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Almost all of Creation ceased to exist. All that remained was the billions of seering white hot needlepoints of pain being jabbed into her brain. Her last coherent thought was that someone managed to activate the Ultimate Nullifier. Then it was an eternity in a red haze of burning hellfire. An eternity that finally came to an end. The red haze of burning agony was replaced by a serene blackness.Then the dreams came. But how could Alison Blaire dream if Alison Blaire no longer existed?
Outside her now short circuited mind the physical body of Dazzler lay face down on the floor. Her tear-streaked eyes opened and glazed. Her mouth also open and drooling. Only her labored breathing showed signs of life.
Nearby the solidified light fog that was a makeshift prison for Darkseid began to dissolve. It evaporated into steam and from within a silhouette with blazing red eyes began to move. Darkseid stepped out and walked over to the unconscious figure laying in prostration before him.
As he looked down on her he pondered the best course of action.
Kill her and be done with it? He had probed her mind and found she knew nothing of the Galactus Box that was useful.
Or should he place her in his service? She did shoot through Apokolips' defenses like they were nothing. And she also made fools out of Granny Goodness and her top Female Furies. His OWN elite guard. And on top of that she was actually able to block his Omega Beam. And even withstand its concussive effects. Very very few beings could do that. This "Dazzler" could prove to be a very valuable asset.
It was decided then. This glowing Herald of Galactus would now become a minion of Darkseid. An enforcer in the new universe to come.
He was about to summon Granny Goodness when the door to Desaad's lab opened and he stepped out. Behind him was his sister, Bernadeth. She chose not to enter the area that was a battlefield a few moments ago. Obviously she was expecting a bad reaction to bad news. Desaad meekly came before his Master. His head was bowed and he kneeled. "Lord Darkseid I..."
"The ONLY reason you should be out of that lab, Desaad, is if you have news of the Galactus Box."
"I-I did neutralize the multi-phasic field and open the box, M'Lord."
So why was he not preening about like the insufferable little egotist he was? "But?"
"It's boobytrapped." He then held up two bandaged stumps where his hands used to be. "In fact it
has MULTIPLE boobytraps.
Bernadeth closed the door.
"BERNADETH!"
The door opened and she rushed out. Bowing and kneeling. "Yes, Lord Darkseid. How may I serve?"
He indicated the Dazzler. "Take that one to Granny Goodness. I would have her conditioned and trained
as a Female Fury. Tell Granny her power is cosmic in origin. Adjust the neutralizer accordingly."
"As you command, my Lord." She got up. Picked up Dazzler and carried her off.
But once out of the area she dropped the unconscious girl on the floor and summoned two nearby Dog Soldiers. "Take this one to Granny Goodness. I'll tell her what must be done."
The guards saluted and then picked Dazzler up and carried her off. Bernadeth then went to the nearest Comm Station and called Granny.
Darkseid fired his Omega Beams and a startled Desaad was disintegrated. He fired them again and Desaad was back among the living once more with BOTH fully functional hands.
"Fail me, Desaad, and I'll remove those hands personally." Darkseid then made a "snapping" motion to show how he'd do it.
"I-I won't fail you, my lord. I promise." And with that the sniveling little sycophant bowed and scrapped all the way back to his lab.
Darkseid sighed and then smiled as he teleported back to his throne room. Soon, very soon, the Ultimate Nullifier would be his. And, with it, the Anti-Life Equation and a universe remade. Perhaps ALL universes.
To be continued by and
Dazzler (c) MARVEL
Darkseid (c) DC
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Comments: 13
jimbor [2013-02-21 05:00:11 +0000 UTC]
Commenting on the text.
Dazzler is down for the count . Things do not look good
I thought the first part of the story which describes what she was going through mentally/ her mental state and quietly in forms us that she was still( barely?) alive was very effective .
One thing though.What tactic or attack or maneuver did Darkseid employ to take Alison down? I don't see any thing in the text (Or am I not paying close enough attention?).
I note that Darkseid has enough of an eye for talent to recognize that Alison would a useful member of his" stable"(I won't say team) and so opts to" recruit" / condition / brain wash our heroine
As an aside -that strikes me as a variation of the old" villain taking the time to reveal his complete plan to captive hero/ heroine and then leaving him/ her alone to escape the death trap and thwart his plans " routine ,which I applaud.
