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Published: 2016-05-15 19:39:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1043; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 19
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Description I'm going to be doing digital sketches of all the characters, from Super Smash Bros Melee for Evo, with a digitally sketched bg but I only have time to select 2 or 3 of them to be finished depending on the feedback on these that I get, Let me know your thoughts on which poster you prefer would be best to finish, leave a comment or a +fav.
All characters will be finished and made into one big group poster though.

For this one I have a Yoshi being followed by a stampeding herd of Yoshi type characters in the bg like in the intro to the game. I always thought that that was epic. Personally I like this one even though it would be a tough one, there would be a lot of stampeding crazy bg interactions that I can do for it.

Update 1 : I changed the eyes of Yoshi as suggested as well as some various other tiny additions.

Update 2 : I've changed the feet, Arm,ย  and leg positioning, does it work?

Critiques are greatly appreciated. Thank you!
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Comments: 8

befree2209 [2019-03-25 15:27:58 +0000 UTC]

I think this would look great in color, but otherwise, it's pretty darn good!

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elsevilla [2016-05-22 16:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Its pretty cool that you been more active.

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danimation2001 In reply to elsevilla [2016-05-22 17:13:45 +0000 UTC]

They say hard deadlines are the best motivations. Maybe I can stick with it even after EVO comes and goes.

But we'll see

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elsevilla In reply to danimation2001 [2016-05-22 23:26:42 +0000 UTC]

I really like that you are getting more confortable compared to previous one, new ones looks better.

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danimation2001 In reply to elsevilla [2016-05-23 00:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I appreciate any feedback and critiques on any going forward.

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rubbe [2016-05-15 21:58:27 +0000 UTC]

the eyes look dead and the body stiff the ones in the background are fine.

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danimation2001 In reply to rubbe [2016-05-15 22:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I will change that.

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rubbe In reply to danimation2001 [2016-05-16 15:57:22 +0000 UTC]

the pose are good but lacks the sense ofย  movement he Yoshis in the background has.

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