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davewrite — the end and beggining
Published: 2010-03-13 22:29:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description I watched as the darkness started to surround me. It started at the windows. Slowly consuming everything near it. Following was the stench of the death that walked the streets. I heard the screams of people outside as chaos rained. Those with hope and resistance died quickly. Only the smell of fear could repel the demons and dead. The sun dimmed with every minute. The shadows no longer transparent but murky and damp with evil. Bright colors were darkened. Electricity stopped. Only the fires outside kept my room lit. After an hour the sun finally gave out. Suddenly the sky was brighten with clouds of fire that replaced clouds of water. This signaled the completion of earth  to  HELL.


A smile crossed my face.
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Comments: 11

Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell [2010-08-10 05:02:12 +0000 UTC]

I checked it out and she's seriously good. She should definitely write what she feels and not worry about being judged. People who judge other people are only trying to hide their own flaws.

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davewrite In reply to Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell [2010-08-10 19:08:05 +0000 UTC]

I know right. she won't listen to me.

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Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell In reply to davewrite [2010-08-11 14:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Psh! I can talk to her if you want...

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davewrite In reply to Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell [2010-08-11 23:47:58 +0000 UTC]

yes please. she thinks I put you up to it.

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Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell In reply to davewrite [2010-08-12 01:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Whatever! She's really talented. and I don't say that about just anyone.

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Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell [2010-08-09 00:09:30 +0000 UTC]

That was an amazing piece, especially the ending. >:]
So dark and devious.
I love it.

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davewrite In reply to Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell [2010-08-09 01:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Ya I have no idea how I was able to do this. [link] she's a great writr but refuses to post anything because shes afraid it will apear dark and she will be jugde.
I love this peice.

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curls13 [2010-08-07 19:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Ooh I like.

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davewrite In reply to curls13 [2010-08-07 21:28:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you ,and thank you for commenting

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xDamagedRose08x [2010-08-06 16:15:47 +0000 UTC]

"The shadows no longer transparent, but murky and damp with evil" I like that line. Very apocalyptic.

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davewrite In reply to xDamagedRose08x [2010-08-06 17:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and thanks for the comment!apocalypic was what I was going for lol

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