Your story gave him a perfectly valid reason for doing so , which I thought was an excellent piece of story construction.
And anyway given the caliber of Darkseids minions a " converted " Dark-side Dazzler" would surely be running the whole show inside of a week . Of course , I suppose the low grade of the help , this should not be a surprise given that Darkseid is not much of a leader or at least not one who inspires
the love and loyalty of his followers- Fear and dread perhaps , but to my mind it hard to build an effective army or an organization out of slaves - or to steal a phrase from Shakespeare " constrained things"
I note that Bernadeth hastens to obey Darkseid's order to carry the comatose heroine away to Granny Goodness to be " conditioned and trained as Female Fury, as soon as she is out of his sight she she unceremoniously dumps Ali and gets some one else to do her job/ the heavy lifting and relays the instructions via phone rather in person.
To my eyes that is exactly what some one in that sort of a set up would do(sloughing off their assignments and cutting corners), and is another very good piece of story construction.
I note Darkseids interaction with Dessad at the end of the story .
I gotta say the big guy is a heck of a motivator.
He doesn't think very much of his" people "( and they seem pretty disappointing) but given the kind of leader he is they are exactly the kind of followers he should expect.
I hope I am not too far off base in my speculations.
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Dave-Dreamer In reply to jimbor [2013-02-21 08:47:10 +0000 UTC]
I don't have much time but I can say this. When I decided to use darkseid as the villain of the piece I did some research on him. (All I actually knew about the guy was he ruled Apokolips, had these Omega Beams, traveled via a Boom Tube, and was strong enough to make Superman go "Ouch.") I discovered he had some kind of little used telepathic ability. So when Dazzler trapped him in her solidified light fog I had him knock her out with a telepathic attack. Otherwise she would have gotten the Ultimate Nullifier and escaped before Darkseid could break free.
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jimbor In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2013-02-21 20:07:26 +0000 UTC]
I thought it might be some thing like that , but I wanted to sure .( I don't know very much about the character at all.)
I thought I had missed some thing in the text.
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Dave-Dreamer In reply to jimbor [2013-02-21 22:27:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm not 100% sure. But I think I mention his telepathic powers in the next installment. As it was a kind of cliffhanger ending I wanted it to be unexpected as to what happened to her.
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jimbor In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2013-02-21 22:59:38 +0000 UTC]
The surprise/cliffhanger ending was completely successful .I did not see it coming.
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jimbor In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2013-03-06 06:45:11 +0000 UTC]
Being pressurized at what happens next is a sure sign of good storytelling.
Thank you
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ORcaMAn001 [2012-06-10 01:36:02 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful continuation to a very entertaining story, you are creating a well worthy tv saga here
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Dave-Dreamer In reply to ORcaMAn001 [2012-06-11 22:02:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. It's not as easy as it looks either.
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ORcaMAn001 In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2012-06-12 00:03:44 +0000 UTC]
You don't have to try & convince me hell still can't daz to work for me nicely WAAAAAA
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suerichardsff [2012-06-09 23:58:03 +0000 UTC]
Magnificent story! Oh hon, this is just getting better and better. I take it all of this realm, DC's greatest of superheroes are clueless of what is about to happen IF the evil Darkman extraordinaire discovers the secrets of the Ultimate Nullifier. Amazing how you are tying in not only Dazzler & Galactus but @ least 2 of Earth's mightiest 'Universes' together. In a way I have to wonder why the Watcher did not inform the FF of this but then again, no one has the talents in this respect than Alison Blaire as it was pointed out in the earlier chapters. Perhaps Galactus knew that only the Dazzler could confront Darkseid whereas if Superman faced him it would be a battle to the death with the multiple universes going up in smoke.
Simply stunning in word, text and song, as the saying goes. hugs!! Susan xox
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Dave-Dreamer In reply to suerichardsff [2012-06-10 00:22:40 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you are enjoying it. I did entertain the idea of Dazzler interacting with some DC heroes and heroines but decided to go for the "Keep It Simple" rule. Although she WILL be meeting a certain Green Lantern in this. (Text only though.)
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suerichardsff In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2012-06-10 00:28:42 +0000 UTC]
Yes KIS is a good plan of action especially when there are already a dozen characters strong so far. Luv the story and the way you weave in the realms, hon. hugs!! Susan xox
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