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Alright! Time for an action packed chapter.
Stay tuned to find out who is more dominant than the other. Will it be Diamond Edge's captain Duke Vienna who is a high ranking Overlord of the T.R.A.P. organisation or will it be the mysterious and devious Stream the Hawk who was apparently a Fortune Hunter Superstar and a hero to all of the people in Fortune Islands?Only time will tell.
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Another epic page, and they just keep getting more and more epic. O_O Very nice action scenes! I'm still unsure of who I want to root for. XD; Your skills are ace once again. Very nice use of techniques such as speedlines. As someone mentioned above, your style is certainly growing.^^ Wonderful work, Elson! 
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That's amazing!How do you plan out what happens next?Please tell me.
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oh wow.....my comics suck @zz......U ROCK!
inking techique!
technique!....
TECHIQUE!!!!! XO
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wow, very epic fighting scenes there, i'm very impressed with the lighting, the lines and the choreography.
Awesome job.
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An battle page, thats i call amazing design of the swords.
And the characters :3
Stream vs Duke , who wins ?..
Just make more elson, i gonna read still of this ;3
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HAha your just getting better and better ^^ your style really growing :3
I remember when it was this tall *has hand at a low place in the air* they grow up so fast!
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dude seriously now i really love ur comic style!!O______o its just sooooo awesome the way u draw them 
must...wait...for.. next page xD
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*~*..see into the dark and u'll find me with the undead..*~*
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Nice page! Though I guess it's safe to assume that the battle's gonna get much more heated, with these two- can't wait for a new page! Interesting weapon Stream has- and Duke really is cool! He has nearly the same expression while fighting and just doing nothing! What'd he do, get his face ironed like that when he was young? XD
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wow i like the Comic art style work. How long did it took you?
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You mean this page? = ) Around 4 hours to plan/sketch/ink/tone/finishing touches (i.e. add dialogue and clean the page)
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TO THE DEATH!
micaela:NOOOOOOOOOOO I don't want them to die...I WANT RUBY ACCIENALY COMING IN AND RUINING EVERYTHING! XD
me:...?...ok?...SO DO I!
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How da hell did you know that? XXD You must have secretly stole my comic archives back home somehow (like a stealthy ninja perhaps) and know what's going to happen!!
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me? steal no...-hides somthing behind my back- it's not like I told micaela to go to your place, put you in a crazy state of mind, and high jack it that's just not nice....>.> <.< I tell you how I know...I SEE THE FUTURE!!!-big light- I SEE!-the big light goes away- your gonna have a very bad hair day
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WHOOOHOO!!!! ><
And things get epic!!
*ding ding*
Katy: In this corner, the tall, handsome treasure hunter... your favorite bird and mine... Stream the Hawk!!! And the crowd goes WILD!!! ><
Crowd: RAAAAAAAHHHH!!!! XD
Fangirls: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
Katy: And in the other corner... the hot, strong and silent type... the mono-mood commander... Duke the Fox!!! And nobody can contain themselves!!!
Crowd: WHHOOOOO!!! YEEAAAHHHHH!!! XD
Fangirls: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
LOL!! Soryy Elson... Couldn't help myself!!
This is absolutely incredible!! It looks totally perfect!!
Great job!!
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Ha ha! XXD Awww.. 
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Whoohoo!! Can't wait for more!!
Have a nice week, Elson.
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no words page, but with a wonderful sword battle OwO
incredible Elson x3 as always incredible!!! Stream sword is great
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Yeah dude! = ) It's based off a real weapon called 'Double Hook Swords' or 'Twin Tiger Hooked Blades' in traditional form.
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yeah, I suspice that
The Hook Swords are really cool weapons, it was a great chose
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VIOLENCE YAY SWORDS AND VIOLENCE 8DDDDD
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Stream! Kick his butt! XD I love this page new chapter! Yes! I really want to buy your book now! ^^
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Best to buy the book when it's more chunkier and full of good story chapters to read. 
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Okay! ^^ ... You misspelled my name... Funny! TeeHee!
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Very nice, its rare to find comics that have good layouts. You can actually follow their moves.
Most of your layouts are great, I've got inspiration now.
Keep up the good work!
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Cheers Underworlder666! I really appreciate your feedback on the comic layout of this particular page.
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...lol cheers darkspeeds.
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deadly enemies fighting on life or dead... hm... don't tell, they in future can be in one team? XD i know this kind of pairing
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Highly unlikely. They both have conflicting goals and personalities. *thumbs up* ^^
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oh... nice... ^^ lol... i imagine these yaoi... >> ... pairing lol... fans are wreid XD
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whoa i'm really seeing improvements darkspeeds!^^ wonderful job
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Duke has a head start...but...Stream could make the "big turnabout."
P.S. Sometimes, I just ask myself "Why don't they just settle things in a Yu-Gi-Oh! Shadow Game?"
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LMFAO! XXD
EAT THE POWER OF MY CARDS! RRAAWGH!! *slams card down and opponent loses his victory the next...
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Stop right there! I activate Magic Cylinder and Mirror Force! You take damage equal to the attacking monster's attack points, then all your face-up monsters cards in attack position are destroyed! This is an example of a big turnabout!
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When I first saw this I thought it was Ruby.XD" It's no wonder Steam taught Ruby, cause she looks and reminds him of himself.XD Anyway, it's really cool! I love sword fights! They're exciting!^_^
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Stream looks like he's having quite a bit of trouble, but who wouldn't with Duke OwO
And is Duke grinning evilly in the second to last panel? O-O
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You can imagine whatever you want for an expression on that panel.
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Awesome OwO
That's quite the technique X3
It shows me a darker side to Duke
Battle scene, WOOT
Though I don't really understand what Stream is doing in that last panel ...Well I get it a bit XD;; Care to explain a little more to me? o_o" -is stupid-
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Stream is defending himself from a critical strike coming from Duke. He does this with his Double Hook Swords by crossing it to form an X hoping that he can catch his strike and repel to counter attack.
Later on you will find out just how strong Duke really is with his swordplay...! ^^
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Boy, this is going to be one heck of a battle! I really liked how you portrayed the action on this page, especially in panel 2 and the last panel. The shading and characters came out great, and the action text really adds on to the whole action portrayal. Well done on this. I'm looking forward to seeing how the battle will turn out.
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Cheers for the feedback on the first proper fight scene in the series Kevin.
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Wow! Finally some sword-fighting action! 
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That page is pure winner! One of my favourite^^ The action and the tension couldnΒ΄t be better expressed, with the shading, speedlines even present in their movements!
Is interesting to see that Lord Vienna doesnΒ΄t lose his mood even in a time like that. Stream, however, looks tense despite did to predict his moves.
Wait....curved sword? Maybe it belonged to a fallen soldier....
The most inspiring that page, Elson!
Hey Stream, not a chance! Foxes rules!
Stream: Nani??? EAT THIS!!!!!
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