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Not as detailed as the last page because it's rushed, but I still think it's deasent. Also trying a bit of different things.

Cammeo:

PK from the merchants guild.

I'm not sure if I got PKs character right, so if you got something better she would say you're welcome to surgest it.
Also she's supposed to be stressed in this scene.

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It was the kecleon who had spotted him from her own counter. “Get your sorry butt over here! The others are busy and so am I, so make your business quick!” she said grumpily and shifted her head over to rest on her other hand, looking very inpatient.
This took Azure by surprise and he stood shocked for a moment, which obviously annoyed the hell out of the kecleon, who took a bit more sinister shade. “Look; ether you state your business now or you’ll get the hack out of my town!” She almost stood up from her seat. “Keep it up and I’ll kick you out of it personally.” She added a bit calmer, but still irritated.
Azure panicked and held up his bag as he managed to bark “I want to trade!” at her. She fixed her eyes at the bag, took a more grey shade as she examined the bag from her seat. She once again rested her head on her hand and answered “Look, nether I or my assistances have time to look through a whole bag today. If you want to buy something you’ll have to cough up some money.”
Again this answer shocked Azure a bit, but he quickly recalled her threat which he didn’t want to experience. He quickly reached down his bag, pulled out some odd coins and placed them on the table nervously.

Description
Next: [link]
Back: [link]

Not as detailed as the last page because it's rushed, but I still think it's deasent. Also trying a bit of different things.

Cammeo:

PK from the merchants guild.

I'm not sure if I got PKs character right, so if you got something better she would say you're welcome to surgest it.
Also she's supposed to be stressed in this scene.

Text part:
It was the kecleon who had spotted him from her own counter. “Get your sorry butt over here! The others are busy and so am I, so make your business quick!” she said grumpily and shifted her head over to rest on her other hand, looking very inpatient.
This took Azure by surprise and he stood shocked for a moment, which obviously annoyed the hell out of the kecleon, who took a bit more sinister shade. “Look; ether you state your business now or you’ll get the hack out of my town!” She almost stood up from her seat. “Keep it up and I’ll kick you out of it personally.” She added a bit calmer, but still irritated.
Azure panicked and held up his bag as he managed to bark “I want to trade!” at her. She fixed her eyes at the bag, took a more grey shade as she examined the bag from her seat. She once again rested her head on her hand and answered “Look, nether I or my assistances have time to look through a whole bag today. If you want to buy something you’ll have to cough up some money.”
Again this answer shocked Azure a bit, but he quickly recalled her threat which he didn’t want to experience. He quickly reached down his bag, pulled out some odd coins and placed them on the table nervously.