that was cut out. And exactly, but its the similarities that make it interesting.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 21:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, and considering how many fans hate her for her role in the movie, imagine their reaction if she tried to kill her son. It's good because a lot of OCs often give little and/or an unrealistic reason for the main characters to become friends with them, whereas similarities like this allow the characters to bond in a more organic fashion.

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 21:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I bet she'd be one of the most hated adults if they went through with that.

Indeed. :/ I do try to be as realistic as possible, since friendships can't be bought or just form instantly, they need to be earned and work toward it. It took Rita a long time to even open up to the main boys at all, it wasn't until they and a lot of other kids helped her and Rick expose their mother's crimes that she finally opened up to them and from there, formed friendships with them through different reasons (With her being closest to Stan and Kyle). ...Although she wouldn't call Cartman her friend. XD

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 21:42:22 +0000 UTC]

I feel that many of the adults (maybe barring Randy) don't really have many fans, which is a shame as many of them are quite interesting in their own right.

Funnily enough, the "exposing the crimes of the mother" is a bit similar to the story of another South Park OC, Charlies Pierzynski, though it plays out quite differently to how you've described Rita's situation. And to be honest, nobody except maybe Butters or even Clyde on the odd occasion would call Cartman a friend.

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 21:47:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Randy is one of my favorite adults on the series. Sure, his stupidity can be an annoyance but he has shown time and time again he loves Stan a lot and would do anything for his son. And heck, Randy can be smart too, given on the circumstances.

Interesting, haha. XD Since kids in that show can be just as smart as adults at times and the fact Jessica tended to be drunk like 95% of the time, tricking her was fairly simple and Rita allowed herself to get hurt so the proof would be more legit. And yeah, guess even the evil ones need "some" friends.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 21:56:35 +0000 UTC]

As much as I like Randy, I feel that his appearances have become more excessive, to the point of depriving attention from other characters. However, one of my favourite episodes is the Randy-centric episode The Losing Edge and he can be very funny in newer episodes too (I liked him in Safe Space). However, I think my two favourite adult characters are actually Jimbo and Ned; they provide many humorous scenes in earlier episodes and their military backgrounds as Vietnam veterans makes them distinct.Β 

Yeah, in Charlie's debut fic, it's Kyle just telling the authorities about her mother's abusive behaviour after she hospitalized her daughter by forcing her to drink bleach, and Charlie subsequently testifying against her mother after her recovery. I always found Clyde's stance on Cartman a bit inconsistent: sure, he does seem to treat him with the same disrespect the others do in most episodes but in episodes like Majorine, he stands up for Cartman, and for whatever reason, uses an English accent to do so.

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 22:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, The Losing Edge is my favorite episode concerning Randy. Just showing how over the top he can be. And yeah... he is supposed to be the main adult character but it would be nice to see more background adults or heck, more of the other main boy's parents getting the spotlight. Jimbo and Ned are great characters too, they're very distinct indeed, besides them being Vietnam veterans, but also having very creative designs.

I see. Rita and the rest ensure there were cameras to catch Jessica in the act since court rooms always demand the proof/evidence to ensure this isn't fake or anything, so having a video proof would help the case slightly, thus ensuring Jessica would pay for what she had done over the years.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 22:10:47 +0000 UTC]

The episode is even funnier when you realise that the voice actor who played Batdad went on to play the actual Batman in Batman: The Brave And The Bold. I do like a lot of the other parents too, like Sharon, the Broflovskis, Liane Cartman, the McCormicks, the Stotchs, the Tweaks etc. The funny thing about them is that their designs even pre-date the original Spirit of Christmas shorts, as Trey Parker doodled their designs in high school (it's also why they're the only adults without noses).

I think Kyle might have testified as a witness in order to charge Ms. Pierzynski, but I haven't red the story in a while.Β 

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 22:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Lol he did? Woooow! XD How ironic. And indeed, a lot of them have such cool designs and personalities. And is that so? That certainly explains a bit.

Aha, I see.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 22:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Plus, his Batman, or rather, two alternate universe versions of that Batman, are the ones who spawned the semi-memetic phrase "BATMAN DOES NOT EAT NACHOS!". It would be nice to see that, or maybe rather than just have one, have a group of adults (maybe like Randy, Gerald, Stuart and Stephen) go on their own crazy adventure, than just one adult in particular. It would also be cool to see characters like Mayor McDaniels or Officer Barbrady in more roles (especially given the Mayor's deceased lover in Tweek x Craig, and Barbrady's recent rise in prominence in Naughty Ninjas and the Ads trilogy). Β 

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 22:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. We can only wait and see what they'll do in Season 20.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 22:44:39 +0000 UTC]

True. I personally felt the season finale was a bit disappointing. I feel like South Park probably should've gone back to how it was, despite how fun the PC theme had been. And also PC Principal becoming a "hero" was sort of jarring, given how he's essentially a fascist who forces his own beliefs onto others. As well as that, the ending wasn't brilliant. But oh well, if Season 20's just as entertaining as the majority of Season 19, than I'm sure that all will be good.

