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Fallen from grace have we, fallen from the heavenly perch that we once enjoyed.
I once enjoyed a life that showed of my beauty for the world, that showed my
finest features to be admired.
But that life ceased as I found myself dwindling down towards the ground, seeing
my home get smaller and smaller from my descent, seeing my life on the plain
below starting to begin.
I sit on the cold wet grass, looking up at my once elevated position, longing for that
prestige again as I am forced to acknowledge the clear fact: "This is my position
now."
I feel cold and alone I lay down on my new place of dwelling, shriveling up from lack
of the food I need to survive.
I look up at the sun, pleading with it to spare me. But the giant in the sky is silent,
my words going unanswered.
With my last breath I turn back to my haven, seeing it one last time as I smile in
confidence, seeing new life sprouting from my home as I say: "Life goes on..."
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themonsterinside123 [2013-06-07 22:43:39 +0000 UTC]
This ones good, you should become an author, I hear they make a lot of money, it may help
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cyimang In reply to themonsterinside123 [2013-06-07 22:46:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Maddie I want to try to do Writing Commissions soon.
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cyimang In reply to themonsterinside123 [2013-06-07 22:48:55 +0000 UTC]
Yeppers Just have no idea what to charge..
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themonsterinside123 In reply to cyimang [2013-06-07 22:53:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, they aren't books, and they aren't really chapters... your work is more like pages. The average new books are 23$ if theyre good so... do the math
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cyimang In reply to themonsterinside123 [2013-06-07 22:57:22 +0000 UTC]
I have chapters, but I condense everything to make it readable to people who don't
like to read a lot.
But this is a page. So maybe like 5$ for something like this?
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themonsterinside123 In reply to cyimang [2013-06-07 23:00:00 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but you gotta start thinking more if you wanna make anything out of this
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cyimang In reply to themonsterinside123 [2013-06-07 23:03:32 +0000 UTC]
I know, but for simple things like this, it should be cheaper.
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themonsterinside123 In reply to cyimang [2013-06-07 23:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Its gonna sell good
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cyimang In reply to themonsterinside123 [2013-06-08 00:07:19 +0000 UTC]
Feeling warm.. Trying to write some more. Playing a game You?
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themonsterinside123 In reply to cyimang [2013-06-08 00:10:49 +0000 UTC]
... :\ Take a day off, and rest.
Feeling weak, trying to function right, while im talking to you
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cyimang In reply to themonsterinside123 [2013-06-08 00:30:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm trying to. But eve at home, I just work..
Awww
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themonsterinside123 In reply to cyimang [2013-06-08 00:33:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, d... Nevermind. I can't tell you not to, when youre taking care of your mom, just cause I don't understand...
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cyimang In reply to themonsterinside123 [2013-06-08 00:43:41 +0000 UTC]
Believe me, its ok. We all need to be told to slow down at times, so we don't
being able to not help anyone..
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themonsterinside123 In reply to cyimang [2013-06-08 00:48:45 +0000 UTC]
k... Just... Don't over do yourself, and try to avoid people who have negative comments about you... People like that just don't know how amazing you are...
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