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Dangerman-1973 — Pulsar and Beta battle 2

Published: 2011-05-25 22:12:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 6211; Favourites: 132; Downloads: 236
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Description Color poster rendition of Pulsar Pureheart and Beta Blackheart from "Pulsar Pureheart" in an deadly struggle in a New York City street

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Comments: 25

wingzero620 [2011-05-26 05:10:06 +0000 UTC]

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I don't think I have ever critiqued a deviation before, but there is a first time for everything. Since you did request a critique and this image caught my attention, I decided it was time to write one.

This is a pretty epic battle you have going here. The expressions show the struggle between both fighters, especially the upper hand that Beta has on Pulsar. The street scene in the background gives it that extra bit of detail that helps the audience become more immersed in the battle.

In fact, I really only have one very minor criticism. The dust rising from the crater, and maybe the crater itself needed just a little bit more work. They look kind of flat and out slightly out of place. The dust should have a more, I guess, movement, like it exploded from where the crater is now.

Aside from that one minor problem, the image has a wonderful look to it. The characters look great, the poses/expressions are excellent, and the choice for the setting is very appropriate for an epic superhero battle.

You have a very creative, diverse, and interesting cast of original characters. This is an excellent submission and I look forward seeing your future deviations e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to wingzero620 [2011-05-26 15:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Major-Link [2011-05-26 00:36:09 +0000 UTC]

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I really like how you added a real life image to this artwork. It tends to bring out the action. The way the two girls are fighting right now do show some kind of originality although the technique does need some kind if improvement. Despite the improvements needed for this art, it has a very strong impact to its audience not to mention Pulsar's in some kind of peril. I hope she gets help in some way.

The more I look at your art, the more attractive I am to Pulsar Pureheart. I honestly have to admit she's just as awesome as other OCs that I have seen, including my own Princess Fighter characters. I hope this project you're doing turns out to be a great game or TV show or whatever. Great job.

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to Major-Link [2011-05-26 01:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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jihdo [2011-06-06 22:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, awesome job capturing the scene here *_*

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to jihdo [2011-06-07 03:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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MightyMorphinPower4 [2011-06-02 09:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Cool work here

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to MightyMorphinPower4 [2011-06-02 11:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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adventure-art [2011-05-31 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Hi, nice work here +++
....super blending of the characters and real background, you do a good job with the "fights"

.........do more !.........sparring...different "holds" the duels with your characters do not have
to be really violent
...as always best wishes to you.........and thanks for faving ! ++++++

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to adventure-art [2011-05-31 02:39:09 +0000 UTC]

No prob. And thanks for the comment.

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Latitudezero [2011-05-29 23:04:28 +0000 UTC]

I normally find it jarring when you but animated characters with a real background, but it seems to work well here. It makes the foreground characters stand out and look even more dramatic and colorful!

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to Latitudezero [2011-05-30 02:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Kun2 [2011-05-26 04:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Looks good! Keep drawing those action poses C :

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ArthurT2015 [2011-05-26 03:31:48 +0000 UTC]

Is Beta an opposite of Pulsar?

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to ArthurT2015 [2011-05-26 03:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Sort of like a "reflective" evil twin.

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ArthurT2015 In reply to Dangerman-1973 [2011-05-26 04:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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jtspgs [2011-05-26 02:57:13 +0000 UTC]

holy *bleep* on a *bleep* sandwich! look at the ground! no matter who wins new-york loses, imagin the bill for repairs!

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xZeroMan [2011-05-25 23:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Super cool!

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DJWill [2011-05-25 23:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Don't Give up Pulsar!

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Quintessence-Study [2011-05-25 23:12:02 +0000 UTC]

is great

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CaptainZammo [2011-05-25 23:06:03 +0000 UTC]

C'mon Pulsar--use your powers to stop Beta--she's a Wannabe YOU.

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cresent34 [2011-05-25 23:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Ouch! That has to hurt!

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BigMac1212 [2011-05-25 22:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh, no! Pulsar's in trouble! How will she get out of this predicament?

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Aksika [2011-05-25 22:33:02 +0000 UTC]

i like the pose, and their expressions make it intense : ) only thing i see a bit off is Pulsar's right arm, it seems like it should be doing something else, like she could be using it instead of holding out there strangely straight. I like the picture a lot!

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Dangerman-1973 In reply to Aksika [2011-05-25 22:35:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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