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Published: 2009-08-16 23:17:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1316; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 24
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Description here are the first 5 pages to my newest story entitled "MOOKE."

this one is fun.
i hope you enjoy it!

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davechisholm In reply to ??? [2009-10-17 13:24:53 +0000 UTC]

heck yeah!

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dragong386 [2009-08-24 22:27:12 +0000 UTC]

aww i likes it, its a classic start and i can't wait to see more ^-^ how'd you come up with the name mooke? also i love that your combining the pages now so its just one long thing, now i don't have to wait for my slow internet in between each page ^^'

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davechisholm In reply to dragong386 [2009-08-25 14:09:33 +0000 UTC]

hm. it's a name that my wife thought sounded good.

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dragong386 In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-25 20:30:20 +0000 UTC]

well she has very good taste it is an awesome name

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BoxAx [2009-08-21 18:25:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Superhero time! Sweet!
And it is really cool too!

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davechisholm In reply to BoxAx [2009-08-21 21:38:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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theSmartestArtist [2009-08-19 12:00:54 +0000 UTC]

I love it already, i can tell you right now...expect some more fanart from me.

Bro, seriously...you're an ACE storyteller.

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davechisholm In reply to theSmartestArtist [2009-08-20 06:16:03 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks joey!
can't wait to see some fanart!

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MrKinder [2009-08-18 01:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Well.... I'm hooked! I want more!

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davechisholm In reply to MrKinder [2009-08-18 02:58:37 +0000 UTC]



me too!

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project4studios [2009-08-18 00:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Looks great, Dave! Totally different material from you last book. Best of luck.

Justin

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davechisholm In reply to project4studios [2009-08-18 02:58:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks, man!

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tenko72 [2009-08-17 22:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Weird, but I like it. You know how to hook peeps.

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davechisholm In reply to tenko72 [2009-08-17 22:52:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks! i do what i can.

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mistermuck [2009-08-17 18:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Good work, Dave! I am definitely intrigued!

As a critique, I'd say that perhaps the artwork looks a little looser than your usual LGTU standards. Not sure what I think just yet...I do like the grayscale shading in LGTU tho'.

Are you planning on coloring this?

The post-apocalyptic look of the city has got a great feel to it, mang!

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davechisholm In reply to mistermuck [2009-08-17 18:28:16 +0000 UTC]

i'm not going to color it for two reasons:
-coloring takes buttloads of time, which, with grad school and a new marriage, i don't have, especially for an ongoing project.
-when i print this, it will be in black and white, because i can't afford color.

i'm definitely going for a looser look here than with LGTU--also because i'm working much smaller.

thanks, man!

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mistermuck In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-19 05:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Totally gotcha, man!

I dig black and white artwork anyways.

Quite welcome!
I shall continue to read your upcoming adventures.

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davechisholm In reply to mistermuck [2009-08-20 06:23:49 +0000 UTC]

RIGHTEOUS!

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t33n1ckXIII [2009-08-17 16:20:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh great, another one for the wishlist

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davechisholm In reply to t33n1ckXIII [2009-08-17 16:39:37 +0000 UTC]

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cobartblue [2009-08-17 15:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, it has got my attention thus far!

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davechisholm In reply to cobartblue [2009-08-17 16:12:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks, man!

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Phant0msNight [2009-08-17 14:57:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm digging this one, then again, I am always impressed with your artistic style in both plot and environment... I want more!

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davechisholm In reply to Phant0msNight [2009-08-17 15:49:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks, man! you will get more eventually.

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S1h4d0w [2009-08-17 13:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, can't wait for the next few pages.

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davechisholm In reply to S1h4d0w [2009-08-17 15:49:27 +0000 UTC]

me too!

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showe [2009-08-17 12:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic as always. Looking forward to seeing more.

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davechisholm In reply to showe [2009-08-17 15:49:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks, steeeeeve!

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P1pp1N [2009-08-17 07:59:45 +0000 UTC]

hooray and excitement!

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davechisholm In reply to P1pp1N [2009-08-17 15:50:06 +0000 UTC]

hahaha

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glassdrum [2009-08-17 06:26:42 +0000 UTC]

ooh! I think I remember you telling me something about this story during our interview.

So far so awesome.

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davechisholm In reply to glassdrum [2009-08-17 15:50:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks, man! i'm pretty psyched on this.

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Travis-Person [2009-08-17 05:39:55 +0000 UTC]

interesting...

the number 2 on his chest is telling me that there are more like him.

and I'm guessing the antagonist of this story will have a number 1 on his chest.

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davechisholm In reply to Travis-Person [2009-08-17 05:49:58 +0000 UTC]

the antagonist always lies within.
it is self-doubt.

i don't know what i'm saying.

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Travis-Person In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-17 17:57:00 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE SAYING!!!
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okay...

I don't

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jojoseames [2009-08-17 05:36:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm diggin' it so far.

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davechisholm In reply to jojoseames [2009-08-17 05:50:04 +0000 UTC]

why thank you!

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Carolyns-Mewmix [2009-08-17 04:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Interesting!

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davechisholm In reply to Carolyns-Mewmix [2009-08-17 05:50:18 +0000 UTC]

haha i imagine you yelling 'INTERESTING!' and it makes me laugh.

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Carolyns-Mewmix In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-17 07:50:34 +0000 UTC]

haha
and you don't even know what my voice sounds like (yet)!

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davechisholm In reply to Carolyns-Mewmix [2009-08-17 15:52:11 +0000 UTC]

you sound like a mix between clint eastwood an mickey mouse.

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Carolyns-Mewmix In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-17 20:47:56 +0000 UTC]

I find that rather insulting, seeing as I'm female.

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davechisholm In reply to Carolyns-Mewmix [2009-08-17 22:10:46 +0000 UTC]

no, it's not a bad thing.

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cluedog [2009-08-17 03:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Post-apocalyptastic.

Wonderful to see an all-new story, Dave.

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davechisholm In reply to cluedog [2009-08-17 05:50:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks, man! this will be an on-again off-again project that will probably last the rest of my life.

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Morgan-Persimmon [2009-08-17 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Mysterious.

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davechisholm In reply to Morgan-Persimmon [2009-08-17 05:50:48 +0000 UTC]

whoooosh!

haha

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B3NN3TT [2009-08-17 02:33:43 +0000 UTC]

I like the energy of it all; reminds me a lot of THB.

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davechisholm In reply to B3NN3TT [2009-08-17 05:51:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks!
i LOVE THB--i hope that #2's design isn't TOO close to THB's...
he's a completely different character...

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Vueiy-Visarelli [2009-08-17 02:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Darn, you're cool.

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