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 22:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I admit Season 19 was my least favorite season, but I did like a few episodes from it (The City Part of Town (Due to seeing a little more of Kenny and Karen's relationship), Naughty Ninjas (Just the whole ISIS thing was funny), and Sponsored Content (Since Jimmy was the first kid who was able to make PC Principal back down a bit).) but otherwise, the rest either didn't interest me or I disliked them for certain reasons. Indeed, the ending felt very rushed too and I found it jarring how Kyle didn't even get to react to learning that Leslie was an AD and using him since before, it was like he was slowly falling for her.

I do have some high hopes for Season 20, every series has their "down" seasons now and again so I can only hope it'll pick back up.Β 

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 23:06:03 +0000 UTC]

I actually liked the majority of this season. I felt that the episodic formula worked a bit more smoothly here than in Season 18, and it was nice to see characters like Mr. Garrison, Tuong Lu Kim, Tweek and Officer Barbrady return to have more major roles in an episode, as well as fleshing out characters like Kenny, Craig, Tweek and Barbrady. I really liked the episode Where My Country Gone? and Tweek x Craig (though I find the latter a bit more polarizing due to the fandom's reaction to that episode in particular). Your point about Kyle is interesting too, as it's just shy of outright stated that he was attracted to her; I also felt that Stan being so eager to jump at the chance to kill Kyle was incredibly OOC, especially given their close relationship.

I do as well, what's even better is that South Park: The Fractured But Whole comes out at the end of December, so we won't be without new South Park content for too long after Season 20 ends.Β 

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Cusackanne In reply to Colbalt-Lion [2016-04-04 23:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it was nice to see other characters getting some development too. And oh yes, Where My Country Gone is another good one! It was my favorite for a while. And yeah... But tensions were high and no one knew who their enemy were. But it did feel very forced for Stan and Kyle to have their doubts against each other since you'd think a situation like that would make them WANT to band together, not suddenly turn into enemies. :/ And yeah, Kyle was obviously falling for Leslie so for him not getting a chance to react to her speech and revealing she's an AD, I felt seeing him feel hurt and betrayed by this and perhaps Stan, feeling hurt that Kyle was being used (And taken advantage of, since it was obviously he was growing attracted to Leslie, or at least liked her somehow) and feeling guilty turning on him, decides to make up with Kyle since he had no clue he was with an AD all along... That would of made a better ending, and heck, could still keep PC Principal as the one to kill Leslie considering he's stronger and likely stood the most chance against her (Although with everyone owning guns, they could of just shot her to death, I guess, lol). But that's just me, I guess...

Sadly, unless I magically own a PS4 or a better computer that can run games smoothly, I don't see myself getting the chance to try the game until later on. I got my PS3 very late and some time later, the PS4 came out. So, guess like with the PS3, I likely won't be owning a PS4 until much later on.

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Colbalt-Lion In reply to Cusackanne [2016-04-04 23:33:50 +0000 UTC]

I thought it'd been a while since Mr. Garrison had a prominent role, so I'm glad that he popped up here. What's even better is as he's going to be the candidate for the 2016 presidential, and as the seventh episode of Season 20 will air immediately after the election takes place (you did hear that they've confirmed the air dates for the episodes?), they could portray Mr. Garrison as winning based on that (admittedly, it'd be cutting it very close if they only finished the episode just before its air date but still). Though I did think that Tweek x Craig was a great parody of the shipping fandom, I hated how many of the Creek fans now think their canon, despite the fact that they'e probably faking it.

Yes, I was curious as to why Stan immediately suspected Kyle: I mean, I understand Kyle suspecting Stan given his father's affiliation with PC Principal but Stan has utterly no reason, and if anything, Kyle would probably have suspected Cartman. I feel that they should bring up Kyle's relationship with Leslie as well, given that she probably broke his trust in other people, as well as his heart, which could lead to Stan trying to reconcile with him throughout the season, but Kyle being reluctant to do so, with them fully reconciling in the season finale if one or the other saves them or helps them with a threat.

That's a shame: I own Stick of Truth for PC (I would have bought the PS3 version but in the UK, the PC version is the only version that's uncensored). The cutscenes do lag quite a bit but otherwise it runs quite smoothly.

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