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(edited on 24th April 2008)
It's Remy, Cinnamon, Roland and Mrs. Strawberry in search for their dear companion Ruby!
Why the black robes though? The next page should explain the situation a little better.
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Beautiful as always!!
What else is there to say? ^^
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i love the background of the city ^w^ , and where could ruby went to ? (i wonder?) , and there black cloak looks very mysterious so that it makes them not to be caught and invensible oh boy XD
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Man you really know how to make your comic official-looking XX3
It looks fantastic like this! Well done!
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Nice work! 
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Hmm... I wonder what happened to Ruby? Where'd she go? I hope she's okay. Also, Awesome job on this page!
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Tis is great i love it so much i can't stand it! listen Drakspeeds can be your friend because 1. i wan't to be your friend so much. 2. You don't talk to me when i wan't you to so i thought that you only talk to your friends so i thought this is how i can talk to you. and 3. i need a friend tat knows how to draw sonic realy good because.......my sonic drawings and characters are so bad i hate them so much i fill like takeing them off of DA for good because yours are so good and my are just so....*Sniff*....I HATE THEM!............Sorry i just wan't you to be my friend and i just hate myself and my characters so much....*Sniff*.....
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This does look professional. The book looks exciting!
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hum... those black robes... there's only one logical explanation... they belong to an evil sect of cults to the death who wish to sacrifice Ruby to summon their evil death god into the world to destroy the evil alien invaders who want to take the world in order to feed their demonical giant monster... or maybe is just a new fashion o.o
hehe, great page Elson, as always an incredible work!!!
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Hell yeah,looks like it really comes out of a Manga. The new style,if I can call it new,really looks professional like CCG already said. Seems like the second book will be damn exciting. I'll look forward to read some pages. But for now,the next page will be enough.
Woah now I want to draw some of your characters. =3 Well..I still got Photoshop so I think I'll draw some of them in Battle Style. *stars scetching*
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I know why they have robes! its cause they don't want ppl knowing who they are LOL *shot* XD XD
its like a under cover thing going on XD LOL I'm just being silly |D *sugar rash* o.o
lol really awesome amigo ^0^- your doing great and I just love how it coming out XD
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noo!whats happened to ruby?!
Ruuubyyy!!!!
goodness look at me, trying to be part of the act XD. oh well, ill jump out of it now-jumps in a wall- -_-' im stuck XDDD
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hmmm I wonder where that Ruby would of gone to anyway certainly looks really cool how you drew the characters in this panel so well done nice work and keep it up ^^
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Oh no. NOW where did she go? Hope where she is she's okay.XD
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Hm...this style of toning certainly does make it look professional. Not that anything was wrong with your previous style(I love your style!), but this one just seems more fit for a manga..
Hm...do you know of an exact date for your first book to go on sell? *has paypal ready. 
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Oh gawd no do you have to check the site everyday to see if the book is on sale Stephie! X_X;;; LOL! XD
Like I have already mention just give it time and wait till at least the 3RD WEEK OF OCTOBER. 
Gosh don't hesitate to let me know if this new style is an improvement of the older! I'm hoping that this new style will create that impression you had in the first paragraph! = ) Thank you for telling me that it's a looks professional cuz that is the true aim of the new style. ^_~ After all that analysis of manga styles and techniques it definetly paid off. ^_~
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I hope they find her safe and sound X3
Awesome new page! Love the style
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We still have no idea whats going on...>_<
I'm not sure if you think its important or not, but you should have a comma in the next-to-last talking bubble after "you" and then after "Roland".
This is because Roland is renaming the "you" and, thus, is a separate word.
I forget what the rhetorical term is for that though. :/
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Thanks for that Silver-seren! Getting a double check on spelling/grammer really helps. ^^
So did you mean like this:
Iโll take Cinnamon with me while you, Roland, take Mrs. Strawberry with you.
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Yes, thats right. I can't remember the term though! Argh...*runs to English folder*
Hah! It's called apposition. Apposition is usually non-restrictive and restrictive, in which the non doesn't need the comma.
In this case, considering that "you" can refer to more than one person, you need to comma to show that you are clarifying who the "you" is, which is Roland and not someone else. If there were only two people talking to each other, then you wouldn't need the comma because its obvious who the "you" would be.
Thus, you do need the commas there.
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Fixed.
Thank you so much for helping out Silver-seren!
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No problem.
It would have just bothered me if I hadn't mentioned it.
I'm not exactly a grammar Nazi, but I suppose i'm in the neighborhood. >_@
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nicely presented comic
still...waiting...patiently...for...comic...
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awesome! a search for Ruby!!
yay! Mrs. Strawberry's going with them
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This is looking really great!
Guess that Remy and the others are wearing that capes to not be recognized by T.R.A.P (wasnยดt once that you said that who is friend of a target, becomes a target too? In that case, about Stream)
This combination of black and white is a thing that I have to learn.
See ya!
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This is awesome. Great stuff man! Keep it comin!
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awesome!!! you are so good at this!! im not that good though..
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Awesome stuff! The digital inking and stuff makes your comic look so much more official ^^
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I'm guessing they're in disguise?
I THINK I'm beginning to see what's gonna happen....After seeing this, I'm starting to think about the other pic you had submitted
Great as, though! Keep at it, my friend (if you are
DARN! Sketched-Chibi beat me 
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wow this looks so official and LOL 1st comment no?
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