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ThermidorResistance [2019-02-28 16:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh I really like the composition of this!  Also your use of monotone colors is awesome to convey each character's personality.  In particular, I really like how you draw Geoffrey and Hershey.  I also like the use of layers and gradient in the foliage to convey depth.

What would really make this even better, is to get more dynamic with your poses.  By dyamic I'm talking about line of action, and thinking about how their bodies would move in real time, in real gravity.  The poses are stiff, they need to be less rigid and more fluid.  Hershey's foot wouldn't be straight out unless she is preparing to land, but even then, it would have a slight toe downward turn, her tail would be out more.  I'm torn about having them fire mid jump, I see the idea you were going for, but a part of me also can see this drawn where they are standing, braced against the bot, and instead of the bot's hands being open, maybe one drawn back as if it's about to throw a punch orrr.. orr, midway engaged in transforming into an arm canon?

Anyway, I'm pulling straws here.  This is a really nice piece and it's so good to see you making this art!

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thecheshireguy [2011-10-20 22:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Great concept and smooth coloring.

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Sgtduckman [2008-08-09 13:20:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG BEST PICTURE EVER :>:>:>:>:>:> I love you

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Risen-Art [2008-08-09 07:25:51 +0000 UTC]

Eek! Denee, amazing work. The lighting is fantastic. Horray for Team Geoff

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StarAngelX [2008-08-08 04:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice work dee each of the characters looks great!

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Tygahman [2008-08-06 14:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Nice work.

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