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SoulfulWingedOne [2016-12-29 05:20:48 +0000 UTC]

I never even saw this one before haha. But I love it. The purple really stands out and the way this is all put together looks amazing. Loving the black and white too.

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MilenasLens [2016-09-23 22:25:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, you asked me to comment some of your work, and I have chosen to comment some of the pieces that caught my eye. Like this one, this is the one for today.

I like the idea, the execution is good, but there are a few details, suggestions. First, the glow in the middle. I would remove it, it does not benefit the image, and here is why. When you look at this image, what is the point of interest? In my opinion, the point of interest  is her face, because it has good expression, and because the pose suggests it, everything about this pose is up, up, up. And when you find the point of interest, it has to be dominant thing on the image, and everything else is there to complete the story. Here, you have very well positioned feathers, that are leading toward the face, closing the lower part of the image and opening the upper part, that is great. Then you have the wings, that are a bit too light and should be darkened, but they are completing the pose and the story, ad that is good. And the background gives that explosive feeling, with the lightened part in the middle and that dark purple splash in the bottom.
But then, out of nowhere, there is this light smudge in the middle, that completely draws attention away from the face and the pose, and it has no purpose here, not even in telling the story. Also, the purple splash in the hair, it should be darkened, draws too mush attention. And finally, this whole image is, again, up, up, up. So give it a little more space above her head, let it breathe.

So, I hope this looong comment has been helpful, and I hope you use this critique in your future works. Overall, this is a good image, but it could be better, and that is the point, right, to get better at what we do

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manolo4938 [2015-04-01 23:27:44 +0000 UTC]

excellent work

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