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Published: 2009-08-16 23:17:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1316; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 24
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here are the first 5 pages to my newest story entitled "MOOKE."this one is fun.
i hope you enjoy it!
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Comments: 83
dragong386 [2009-08-24 22:27:12 +0000 UTC]
aww i likes it, its a classic start and i can't wait to see more ^-^ how'd you come up with the name mooke? also i love that your combining the pages now so its just one long thing, now i don't have to wait for my slow internet in between each page ^^'
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davechisholm In reply to dragong386 [2009-08-25 14:09:33 +0000 UTC]
hm. it's a name that my wife thought sounded good.
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dragong386 In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-25 20:30:20 +0000 UTC]
well she has very good taste it is an awesome name
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BoxAx [2009-08-21 18:25:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Superhero time! Sweet!
And it is really cool too!
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theSmartestArtist [2009-08-19 12:00:54 +0000 UTC]
I love it already, i can tell you right now...expect some more fanart from me.
Bro, seriously...you're an ACE storyteller.
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davechisholm In reply to theSmartestArtist [2009-08-20 06:16:03 +0000 UTC]
haha thanks joey!
can't wait to see some fanart!
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project4studios [2009-08-18 00:13:07 +0000 UTC]
Looks great, Dave! Totally different material from you last book. Best of luck.
Justin
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mistermuck [2009-08-17 18:09:22 +0000 UTC]
Good work, Dave! I am definitely intrigued!
As a critique, I'd say that perhaps the artwork looks a little looser than your usual LGTU standards. Not sure what I think just yet...I do like the grayscale shading in LGTU tho'.
Are you planning on coloring this?
The post-apocalyptic look of the city has got a great feel to it, mang!
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davechisholm In reply to mistermuck [2009-08-17 18:28:16 +0000 UTC]
i'm not going to color it for two reasons:
-coloring takes buttloads of time, which, with grad school and a new marriage, i don't have, especially for an ongoing project.
-when i print this, it will be in black and white, because i can't afford color.
i'm definitely going for a looser look here than with LGTU--also because i'm working much smaller.
thanks, man!
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mistermuck In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-19 05:55:35 +0000 UTC]
Totally gotcha, man!
I dig black and white artwork anyways.
Quite welcome!
I shall continue to read your upcoming adventures.
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Phant0msNight [2009-08-17 14:57:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm digging this one, then again, I am always impressed with your artistic style in both plot and environment... I want more!
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davechisholm In reply to Phant0msNight [2009-08-17 15:49:17 +0000 UTC]
thanks, man! you will get more eventually.
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glassdrum [2009-08-17 06:26:42 +0000 UTC]
ooh! I think I remember you telling me something about this story during our interview.
So far so awesome.
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davechisholm In reply to glassdrum [2009-08-17 15:50:17 +0000 UTC]
thanks, man! i'm pretty psyched on this.
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Travis-Person [2009-08-17 05:39:55 +0000 UTC]
interesting...
the number 2 on his chest is telling me that there are more like him.
and I'm guessing the antagonist of this story will have a number 1 on his chest.
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davechisholm In reply to Travis-Person [2009-08-17 05:49:58 +0000 UTC]
the antagonist always lies within.
it is self-doubt.
i don't know what i'm saying.
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Travis-Person In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-17 17:57:00 +0000 UTC]
I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE SAYING!!!
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okay...
I don't
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davechisholm In reply to Carolyns-Mewmix [2009-08-17 05:50:18 +0000 UTC]
haha i imagine you yelling 'INTERESTING!' and it makes me laugh.
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Carolyns-Mewmix In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-17 07:50:34 +0000 UTC]
haha
and you don't even know what my voice sounds like (yet)!
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davechisholm In reply to Carolyns-Mewmix [2009-08-17 15:52:11 +0000 UTC]
you sound like a mix between clint eastwood an mickey mouse.
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Carolyns-Mewmix In reply to davechisholm [2009-08-17 20:47:56 +0000 UTC]
I find that rather insulting, seeing as I'm female.
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davechisholm In reply to Carolyns-Mewmix [2009-08-17 22:10:46 +0000 UTC]
no, it's not a bad thing.
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cluedog [2009-08-17 03:28:18 +0000 UTC]
Post-apocalyptastic.
Wonderful to see an all-new story, Dave.
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davechisholm In reply to cluedog [2009-08-17 05:50:39 +0000 UTC]
thanks, man! this will be an on-again off-again project that will probably last the rest of my life.
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B3NN3TT [2009-08-17 02:33:43 +0000 UTC]
I like the energy of it all; reminds me a lot of THB.
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davechisholm In reply to B3NN3TT [2009-08-17 05:51:40 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
i LOVE THB--i hope that #2's design isn't TOO close to THB's...
he's a completely different character...
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