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DamaiMikaz — Sketchdump January 2017 [Comic style 01]
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Published: 2017-01-27 17:50:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 8392; Favourites: 509; Downloads: 30
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I want to learn more about conveying emotion, mood and story... so I did some panels for practice.Also to step up my line-art game.
Stuff is all random situations from my Emion project (because I've obviously been writing too damn much lately XD)
For those that are interested;
1. Sato as someone messed up another mission
2. Aiden having (mad) science plans again
3. Aiden and Sato have a peculiar kind of relationship. Har har.
4. Yep. Sato and Masaru are legit bro's for life :')
5. Sato and Sergei, who aren't being friends (Then again, nobody is friends with Sergei XD)
6. Sato probably killed something again :')
Font can be found here
Screentones came from this website
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Comments: 147
Interesting.
Have you ever made a comic? This looks like good material for a comic.
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Nope. I've never made a comic (aside from perhaps some scribbles I did when I was still a kid).
The characters and story are from my novel, so there is a story, but it's written ^^
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Does that knife pic have any relation to this? damaimikaz.deviantart.com/art/…
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Clever, but nope. It's not him
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I'm starting to really like Sato and Masaru bromance XD
And I like your comic style a lot, well done : D
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Hahaha. It's funny that everybody calls it bromance these days
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These are great! It's inspiring to watch your art progress
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Someone Sato is scared of? O.O
"Sato probably killed something again" xD
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Yes. Sato is afraid of some people
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Probably has a good reason to be, I would think.
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Yes. They want to kill him XD
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Awesome!!
I love your style and your ideas!!
I'm sure that your project will be a bestseller!!
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I like how you've drawn sergei in this one! It makes him look more serious than normal! Before that he's looked like some punk who just wants to destroy everything, but in that picture, he looks more respectable, like a real villain! I think it's because it's taller and leaner in it. c:
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Everybody is tall compared to Sato XD
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Ahaha!
But he also looks leaner here! Like, more grown up proportions or something! You should compare with other pictures of him to see what I mean.
Although then again I could just be thinking of the fall of Darkrai. :/
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He didn't look young here either
But perhaps you mean the older pictures... where everybody looks younger XD
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Oh, I see now! Yeah, it probably was just the fall of darkrai, ahaha!
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Yeah. Perspective is a bitch
(Though he actually is younger in that part of the story ^^)
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The last panel is my favorite of them-- even though they're all REALLY good.
Sato's just bein' a badass and Masaru looks spooked xD
would it be too much to say Masaru looks cute in that panel? idk maybe that's just my weirdo self xD
Nicely done on the lineart though, I can see the improvement!
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Sato has terrifying powers so it's reasonable for Masaru to be afraid every now and then. Any sane person probably would. Despite that they do make a good team. Sato is the impulsive one with the powers. Masaru is the smart once that makes the plans and keeps 'em out of trouble
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I know I'd be scared for sure! xD
no but in all seriousness Sato and Masaru are my favorite out of your characters, with Anima and Lucy as close seconds!
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Most people are afraid of Sato when they know about the powers XD
And there will be more of those two. I love writing about 'em in the story, so I'll make more art ^^
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The last one is the strongest for me.
For starting a comic I'd give yourself a test run and do a short story first just to know what to expect, the longer you wait to start a comic the more you regret it later.
And you find you learn a lot when doing the actual comic.
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Thanks for the advice. I did this mainly as a means to convey emotion better. I wasn't planning to do a full comic as I'm writing a novel already, but I have been planning on doing some shorter stories. The only thing I struggle with (besides the obvious art) is the writing. Writing (and paneling) comics is entirely different than writing for a novel.
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Ah yes, I use films and real life as a reference for that, you can't get it more emotional then the real thing right?
Oh yes I remember you saying you was writing. Hm I can understand the transition to novel and comic is hard.
I had to cut down alot from an older version of my comic.
I recommend looking at how films compose their shots, I know it's not comics, but it can be used in the same way.
I use this same method for my comic and it's improved it alot. Maybe look at comparisons of Book to Film. (I have some good Youtubers if you want them)
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Cool I'll recommend these
CineFix Nerdwriter and Every Frame a Painting
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I love your comic Style and the Body pose how they show how they feel IS Truely AMAZING
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I wanted to know more. It was good and can't wait to see more.
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I dunno it look's like you're far more ready than I'll ever be. Stuff like this reminds me that I need to start doing something.
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Those HANDS! Though I think you're ready, it's great to hear you're working hard to make a quality comic!
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Hands are evil indeed T__T
And far from ready. I still need a shitload of practice. Mainly the character interaction stuff. It's so freakin' hard man
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Tell me about it! I'm hoping my comic has enough quality to be considered "ready". I just dived into it and learned along the way. Even now I know I have to go back to fix artwork from beginning pages.
I'm excited to see how your story turns out!
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Well... I'm still writing at least.
If it's ever gonna be a comic, I'll probably have to rewrite some scenes to make it more suited for comics
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That takes a total learning curve too...paneling, sequencing, dialog, thinking bubbles, narratives, sounds, great fonts, etc....yeah. BUT...if your novel is written well, everything else comic-wise will fall into place.
I've got a self-indulgent question...I'm scared to ask because you may find lots of wrongs (which may help)...but what do you think about my comic?
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This sketchdump is so amazing! Also love the "Sato probably killed something again" part
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